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UndefinedBeauty

@UndefinedBeauty

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss

Merida..🤗
thanks a lot re..😳
am glad you found it realistic..well bike race mein i thought it would be more romantic if neither won 😛
thanks again for the lovely comment :D

Welcome...😃
Isiliye I liked that you made it a tie. ⭐️

I hope we get the bike race soon. Your OS made me more impatient for it.

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

kya baat hai nishi

u always cum up wit a refreshening concept

i really loved the begining whr swayam is completely lost wen he sees sharon's wallpaper it was so swayamish 😳

his fear n anger after the prank was very well written

poor swayam had to pay back wat sharon did to him

n the bike race wat can i say abt tat it was really sweet

how they kept slowing down for each other

so tat neither of them loses

all in all a very well formed pleasing read 🤗

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kapoormenka

@kapoormenka

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Oh wow what a beautiful OS. Sharon is so naughty bechare swayam ki jaan nikal di finally their bike race is done. Loved write more.

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Ayushi or Aisha

@AyushiSinghania

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Res for reading.

P. S. The title is ❤️

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

It was amazing. Such amazing story. Truly enjoyed it.
Happy birthday Tanvish.

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Bike race. Wow! Thats a beautiful thought. The way you penned especially.

Ever since the start I knew it was Sharon. Who else can think of messing up with Swayam. 😆

I thoroughly enjoyed this read.

I had partially read this on Tanvish's birthday thread. But hadnt fully read it due to lack of time. I had marked to read that but finally I did. And Iam short of words to describe the sheer awesomeness you have presented.

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

nice OS👏

loved it😊

wish this could happen in d3 😔

do write more n more😃

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farryy...

@farryy...

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Jerry🤗

Sry fr the late comment dear😳

The OS is just FAB...👏

Loved the way how sharon planned on scarin swayam nd callin him 2 d location

It was really out of the box...

Nd dyr bike race was wonderfully written...

So like swayam and sharon to let the other one win...😳

Nd last mei the maggilicious date😳

Loved the OS...

Keep writin more

Edited by Farheen_vrushan - 11 years ago

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

beautiful os

loved the begining.. it was so swayamish😳

bike race was wonderfully written.. I hope we get the bike race soon

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Again wonderful job here..I liked ur imagination to make a wishlist n to add such a cool concept of bike race..All the circumstances u made around swaron was interesting to read..His fear n his anger including the prank was amazingly written,i enjoyed and at last bike race part was sweet..Well done..

Thanx for the PM