Neutral Drabble: Bottomless - Page 2

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

aswom i loved it..

Originally posted by: KR_anki_ArSha

hawww tu bhi writer hai...nice yar... Thanks :D

but ittu sa update...😆 Haan :P

btw awesome update yar...

loved it...love the concept...👍🏼 Means a lot :D

Originally posted by: krarshanaval

IT WAS SMALL BUT GREAT CONCEPT... LIKED IT

Originally posted by: tommo.

Exceedingly well written, lady. You're an awesome writer, you know. Thank you. Definitely means a lot. 😳

I could imagine only SanDhir in this. Probably cause in your tag you mentioned them but ah! I really dunno. 😳 Haha. xD I thought of making it KR but then, I realized I didn't mention them at all. :P

Anyhoo, it's an extremely random one but super amazingly executed. I loved the flow of emotions in the writing the most. Emphasis on - THE MOST. 😆 Thank you. <3 Way too random. 😆

"So he cried, and remembered, and then cried again. He cried till there were no more tears left, he remembered her until he had exhausted all the memories."

^^ These lines were awe-striking. Thanks. :D

Keep writing. I will. :')

Love,

Aishu.

Originally posted by: themockingblue.

This. Yes.

I'll tell you what. When I read angst (and trust me, I stay out of it mostly for a variety of reasons), it affects me so much in ways it's hard for me to explain. I'll read the same thing again and again until I remember the lines by heart and it makes me weirdly off. And for an angst like this, so excruciatingly well written, it's kind of doing weird things in my head. Obv 😆 That is kinda weird. The fact that you read it again and again of course. But thank you. <3 It actually means way more than you think. I've always been bad at works without dialogues so I'm glad it worked out.

I didn't imagine anyone in my head. I write faceless stuff like this (and imagine them too 😛) and I guess, it's got a beauty of it's own. I think the best part was where he thinks how hard it is to keep her in his memories. I've never fallen in love (😳) but rejection, specially from someone you hope for to be in your life forever, that's very hard :/ I write with a couple or two in mind, I never read it again so I don't know how it feels. You'll fall in love soon. 😛 But yes, it is, isn't it? Even a friend's rejection is painful. </3

I love you so much for writing this 🤗 It's impossibly beautiful <3 I feel so proud. :') Length is not even mentioned. :')

Originally posted by: pradeep_maurya

Nyc start

Originally posted by: Mihi4VruShan

Woah!!!! This is amazing!!!

Originally posted by: Jensenrocks

Good work, nicely written