~Live For.....Me~ KR TS Pt2/Pg4 [c] - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
awesome story
i love it a lot


do update the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
my god rey meet with an accident but is no more... omg
the gang and thier parents are shocked to see her this ways...
and are try to figure out what actual is happening...
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
it was soo emotionall but u described their emotions beautifully,it was such a pain to see kriyansh like this!!!!! the update was beautiful!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
will unres it after I read the full story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
So emotional 😭 rone ka mnn kr rha pad kr
Update nxt prt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Amazing update...
So emotional loved it...
Update soon next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dnt knw y the post is nt getting updated from this a/c so posting it by my another a/c
Edited by LuvAly_KriYansh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Wow
Amazing concept
Emotional storyline but beautiful
Can't wait for the next part
Please PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Last Part



~~ Some times You might be just a person for the world but for Someone You might be there Whole World ~~

After sometime kr was sitting @ the window n was thinking what happened in the room that lead her to come out of her shell n also that smile behind which her heart was breaking every sec

Kr was sitting in the corner n was holding the gift given by rey saying that it was u n me together forever

Kr: u broke ur promise rey.apne kaha tha aap mere saath doge humesha... hum humesha saath rehenge tho beach main kyu chod diyakyu.. chod diya yaha yehse jaha main na jee sakti hu aur na hi mar sakti hu..i hate u rey...I hate u

Kria felt a hand caressing her head which made her shiver, she knew this touch..it was the same touch which she have always carved for...it was her rey n next moment her heart skipped a beat she heard him..she actually heard her rey..her head shot up n what she saw made her world stop

R:Kria

Kr..R..e...y

She hugged him

Rey: ya baatcutter...hayee abhi tho hate u keh rahi thi aur abhi hug kar rahi ho

Kr: hate tho main ab bhi karti how dare u leave me...how dare u mr singhania she said hugging him more tightly when rey gave a helpless smile while a lone tear rolled down his eyes..

Rey:main tumhe kabhi chod bhi nahi sakta chahu bhi tho nahi...dil se dil ka rishta tut nahi sakta...jab bhi mujhe yaad karoge apne saath pavogi

Kr: tho reh javo na mere saath...mujhe tumahre zarurat har waqt hai..har pal..har sec...

Rey:ruk sakta tho jata kyu??he asked breaking the hug

Kr:tho mujhe saath le chalo..tumhare bina jeena impossible hai..even death seems more beautiful then this living hell

Rey:kria took her in tight hug n closed his eyes both were having tears..pyaar main ek dusre ke liye marna assan hai par apne pyaar ke liye jeena muskil aur tumhe yahi karna hai..tumhe mereliye jeena hai..tumhe hum dono ki zindagi jeeni hai...humare parents ka khayal rakhna hai n rahi baat merit ho main tumhare paas nahi tho kya tumhare saath tho huna humesha...har pal..har sec...

Kr:rey but...i can't

Rey:u can n u have too...

Kr:rey apki jagah main hoti tho aap reh pate mere bagair...

Rey:KRIA

Kr:chillao mat...muskil se tho milsakti hu aapse aur aap ho ki

Rey:kya karu baatein yehsi karti hu

Kr:sach hai rey

Rey:stop it orelse main jar aha hu

Kr:chod kar jana chahte hona jao..waise bhi aapko kaunsi meri zaroorat hai

Rey:kr tumhe andaaza bhi nahi hai ki mujhe tumhare kitni zarurat hai...tum jo feel kar rahi hu woh main bhi feel kar raha hu par hum kuch kar bhi tho nahi sakte...

Kr:rey hum...

Rey:ssh..kria kya humhara pyaar itna kamzoor hai ki paas na rehne se kam ho jayega..bolo kria...mere jate waqt bhi maine tujhse move on hone ka promise nahi liye kyuki main janta hu ki woh kabhi nahi ho sakta...agar move on hona hota tho woh 2 saal jab hum dur the tab dono move on ho sakte the but nahi huye isiliye nahi ki koi mila nahi balki isiliye ki ek dusre se pyaar karne se fursat hi nahi mili..kria kya un do saalo main tumne laga tha ki hum phir milenge ek honge?nahi na phir bhi hum je rahe the na ek dusre ke liye ...tumhe aaj bhi wahi kar na hai tumhe jeena hai mereliye aur is bar tho main tumhare saath hi hu humesha..tum mujhe yaad karo use pehle tumhara rey tumhara haath tamhe tumhare saath kadha rahega..baatcutter I swear meri zindagi se bahot sare umeedein thi bahot sare dreams dekhe the par sab tut gaye.. nahi je sakha unhe ab tumhe woh sab jeena hai humareliye...hum jeeyenge main jeeyunga tumhare zariye...Live For ME Baatcutter

Kr looked into his eyes which had ocean of love for her that don't know how gave a new hope to kria not to live her life but their life..she nw knew that her rey is with her may be not physically but emotionally forever now she is gonna live all their dreams she is gonna do all the duties of both rey n kria n fulfill every dream of rey n fill the space of rey in both their friends n parents heart n this determination brought a small smile on kr face that made rey smile wide..he knew that his baatcutter got what he wanted to say now the new saga of luv is gonna start...

Kria understood that their luv is beyond breathe n they ll luv each other forever no matter what with that she hugged rey n promised to do all what he wanted in return asked him to stay with her forever...

When kr was thinking all this sh came n sat beside her but kr was so lost that she didn't even felt her presence

Sh:kr!!

Kr:hey sh.sorry woh main kuch soch rahi thi

Sh: jan sakti hu kya soch rahi thi??

Kr:arre nothing chod na

Sh:kr..i m very happy to see you smile..even thou it's a small one...i missed you kr

Kr: I missed you too...

Sh:kr...shall I ask you something?

Kr:tu itna kyu soch rahi hai bolna

Sh: kr have u though anything

Kr:abt??

Sh:hmm..abt..ur future..i mean about moving on u knw u can't just live like this forever

Kr: Y Can't I Sh

Sh:kr..u knw u can't..u need some1 who would be there for u forever...

Kr:Rey is always there for me sh forever..

Sh:kr tu samaj nahi rahi..jeene ke liye sirf yaadein kafi nahi hai

Kr:jeene ke liye zinda hona bhi zaruri hai sh

Sh:Kr...tujhe nahi lagta ki tu yeh deserve nahi karti...even u need to be happy.u have your life kr.i have lost rey n I don't wanna lose u too...

Kr:stupid..come here..n took her in a tight hug n sh mera rey humesha mere saath hai paas nahi hai tho kya huva saath tho humesha rahega na n sh uske saath bethaya huye un sare lamho main maine apni zindagi jili hai..ab tho main humari zindagi jee rahi hu..humara sapna pura karne..i m just living for him, for u guys aur jaha tak baat move on karne ki hai tho sh rey se pyaar karne se time milega tabhi tho koi aur dikhega..so leave tht thought n before she could say anything her cell ringed showing a msg seeing that kr had a huge smile leave that sh n now wish me luck..humara sapna pura karne ja rahi hu

Sh:matlab??

Kr: u'll come to knw soon

Flash back ends

That was the day she took the first step towards the completion of their dream..day n ni8 she worked so hard to achieve what she had today. it felt as if the only reason for her life is to achieve it..finally jo sapna unhone khuli aankhon se dekha tha aaj woh sach banker unke ankho ke samne kadha hai..

Finally the day has arrived when their dreams turned into reality. start of their academy that to with the bang...Unka khud ka dance academy ka sapna pura hogaya...today she is so happy @the same time in a horrible pain, happiness of fulfilling the dream of her luv their dream but also the pain of not having him as a part of it but whom r v kidding he is ri8 beside her watching her n having a proud smile.. he was about to go to her when the manager of their academy came to her

Mn: mam..Finally the day is here..aaj apka sapna sach hone wala hai your hard work paid off

For which Kr just smile

Mn:mam here are some papers plz sign them n uske baad ur performance is there

Kr took the papers n signed them as Kria...Kria Reyaansh Singhania

@ the same time announcement for her dance was done so she left the papers there only n left for stage...

While Rey came n saw those papers n a lone tear escaped his eyes..he kissed his fingers n then caressed the sign as if kissing it..they had so many dreams which remained dreams only but still...he was proud of his baatcutter who stood for their luv.. who smiled for the world but lived for her Rey ,swallowing all her pains ...

Rey:All The Best Baatcutter..Luv u

Kria performance on this song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L1bovHfz5Lo ( sorry cant explain the steps lamba ho jayega)

After performance n thanking every1 she came down n all congratulated her for her success n later she excused herself n went to the terrace n stood looking at the sky while the gang was handling everything .she was so glad that she had such type of friends who always stood for each other...

Kr: Rey finally humari academy start hogayi.."Ray Dance Academy"...this academy will bring the ray of hope n happiness in many lives..just like u did for me.u brought the ray of happiness in my life..tumne mujhe jeene ki wajah di rey aur ye academy mere tarah hazaro zindagi main jeene ki umeed layegi ..I Luv U Rey

Suddenly she felt some1 hugging her from behind npair of hands encircling her waist feeling the touch she closed her eyes..she knew whose touch it is..it is him..her rey.. he kissed her shoulder ..the bliss of having each other brought smile on their faces while their eyes welled up with tears

Rey:I Luv u Too Baatcutter...Proud of u

Kr:hmm......she said keeping her hands above his n nuzzled close to him while his grip was getting tighter for every dam sec

Rey:I m with you...Forever..luv u baatcutter

Both closed their eyes feeling each other.. tears rolled down but @ the same time they had a satisfying smile on their faces..

When two people are meant to be...no time is too long..no distance is too far n nothing can ever tear them apart

May be their luv story is not like others..Happily ever after but it is beyond what we can think... the luv story that is incomplete yet COMPLETE ..the bond of luv that hold 2 hearts together where even death can't depart them..they knew may be they are apart but nothing can depart their hearts..they knew they cant live together forever but they know they are never gonna be apart from each other

Edited by Kriyansh.Pooja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow.
can't find words to express.
this is one hell of a story.
so emotional, so beautiful, something that connects to your soul, something that touches your heart.
Must say i have read many emotional stories but this is by far one of the few that will an everlasting impression.
the way you showed every emotion through simple yet perfectly used words took me into a trance till the very end.
just simply beautiful.
🤗
Edited by arshafan94 - 11 years ago

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