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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Amazing jaan
Great job
loved it
u stole my idea pout
loved it

P.s. me still angry wid u

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Well written.dear...some moments were really nice n.i absoulately loved it...u wrote it rrally well...great job..

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Nicely written mansi. I liked the part where swayam confronted sharon and asked about her anger, they solved it and then preparing dinner together was very sweet.
Thanks for the scrap :)
Lovely OS.

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

RES 😃

UNRES

A very cute and adorable piece of writing..

The small small moments that you caught brought that tingling feeling in the stomach

It was a treat to read a possessive Sharon.. Something I wouldn't mind watching on screen.. Alas!!

I'm glad no misunderstandings here as our biggest fear is to have one in the show

Well IF is the place where we actually get to read a different version of each scene or situation and your OS did no less..

Hope to read more from you soon dear

Keep up the great work

P.S Thanks for the PM and the scrap 😃

Edited by Tan.vish.K - 11 years ago

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Khizar Ali

@Khizar_SWARON

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Sorry for late reply and thanks for the pm

Needed to read something like that after seeing all this boring crap and drama in the show from CVS!

Great OS keep writing more and make us happy with your writing skills and imagination :) 👍🏼

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Amy

@Amy21

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Awesome os mansi..doing a great job^_^
Great gng keep it up..:)
Do write more on swaron
Sry fr the late comment:(

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

it was a nice os mansi

i hav seen u grow wit every story u write

the swaron kitchen scene was romantic

i really love jealous sharon

tis is her best avatar

the small swaron convo regarding huma was hilarious

n the scene in the end was beautifully penned

do write more mansi 🤗

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

A beautifully carved OS.

Loved the way you kept it simple and sweet. 👏

Edited by HSFA - 10 years ago

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Shikha

@ShikhaAgrawal

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Hey mansi good and luv possesive sharon

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