SwaRon OS: A Thousand Years!

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taqy-vsm

@taqy-vsm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

very well writen keep wrtinggg

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

brilliant and wonderful and fantastic os... loved it

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Nice os :)

I loved the dance sequence

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Naya OS. >Os k beech mein😭😭😭😭 > End mein
Gosh Mihi. First of all this is also one of my most favourite songs. Well whos isn't right.
Coming to OS. You are quite amazing at teenage romance you know. The OS was romantic just in the way SwaRon are. I loved the flow of the OS. Perfect description between the song. " From screaming at him to apologizing to him for being so harsh once upon a time, and finally, from forcefully dancing with him to dancing out of love with him." - I so loved this line man. And I was seriously not expecting the kiss. 😲 You wrote it down well. But I felt it finished of a bit too fast. But I liked it. And then you made Sharon behave just like she would. Me super happy. 😃😃 He pisses off people at such romantic moods. ""So.." He asked her as she looked upto him, still blushing, "How was it?"

" He will ask her that. 😲 Can if you by the unpredictable Swayam. And I loved this Swayam. I don't know what Im writing.😕 But loved this OS Mihi. Light hearted romance and touches the emotional chord perfectly too. Great job bud.👏

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

so so so awesome story @mihi...
a thousand years is d perfect song fr swaron... 😳 & waltz 😳😳 & der 1st special kiss 😳😳😳
loved it ❤️ ... in swaronland now

show me hoga ya nhi pata nhi... just pray aisa he kuch ho...

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam
Naya OS. >Os k beech mein😭 > End mein
Gosh Mihi. First of all this is also one of my most favourite songs. Well whos isn't right.
Coming to OS. You are quite amazing at teenage romance you know. The OS was romantic just in the way SwaRon are. I loved the flow of the OS. Perfect description between the song. " From screaming at him to apologizing to him for being so harsh once upon a time, and finally, from forcefully dancing with him to dancing out of love with him." - I so loved this line man. And I was seriously not expecting the kiss. 😲 You wrote it down well. But I felt it finished of a bit too fast. But I liked it. And then you made Sharon behave just like she would. Me super happy. 😃😃 He pisses off people at such romantic moods. ""So.." He asked her as she looked upto him, still blushing, "How was it?"
" He will ask her that. 😲 Can if you by the unpredictable Swayam. And I loved this Swayam. I don't know what Im writing.😕 But loved this OS Mihi. Light hearted romance and touches the emotional chord perfectly too. Great job bud.👏

it made you cry ? 😲 😲 why ?

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Simply wow wow!!!! Such a beautiful os n wholesome swaronish...d talk.after deir indeed first special kiss was indeed awesome !!! I loved dat cute small convo .. .Briallntly written...

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Beautiful..amazing it was Mihika 👏. Even I am in love with this song but this beautiful piece of Swaronilicous romance made me love it more. As if I was living the moment & dance with them. 😳

SwaRon 1st kiss which is the dream of every Swaronian was described so magicaly I was absolutely amazed by the beauty of the description. ☺️

t is one of your best writings Mihika..thanks for pm 🤗