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shelly_Arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww this was soo cutee!!
the ending was beautiful!
How she avoided him but he followed her and too her for dinner and then finally
asked her out! A great piece of work <3

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Aditi M.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey girl...I really loved the story...

U are such an amazing writer...

M not saying for the heck of it...buh seriously its an ausome writing...lovely...

Kriyas annoyance...her ignorance towards Rey...

Reys adamant nature to go back to Kriya...

I loved specially the way U wrote in brackets...her inner feelings...ausome...

Rey seriously climbed the bus coz Kriya was there...I soo knew it...when he said isnt that obvious...

Such a lovely n cute ending...

Sorrryyy couldnt comment on each part individually soo a combined comment...

Write more girl...U are soo good at it...

Love Aditi...

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krarshanaval

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Posted: 11 years ago

THIS WAS WONDERFUL AND PERFECT ENDING... LOVED IT

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trishika rajput

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Posted: 11 years ago

Fabulous concept

Really loved the story

They both liked each other

And Rey confessed it

He always helped her, cheer her, took her to lunch

so sweet

Really loved it

Thanks for pm

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darshita

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Posted: 11 years ago

this was fabulous and perfect awesome ending ... loved it

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mir_mishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome.. awesome.. awesome..

loved itt..

desk stealer stole heart too..😉

& this story won my heart. Oh cheesy line..😛😆

beautiful ending loved it totally..😃

keep writing.😊

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Sunaina

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow that was really amazing...

The ending was so cute n beautiful...

U write awesome...

Waiting for more :)!!!!!!!!!!

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