Secrets Beneath Palaces| KR FF | Chapter 7- Pg 20 | - Page 13

Amazing update...loved it..

Lovely update...

update soon

and do PM me...

Okay so maine bohot bada comment likha tha bt woh udd gaya :'(

Originally posted by: -Baatcutter-

Okay so maine bohot bada comment likha tha bt woh udd gaya :'(

bt koi nai again likho

So finally u updated

Well even me bhi is ff ko bhul gai thi

N as I said apki hindi bohot acchi hai so I took few mins to revise wat exactly it means ;)

I think yeh aisa pehala ff hai

jaha hum readers ko ek sath 2 itni interesting story read karne milti hai

All thankz to u

Bt dis is nt fair

Pehale itna late update upar se yeh cliffhangers woh bhi dono jagah

Reyaansh ne kriyal se shaadi kar li :O

N poor rey

Kriya ko uske suit se zaada apni curd dip ki padi hai :p

N den ushe washroom me band kar diya :p

bt den dono jagah stop kar diya

Interesting point pe :-( :'(

Ab jaldi jaldi update karna

-Radz

This was so beautifulll loved it totaly
do write nxt prt asap
love it
thanx for the pm

i didnt like the update

Interesting part. Past and present both are amazing.

Originally posted by: ..Evanescent..

😆

Kya kare writers ki khaasiyat hi hoti hai sab readers ko cliffhangers dena

Maine bhi bahut jhela hai 😉

And thank you so much for such a long comment!

Your comment always brings a smile to my face 😃

And jaha tak meri hindi ka sawaal hai,

ab woh toh bas yu hi 😳

Mazak kar rahi hu, meri hindi kuch zyaada khaas nahi hai 😆

and ab jaise hi time milega update karungi

Promise! :)

hey buddy...
long time
but amazing update
u describe the story in past and present at the same time so well
rey and kriya...
handsome rey...
cute kriya...
kriyal and reyansh...
amazing
but do update soon

awesome update

dont forget to pm me the nxt update