KR FF 'Forever... Jabtak Saans hai' part 7 on pg 12 - Page 2

luvd d concept & d first part...
both were awesome...
luvd d story...

wonderful concept...

Awesome beginning...

loved it...

continue soon... :)

It's awesome! New concept
Liked the way story is building up
Love to read more. Update soon 😉

fabulous concept 😊
starting is awesome...
it's a very interesting ff...
loved it 😳
do continue soon..

interesting concept

Awesomeness

Amazing...

Part 2: Intazaar karunga, Jab tak Saans Hai...

Next morning Kriyaansh were in Dining Table when the bell ringed. Servant opened the door and they were just surprised to see their friends. They came to know that they wre supposed to give surprise on the anniversary but their flight was delayed. They came in and got freshened up. After sometime they went on gossiping. Simmi got all the girls in one room and thre, nilesh got all the boys in another.

Sharon: Kriya, come on, start.

Kriya: but what?

Simmi: are, tumhari love story buddhhu. Isliye toh meeting bulai hai.

Kriya: par...

Rinni: par var kuch nahi... Chalo start karo.

Kriya:thik hai. Start se start kar ti hun. Jab maine unhe pehli baar dekha tha. Main school me corridor par walk kar rahi thi, aur achanak, kisine ne mujhe ghuma kar niche gira diya. aur mere upar aa gaya. I was, lost in his eyes. And suddenly, apne skul ka bada sa bell gir gaya. Then I realized, usne mujhe bacha liya warna main toh bell k niche hi aa jaati. Main uski aankhon me kho gayi, dil me butterfly waali feeling ho rahi thi. I crushed on him. My first attraction, my first crush!

Boys

Rey: Bell gira, toh pure school mw panic fail gaya. Sab yahan wahan bhag rahe the. Lekin main, I not just only fell upon her, but also fell for her. Fell in her love. Par isse pehle ki koi hume kuchal de, we got up. Lekin bhag daud me, hum bichad gaye. Edhar udhar ankh ghumayi... then u know what? Then happened the most beautiful moment of my life, jab wo mujhe dikhi, she was too looking at me! Affairs toh bahut hue, par pyar, pyar shayad pehli baar hua tha. My first feeling, my first love!

Then he looked at guys, they were looking at him keeping their hand on their cheeks.

Rey: Guys, tum log mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho?

Nil: itna pyar karta hai tu usse?

Rey: mm.. sayad.

Vicky: aur bata, Shaadi k baad sab thik...

Rey: kuch b thik nahi hua hai Vicky, main aaj b uske intazaar main hoon. Paas rehkar b aaj b hum door hain.

Swayam: u mean Kriya abtak tujhse naraaz hai?

Rey: Haan.

Swayam: kyun zee raha hai aisi zindagi? Kyun nahi kar deta use iss rishte se aazaad?

Rey: Nahi kar sakta. Mere uss ek decision ne sabkuch barbaad kar diya, Kriya ne padhai chod di, Shaadi ki, aur apna desh chodkar yahan aa gayi, London, sirf mere liye, just coz, I m her husband. Aur upar se, uske mom dad b nahi rahe, jayegi kahan? Issliye main chahkar b use nahi kar sakta aazaad!

Swayam: Kab tak intazaar karega Rey?

Rey: Forever, jab tak saans hai!!!!

m little busy in studies, but got how much ui could. hope u all like it.

love,

Shirisha😊

nyc part..:)

I just love this ff...

superb update..

loved it...