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Nishi

@-Snowflakes-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Lovely os
Laal ishq sequence was vry hot

Good wrk

Would love to read more 👍🏼

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Mansi

@Mansi98

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome OS niru

after ages read a vrushan OS

it ws jst magical 😳

Do write more OS on vrushan

n next time do PM me

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Ziggy

@Lazygal_Taarey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Wonderful

Luved both POV

They r so much in Luv

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Shweta

@2111_shweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

The OS was amazing

Really liked your writing😳

As far as VruShan chemistry is concerned..

From the few IVs that I have watched of thiers, they d share a great bond and look cute together😳

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

beautiful os

loved how you used the laal ishq sequence

if possible do continue with it

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apy_swaron

@apy_swaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

This os has turned out to be my favourite of the vrushan os I've read till now...

It is just amazing...👏

The individual pov's...the unsuccessful attempts to avoid each other.. And of course the laal ishq sequence... Just loved it the way they were penned...

Would love to read more from you...keep writing😊

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

this is amazing yar...
it feels soo good to read it..
their pov's were jst superb...
lal ishq ...ye mlal ishq...
thanks 4 writing ds n 4 d pm

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Vadhana

@Vaddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

despite knowing Vrushan aren't really comfortable with our wild imaginations, i can't help but wish and wish these two end up like kajen <3

*sigh* the perfect OS on them if they are a couple <3

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

wat a wonderful way to interpret laal ishq niru

thr soft romance n intimacy was very well penned

u definitely share a rapturous love of words

clearly a magician of language,

i loved tis one short if u can

then i wud request you to continue further

do write more 😛

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Vishi-

@Vishi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Very Well Written 👏
Love it ❤️

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