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"Yes!Whooo!I won!"Swayam started jumping on the bed after winning his favourite game Road Rash' for the tenth time in the past one and a half hour.
The coke cans were kissing the floor of the bedroom,pillows were on the ground because of Swayam's mercy Half eaten chips packet were lying on the bed through which some were already out of the packet and were dancing due to Swayam's hip hop on the bed.
Sharon!see!I won again!'I told you I am the best at it.
"Yipeee!"He said to Sharon still jumping.
Sharon looked at her bedroom which looked more like a Beast's l.iving room right now.She glarted at him with deadly eyes.
She switched off her royal plasmaTV and looked at her hubby's antics which surely didn't please her at the moment.
Swayam overcome his share of excitement as the room became became silent suddenly with no sounds of bikes and all.
He saw his angel who looked more like a devil to him as she was fuming with anger.Sharon glanced at room and he followed followed hrer gaze and then it dawned upon him that he was dead today.He immideately came down to her and smiled sheepishly at her.
"What the hell is wrong with you Swayam?What have you done to my room?"She yelled at the top of her voice.
"Siren Sharon ON"Swayam mumbled to himself in nervousness.
"What?"
Ummm. . .actually. . .actually. . . he tried to come up with some excuse so that he can calm her down but nothing came to his mind.
"You cant have your Playstation for the next ten days.Sharon announced and Swayam went into Shock mode.He could have survived without food for the next ten days but without his Playstation. . . .
"Oh My God!Sahron please!please don't do it!You know Its impossible for me!"
"I know baby!But after this I cant allow you to ruin my beautiful bedroom everyday"She said futtering her eyes and pointing at her bedroom.
"But Shar. . .okay if I clean this mess you will take back your decision please?"Hje pleaded.
"Maybe.. .I am going to kriya's home.She needs some help in Rey's b'day party arrangements. . .By the time I come back I want everything to be P-E-R-F-C-T"Sharon smirked.She pulled his cheeks and went out of the room.
Swayam huffed and glanced at the room.It was a complete fuss.He got tired only by looking at the room let alone clean it. . .But his Playstation was at stake.So he immidately started working.
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Sharon opened the door with her spare key and without wastg a second entered her home with a worried expression on her face.She has been continuosinly ringing the doorbell but Swayam was not opening the door so she got really scared.She entered her bedroom to see Swayam sleeping on the floor with a duster in his hand.Her heart melted looking at him.She felt guilty for torturtng him like that.She went upto him and sat on her knees.She caressed his face removing his hairs from his forhead and kissed him to which he immidiately opened his eyes waking up.
"Sharon?You?You here?When did you come?"Swayam said gathering himself from his sleep.
"I got scared Swayam. . .you were not opening the door . . .Let it be. . .I just came home."
"Oh!I am sorry I didn't realize when I fell asleep"
"No Swayam I am Sorry!I should have understand that you are not used to all these work. . .I am sorry"
"No Sharon. . .After doing this I now realize what kind of a uphill struggle it is to keep a home that beautiful the way you keep it."Swayam said cupping Sharon's face in his hands.
Sharon smiled and hugged him tightly.
"I love you Swayam"
"I Love You too Sharon"
"You must be tired na?Let me arrange dinner for you"
"I will help you"Swayam said excitedly.
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Sharon was making the curry and was cutting the veggies and Swayam was very sincerely helping' her by nuzzling his nose in her hairs and placing wet kisses on her bare back above her off shoulder top.Sharon was loosing her control with the physical proximity and Swayam's actions were just making her go weak on her knees.
"Swayam please. . ."She said softly.
"I am hungry sharon"Swayam huskily said in her ears.
He turned her in his arms and placed his lips on her trembeling one and kissed her passionately.He made her sit on the slab and stood between her legs kissing all over her neck and shoulders.She lost her senses and opened all the buttons of his shirt pulling it half way down and kissed him crazily on his chest. . .Both were craving for each other.They were lost in each other when they smelled something burning.Both jerked apart.
"Omg!!!!Shit Swayam. Curry!!!!"Sharon immidiately took it off the burner and let it cool in the sink.
"Now?The whole curry got wasted!What about the dinner?"Sharon said frowning with a pout on her face.
He looked at her.Her hairs messed up,her plushed lips,Her dress threatening to fall off place anytime. . .he moved towards her slowly.
"Would you like to have some chocolates tonight?"Swayam asked pulling her dangerously close to himself.
Sharon looked down totally flushed.Her cheeks radiating heat.Swayam smirked looking at her reaction and took her in his arms to their bedroom and the two beautiful souls made love to each other all night.
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LATER IN THE NIGHT
"If this the outcome of messing with our bedroom then I really think I should do it everyday''Swayam said winking at Sharon to which she hit him playfully.
"You won't be this lucky always but for the moment I think I can leave you''Sharon said and sealed her lips with his leaving stars be the only witness of their love.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really nice one chitra... swayam nd his love for playstation...oh God... lovely thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice n kinda hot os
👏 isse jyada nhi bol skti
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wat a piece of work gal
i loved it to the core
very few writers can do wat u just did buddy
putting passion in a page is not an easy task
passion has to be something tangible, electric, contagious.
I believe that kind of passion comes
through the best n
u did every justification to tis saying
I loved the transformation that
happened wen sharon entered the room
she was in her siren mode
but wen she saw him her eyes
reflected care for him
tat's wat love is all about
its about a feeling , a need to express
wen our actions fail us
only a slight care for the partner
is enuf to make the ambience romantic
the small fight in the begining was hilarious n super cute
super happy after reading tis os
keep them coming chitra 🤗

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesone os chitra...luvd it alot...
keep writing girl...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing wrk dear...u wrote it so well.jstifying bth swayam n sharon...sharons love was portrayed in a very good way n swayam too...loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its just the name in this os, that is messy... the os is cute and the way you wrote it is perfect...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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heyya
loved the os
it was amazing
keep writing

love
shini
Edited by shalomshini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Perfect OS
I loved the part where Swayam pleaded to let him play his Play Station
it felt like a mother and son scene where Sharon is grounding him 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written.
I loved the crazy Swayam 😆 he was going nuts after winning the game.
It was surely a messy romance.
Thanks for the pm :)

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