SWARON OS **Love or fear? What Controls U the Most?**** - Page 2

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

this was nice yar
I thought it may b sad one BT thank to u its not
it was awesome lil bit hot too
agar swayam ko maar deti to tuze maar dalti main 😆

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Fatima

@HSFA

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Posted: 10 years ago

Pian and mystery was intact very well in the OS.

My fav line was this ..its just beautifully written. You summed up very nicely. 👏 👏

Now I realize, leaving that red-bricked cottage helped me. I had found my destiny, living through these memories was a mystery.

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 10 years ago

lovedd d os in SS version too😊

amazing write-up😊

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Amy

@Amy21

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Posted: 10 years ago

First of all sry sweetie for commenting late :(
This os was amazing
Well penned
Seriously u are written way was awesome
Waiting for more os ss ff from you :)

Edited by abcdghi - 10 years ago

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@Incorrect

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

heyya restless😃

first of all i know i dint comment on ua works

for quite a while u know y

but now m back ill be commenting on them

anytime soon

so keep waiting ma restless

now about the os

a splendid work restless👏

the way u explained sharons nightmares were awesome

the pain and fear was explained very well

the love which reside inside her for swayam was shown very well

swayam is alive and swayams twin😆

but glad dat swayam is alive

loved the way u explained their kiss

all in all a amazing work

love

shini

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

heya diyu

reallynic one

sorrry 4 d late comment

it was really well penned down

sharons emotions were well penned

thank god swayam was alive

thats the power of true love after all

thnx 4 d pm

keep writing

love ya

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srinidhi94

@srinidhi94

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Posted: 10 years ago

diya

this is amazing...

something very unexpected...

this os is so beautifully written...

you are rocking...

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