SwaRon OS: A Thousand Years!

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Shailja

@Kshailja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awesome OS Yaar...
Ab I Want SwaRon 1st Special Kiss to happen in reality...
3 saal ho gye ab kya budhe hone pe dono apna 1st kiss krenge...
Nd Their Duet dance is Super needed in current track...
Lal Ishq to dream tha ab real mein ek mindblowng duet hona chahiye Swaron ka...Badly needed wo v Mommy Raiprakash k saamne ...
Tb na maja aaega..
Keep writng yaar..Bahot dino baad padh k mind fresh ho gya...
Nd meko Pm krna mat bhoolna...

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Simply wow !! N esp d smalll.convo after deir indeed first special kisss! Loved d whole ..it was beautiful wth perfect swaronish touch...briallnt yr...super awesome

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

rehearsal hall is indeed very special place for them... n now first kiss...
omg...
love it dear...
thanks for the pm

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Shreya..

@Shreya..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Brilliant OS mihi 🤗

U know this is one of my fav songs too and the way u have described every stanza wth the swaron danced around and held each other is jus pure bliss.Thank you for this .I really really hope i would get to see swaron have their first special kiss as beautifully as u hv described it.❤️.

P.S i just loved the end when he asks mischeviously "how was it" and the whole conov later on.Perfect

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Beautiful os.
Ending ws jst perfect. Luvd it.😊

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Ahhaaan a new OS from you and after such a long time I'm happy reading something from you..😊.
It was a lovely OS Mihi I loved the dance they shared and Sharon's complaining rant in the beginning of the OS..😛.
And not to forget the teasing in the end hehehe quite a naughty person Swayam is..😳 😆.
Loved reading your work after a long time..😃.
Love,
Kashmi..😊.

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

you definitely made swaron first kiss

super spl mihi

n the fact tat the kiss happened in the rehearsal hall

made it more spl

do write more 😃

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Mihi, you will not let me live in peace? Right? 😛

Well, I just can't complete any comment without praising you. You write beautifully, darling. Indeed its a treat to read your work.

It's brilliantly penned.👏👏 Loved every bit of it. From Sharon's anger to their special moment everything was soo Swaronish.

Enjoyed it a lot. The title is perfect and so is the song<3

Keep entertaining us with more of your works. Stay blessed.

Love you

Fati. 🤗

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shruti_vrushan

@shruti_vrushan

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

This was beautiful !!

Dance on Thousand years !!...that song has that swaronish feel..

And that first special kiss part..swayam backed out from kiss feeling guilty..so typical swayam..and sharon pulled him again in kiss to shut him up and assure him that she also wants it...so like diva SRP..

luved the swaron convo. after kiss..waiting for something like this to happen in d3..

p.s-sry for late comment