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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

wow...amazing ch 1..

loved the entire ch...it was well written...amar's feelings and vrinda's feelings were penned down amazingly...

waiting for next update...

i think charlie amar jaha holiday k liye jayenge vaha par bhavin vrinda bhi jayenge. ..

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premlata

@Missu_TR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Beautiful update

Amar and vrinda feeling super describe

Love it

Update soon

Excited why Charlie call vrinda

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poorni

@poorni_vishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

superb update loved so much

Amar couldnt understand himself nice its bad that he behaves rude on charile

and vrinda seeing her photos with d3 soo nice

but y charlie calling vrinda?

update soon

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Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

nice start
everythng ws predictable n expected
bt the twist ws charlie's call...

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Ashu

@Avalanche.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Res/Unres

Thank you so much aapu for dedicating this fan fiction to me. It means a lot to me. The first chapter was awesome!

Papa angry at the news channel was so funny. I loved when he called the websites stupid. Poor him. He doesn't even realize that he loves mamma. I hate that papa ignored mamma and I am proud of mamma of being strong. Agar phone toot jata tho usko apni "stranger" ki kabre kaisi milti. I feel so bad for Charlie because she has to face papa's anger. Bechari, bina koi galti kiye hi daant karahi hai. At least, papa ko guilt tho feel hua. Yeah!! Vacation time! Party party party!! Finally admit karliya, that he is craving for HER! Loved the mamma and mamu bond you portrayed and feel bad that she is so sad and frustrated. I am glad that mamu is there for mamma. Kitna suspense mein daldiya!! Charlie ne kyun phone kiya!! Jaldi se update karo!

Keep Smiling,

TaaRey/VriMar's Daughter

~Ash/Mona Darling~

Edited by -NautankiAsh- - 11 years ago

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dasv

@dasv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

amazing update
vri and amar misses each other sooo cute
charlie called vrinda wowww suspense
may be she will call vri too to the trip it will fun if this comes true

update soon
waiting to know wat happens next

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