Friendship Ka Complicated Status (Arsha Story part 1 page 5) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Neha!! 😡
aisa teaser koi deta hai kya?!


update first, phir comment karungi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
hey thanks for the pm,neha and simran!!!! loved the prologue,hmm arshaaa are always the bestt!!!!!! waitng for chappy 1 to arrive soon!!!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
hey guys!!!
here is the update and this is a special dedication to...!!!
see you after this post!!!

part 1

Today, they were taking vows to be with each other for eternity, to share their happiness and sorrows with each other, to hold each other's hands forever on the path of life to make it more beautiful. he did the same in the mandap of their marriage. he interwined his fingers with hers and took seven holy vows of marriage with her.
They got lost in the past memories and they remembered that day when they decided to spend their whole life together.
*flashback*
Shakti: I want to fill your life with full of fun and happiness
Kunwar: You are my happiness
...
Kunwar: I won't ever let your tears come out of your beautiful orbs
Shakti: you know what having you by my side is like my life is heaven
...
Kunwar:will you be with me?
Shakti: humesha and forever
*flashback over*
He tied mangalsutra around her neck and filled her partline with vermillion, while she closed her eyes taking in the moment. At that time, She had a strange feeling in her heart which she can't even describe what it was. They took blessings of elders and completed all rituals. Before bidayi, mukti and neeti wanted to talk to shakti personally, so they went in a vacant room upstairs.
In room,
The trio hugged each other tightly and aftef sometime they broke the hug
Mukti: tu ja rahi hai cheeku?
Shakti: *cupping her face* jana toh nahi hai meri golu ko chodke but kya karu?
Mukti: tussi na jao
and she hugged shakti again
Shakti:di isko samjhao na ese roye nahi mujhe bhi rula rahi hai
Neeti: ok kaam kar isko dahej me leke ja
Mukti: nahi phir ye madam sara kaam mujhse hi karayegi
Shakti: ab toh tujhe leke hi jaungi
Three of them spent a little time laughing and having fun with each other. Suddenly, Mukti became silent.
Shakti:abhi kya hua tujhe?
Mukti: cheeku are you sure tu khush hai iss shaadi se?
Shakti:ofcourse ab main humesha kunwar ke sath hi rahungi
Neeti: humari families and friends ne tum dono ko samjhaya tha ki think before u make any decision. Ye puri life ka sawaal hai
Mukti: I hope you both don't regret on your decision
Shakti:humne soch-samajke hi ye decision liya hai, main aur kunwar ek-dusre ke sath life spend karna chahte hai. We need each other because we...we...
Mukti and Neeti smiled and now they were sure that ArSha will be happy with each other forever.
Mukti&Neeti: we care for each other right?
Shakti:ah...haan(wondering why mukti and neeti asked all this to shakti? you'll get to know very soon)
Now it was time for bidayi and it was hard for her to leave. She cried a lot hugging her mom. Then her sisters gave her bone crushing hug to which she complained-" marna hai kya?" and they giggled. On the way in car, she rested her head on his shoulder and he placed his arm around her waist. After completing some rituals , they finally got into their room fully exhausted. Kunwar's cousins teased them a lot and to tease them more , they were listening to their convo
Shakti:*stammering* kun...kunwar...kya tum...
Kunwar: haan karta hun
Shakti: dheere se haan please
Kunwar:tum ye sab pehnti hi kyun ho? jaldi se nikal hi nahi raha
Shakti: oh hello meri shaadi hai main jo bhi pehnu tumhe kya?
Kunwar: nikalna mujhe pad raha hai na
Shakti: karna hai toh karo varna bhaad me jao
Kunwar: ab tum chup rahogi toh main karu?
Galat time pe bohot bolti ho tum
Shakti: apna kaam karo
Kunwar:vahi toh kar raha hu
Shakti:universeji dekho na ye ladka mele sath ladai hi karta rehta hai*she said this line like a cute and innocent kid*
He smiled at her innocence
Shakti:Kunwar chodo na ye kya kar rahe ho hahaha...please chodo mujhe ticklish feel ho raha hai
Kunwar:kuch der pehle emotional ho gayi ab naughty ban gayi
Shakti:teri vajah se, tere sath hi aisi harkatein karti hu, shaadi ke pehle bhi aur abhi bhi
Kunwar-ooo...ab tu gayi mohan
Shakti-no , please...
Kunwar-aise kaise chod du?
and again cousins heard their giggles.
one of them said-omg shaadi se pehle bhi bhai-bhabhi ye sab karte the
Shakti:please bohot ho gaya ye gudgudi ka game, ab ye nikalke dena, so i get rid of this heavy clothes
Kunwar:ohk nikal deta hu
He started his work*wink emoticon*
Cousins were like-they are so naughty man!
Again they heard ArSha's voice
Shakti-Kunwar...jaldi karo na mujhe bohot pain ho raha hai
Kunwar:jaldi karunga toh aur pain hoga wait
Shakti: aur kitni der? I'm feeling tired
Kunwar:I'm also tired but kar raha hu na? keep quiet
Shakti: huh...tumhare liye kehna aasan hai keep quiet but pain mujhe ho raha hai na
Kunwar:bakbak karne me energy waste mat kar aur jyada thak jayegi
Shakti:kunwar...*she cried in pain*ahh...kunwar you ard hurting me
Kunwar: thoda toh dard hoga na
Shakti: isliye hi bola jaldi karo
Kunwar:ese kaam dheere-dheere hi karne chahiye
Shakti:but i want you to do it fast please
Kunwar:fast chahiye ye lo
Shakti:ahh...kunwar i'll kill u
Shakti started hitting kunwar who was helping her in removing the brotch which shd was wearing on her blouss. She by herself tried to remove it but she ended up hurting herself bu pin of the brotch
Kunwar:ooch...shukdi yahan main tefi help kar raha hu aur tu..ooch ahh..
Shakti:toh jaldi nikalo na ye brotch ese tang mat karo
Cousins were like-abhi tak brotch nikal rahe hai romance kya ganta karenge!!
one of them-bhabhi sahi keh rahi hai bhai is too slow
Kunwar and Shakti opened the door as theu heard some voices. As they opened the door cousins became nervous as they knew that now they are in trouble
Kunwar:yahan kya kar rahe ho?
C1:kuch nahi him toh bas ghar me ese hi ghum rahe the
Kunwar:itni raat ko ghumte hai? vo bhi ghar me? chalo jao so jao
C2:aap dono bhi jaag rahe ho, aap dono jo kat rahe the andar uska kya?
Shakti:matlab?
C3:ab baniye mat
Kunwar:guys hume kuch samaj nahi aa raha and u should go and sleep
C4:aap kyun jag rahe hai abhi tak? jaiye aap bhi so jao bhai
C1:samjha karo aaj inki suhaagraat hai
C2:aur suhaagraat pe bhi koi sota hai kya?
cousins HiFied and laughed. ArSha blushed on their comment.
Kunwar:ab bakwas band karo aur jao
C3:sorry humne aapko disturb kar diya aapke URGENT kaam me
C4:bhabhi kal subah mujhe sab kuch janna hai ohk
Cousins went to their respective rooms. Kunwar locked the door and turned towards her. Their feet kept on moving towards each other and they stood close to each other. He leaned in and she closed her eyes.

Precap:
Shakti: meri neend kharab karke khud so raha hai,abhi maza chakhati hu
...
THUD
he fell off from bed
...
THUD
he again fell off from bed
...
Kunwar:kon hai ye? shukdi toh so rahi hai
She surpressed her laugh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
this chapter is a special dedication to our birthday girl!!!
my kamo and nehu's sweetypie!!!
ABHILASHA!!!

kamo this chapter credits completely goes to nehu!!!
and i am sure tereko bahut maza aaya hoga read karne mein!!

waiting for your review!!!!

guys!! i hope everyone liked it!!
please give your feedbacks!!!
thank you!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Omggg 😃
This is awesome 😳
i loved it
sooo much
Arsha ki shaadi 😲
Suspence 😉

not bad
Nd thir convo in bed room Rolf
🤣 🤣
Ayse Bolenge toh 🤣 xd
seriously beautifully writen
Awesome start Both of u
Love that
next update jallddiii pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
intresting

very very intresting😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Hey!
Dis is awesome!!!
Lol!!
Arsha kar ku6 aur rahe the n d cousins ka mind side track hoke polluted area mein chala gaya tha!! 😆
N precap is fab!!!
Nok-jhoks!!! Yaaay!
Continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
so they have just got married and ha ha wow thier cousin are stupid interference in between
and some how made them away... and the precap amazing...
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
👏👏👏 Yaayyy.. 1st of all ArSha storyy 😃😃
I sooo badly wnated sum1 2 write sumtin lyk dis..
ArSha marriage.. God.. Hope dis happens in real.. 😳😳
Its awesum.. D way u hve written.. Its exactly d way ArSha behaves.. Do continue.. Amazing work.. 👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Neha how old are u?
anyways the update was interesting...waiting for the story to unfold...

the precap seems funny...😆

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