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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sree_swaron

Prologue sounds iteresting..start it soon..waiting :)

thanks😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan

prologue and cs seem awesome
wud love to read more
both of you have superb writing skills
the title is gud
swayam and sharons unknown untold relation ...
nic concept do continue
best wishes
and dont 4get to pm me guys

athi
thank u soo much
need it😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

Shini I will not leave u

🤢
The prologue is amazing...It sounds really interesting😃

I am excited to read what will happen when they meet and how will the story move...With your and ani's twist :)

Wish all the best to both of you😊

oye meri drama queen
chodne ko bhi kaun keh raha hai😆
n thank u soo much mona
haan twist hi honge
*how better actress am i tera asar*😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: JensenVruShan

Interesting prologue and CS

would love to see how they react to each other, meeting after 15 years
waiting for the update and guys please a long one K 😃
awesome writing Shini and ani

thanks swathi vl try to give long updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preetirox

Hey, I'm late! Sorry about that! And coming to the concept, its interesting! Would love to read further! Its a really good plot!
Update soon! 😊

thank u😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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update is on its way😃
Edited by shiningshannu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

PART 1

swayam was preparing for his night ready to go to his bed in his black tee and grey sweat pants,his eyes fell on the laptop placed on the coffee table, and he felt happy that finally he would go back to india tomorrow and a memory sweat memory flashed by

*FLASHBACK*


A 10 yrs old swayam and rey were walking in the campus of PRINSTINE HIGH SCHOOL...they had landed in London a couple of days backand it was their first day in school...an introvert swayam and a friendly rey somehow managed to make some friends but none were close to them...the only reason they failed to make close friends because their hearts were still with their best friends...


The first day in hostel swayam got an e mail on his desktop...


"hi swayam,

I hope you are fine...i'll miss you...

But promise me that you will study hard and

i'll mail you often...take care of

Yourself and rey..


- Friend"


Swayam was confused to get that mail. He thought either sharon or simmi was playing pranks on him so he replied ...

"I know you are either simmi or sharon

But can't exactly understand who you are...

This id is also unknown to me...

Stop playing pranks and say me who you are

-Swayam"


Swayam had almost forgot about the mail, but he got a reply after some days


"no swayam I won't tell you my name...

I don't think that's necessary ...

Friends does not need any name

It recquire two people...and

Friendship just brings them close

For a moment and forever...

Its all about trust and beyond commitment

So I will not tell you who exactly I am...

-Friend"

Swayam felt happy to read that mail it really had a meaning of true friendship and she was right friendship really need names and replied...

"yes of course...I don't need any

Condition...you can be anyone

Whoever you are , I don't care

About the name...all I care is friendship

And trust...so thanks for talking to me...

-swayam"

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

This is how their friendship started...all these 15 yrs they have shared everything with each other...his friend was always by his side through the ups and downs...but swayam still doesn't know her name...finally he and rey were returning to india...he will finally meet his friend... with this thought he drifted off to sleep.

SAME TIME IN INDIA

simmi had gone for a coffee date with nil...she came to sharon's home from there to find her sleeping...

"uff this girl...knows nothing except flawless sleeping..." simmi made a face and picked up a pillow to hit sharon...

"what happened simmi?????" sharon said in a sleepy voice..

." nil and I had a nice time you know...he is sooo sweet..."simmi said excited

"yeah i know simmi...whats special in that.. if he proposed you that was something interesting..."sharon spoke irritated as simmi spoiled her sleep just to say how sweet nil is

."no yaar...i am just waiting for that day.. but that dumbo is too scared of me!!!!" simmi spoke dreamingly

by hearing this sharon broke out into fist of laughter fully awake now and finally spoke..."I don't blame nil you know..."

As sharon said it she got another smack by simmi..."by the sharon you know what nil told me that swayam and rey are returning tomorrow..." simmi said casually.

"swayam????" sharon's face lit up... just to hear his name, he was saying me that he is going to give me a surprise but this was it. he is returning back. Finally I would meet him after these many years. Just mere thought of swayam returning back gave her butterflies in the stomach. Would he able to recognize me? A sudden question popped inside my little brain.

My chain of thought was broke by simmi "yeah I hope you remember them..."

"of course I do dumbo...we used to have so much fun together remember ..." sharon said happiness clearly visible in her tone.

"yeah...may be they are changed now..." simmi said thoughtfully.

"I don't think so...ohk I'll come right now..." sharon said and went by .

Sharon took her cell phone and opened her mail id and typed a mail to swayam...

NEXT MORNING IN LONDON

Swayam and rey were waiting for their flight both of them too excited to go back home... swayam opened his laptop to check his mail with photon connection...

And found mail new mail popping in his inbox, it was from none other tha his friend...it read

"so that was your surprise...

You are finally shifting to india...

So the fun will begin like old times

Excited to meet you after 15 long yrs

And yeah dude, your test also begins...

Lets see if you can indentify me or not

-Friend"

Swayam smiled and typed a quick reply

"there wont be any need of it dear

I will recognize you just by your one look...

-swayam"

"I am also excited to meet you dear..." swayam thought in his mind... his flight have been announced and he went by.. feeling the excitement all over again.

******************************************************

The flight landed in mumbai and both of them walked out to be greeted by taani who rushed towards them to give a bone crashing hug...

"my bhai is finally back...I am so happy..." she beamed in joy...

Later their family and friends welcomed them...they hugged each one of their friends when nil introduced themselves again...their faces have changed

"this is sharon...she is simmi and this idiot is rinni..." nil introduced...

All of them exchanged a hi...

Swayam was looking at them,he for quite some time was looking at simmi...deep inside he felt that simmi is his friend...he didn't know why but something inside him told him that it should be simmi and no one else...

On the other hand sharon saw swayam looking at simmi and thus she understood that swayam had failed to recognize her...her heart wrenched to see the way swayam looked at simmi it broke her heart into thousands of pieces she looked at swayam with tears welling up in her eyes.

"I should have known that our friendship was never so strong ..." sharon thought and walked away not able to stay there for a single minute more.

thank you all for liking and commenting on the prologue continue giving your support

here is the first chapter do like and comment.

for pms add mine or anis account to your buddy list

thank u


love

ani and shini

Edited by shiningshannu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
heyyy😉

me sooo muchhh happpy bcoz i am the first😆

heyyy girls...😉

me love u both so muchhh😉

it was as expected wonder ful👏

i loved the full email part it was so lovely👏

the start was nice, that is swayam's introduction part

i loved all emails that swayam and sharon send for eachother😆

the thoughts sharon has about friendship was tooo good👏

as like swayam's i loved sharon's intro too😊

that was quite funny😆

loved the bond between simmi and sharon😛

sharons's reaction when simmi told abt swayam was sooo cute😆😆😆

like my shini and aniii😉

sharon's excitement made me also excited for their meet😆

i liked swayam confidence to recognize his friend😉

but, story he tho twist is quite natural,😆

the airport thing was made me mad,,,,,,😆

tanni's excitement when she saw her bro was nice,,😊

but im not sure it was 4 swayam ya 4 rey😉

the whole friends was nice😃

hmmm now

me angry on both of u shini 😡and ani😡

how dare u to make swayam avoid sharon😡

he was looking at simmi😡

me become so sad and emotional at the end😭

i know this is what going to happen😭

but u both always made me sad at the end 😭

me sooo hate uuu both a big POUT😆

the last part 😭 u made my sharon cry na😭

it was so emotional...😭

so now im not in a mood to write more,so im stoping here😆

do continue soon😆

and update soon😆

me waiting😆

and after update u both wait 4 my crazzycmt😆

once again

i loved the whole part👏

and i love u both😉

so

with lots of love

keechu
















Edited by keechu91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Amazing update...as expected swayam dont knw the right girl..
Update soon...

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