Without the love- Anonymous drabble *for everyone*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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WITHOUT THE LOVE

Dedicated to all the strong girls out there



"What's wrong with you?! Why can't I wear this dress?!" She shouted on his face.

"Because I don't want you to.."

"I'm your girlfriend, not a slave.." She snapped back.

"Why don't you understand, I love you and all this that I do, is just for you.." He tried marking his point in her head.

"Ya, sure.." She said sarcastically.

"Listen, this is final. You're not wearing these stuffs." He announced his so called decision. "Now, c'mon wear a nice smile, my friends are waiting." He moved towards his gang who were desperately waiting for him. After all, he was going to pay the bills of their drinks. She groaned. This is not the first time, when he is telling her to do something which she doesn't want to do. This is not at all like she wanted it to be. When they met, everything was so like a fairytale, but now, its not. The club was beaming with coloured lights while the crazy people danced on DJ tunes. Everyone was enjoying except her. Things have changed. He is changed. Its like everything he used to like about her now sucks him bad. Her independence and potential to get anything, which he used to adore once, now gives him complex. He doesn't want her to work, doesn't want her to meet her group just because it has some boys, doesn't want her to wear clothes she like, doesn't think she can drive alone, doesn't let her go to her home even on festivities, doesn't even like her parents since they are too open minded...now the only thing that left was he might not like her to breathe. He is no more the same, and wants to change her too. All he wants from her is to stay beside her in front of his friends like a jelly. Why can't he understand that she is a girl, not a show piece. Her friends always told her that falling in love is easy, but maintaining a relationship requires a lot of compromises. She never believed them. And today...things might have turned out in a way, that she should believe her friends, but still she won't. A relationship which only runs on compromise can never go too far. Standing at one of the corners of this bar, where he was celebrating with his friends for some sh*t reason.

"That's it. I can't take it anymore." She murmured. With all her guts, she moved to him. He was having a great time with his friends, laughing around and checking out the chicks at the bar. She tapped on his shoulder making him turn. He looked at her while his giggles because of one of the sarcastic comments of his friends, continued. His smile, which she used to love more than anything, vanishes the next second.

"We're done. Good bye!" She placed his gifted ring in his hand, hence freeing herself from this relation. Like a free bird, she felt the fresh air filling into her lungs after so long. He looked at her in shock, while she smirked at him with a shine in her eyes like never before.

She moved towards the exit of the club, leaving him dumb. Realising what had just happened, he ran behind her only to find her going towards her car.

"Wait!!" He called her. She turned back. "How can you do this, I thought we love each other.." He asked.

"Love?!" She said sarcastically. "There's no love. There's just dominance. There's no 'we', there's just YOU in this relationship, whatever you want should be done, whatever you say is the only right, what about me?? Did you ever asked me, what do I want? I want free space..I want love..not ORDERS for god sake!! Why should we act like lovers, if we don't even know each other...YOU and ME are done." She left him dumbfound. Her car drove out, leaving the flying dust and a shocked guy behind. The night was going dark. It was eclipse. The city was dark except below a few street lamps. Everything was dark, but absurdly a spark ignited in her. She felt light, refresh, she felt NEW.

P.S. So hows it. I know shayad thoda bakwaas hai. But I am a big demi lovato fan aur ye ussi ke ek song 'without the love' se inspired hai. Its anonymous so basically meant for everyone. And ya!! I am out of town for 3 days so everybody do bhangra kyunki tum log mujhse 3 days ke liye free ho. Please wish me a luck. Dead end exam on sunday

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sharif_lafungi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was immensely amazing...
wonderful concept...hats off
khyati2000 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
amazing di.. it was not bakwaas at all 👏
i seriously loved it👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dare u say it bakwaas
it was not at all bakwass
its simply amazing
the way u depicted a girl's feeling about how she feels when her BF dominates her
nive one shot
do write like this more


P.S. i hope every girl on IF read this.
u never know when u all r in the same situation


love u for this
Sanju... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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way to go girl!!!
HATS OFF!!
its a gr8 piece of work!!
n ya..
ALL THE VERY BEST 4 UR EXAMS!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry, but its just a drabble😕 It ends here only
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
amazing story
beautifully written the feeling of that girl
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmmm shocked ki actually u did a fantastic job 👏
Nice way to potray the feelings of any gil
U r out of town 😆 that's why m feeling happy 😆
Come soon jyada kush hone ki jarurat nahi hai
M waiting 4 more updates n os ,
Yes wish a goodluck 4 exams
Dhyan se read n write karna nnn yes
Acchi handwriting honi must hai okkk 😆 😆
Bye
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing work...👏


Love it...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome!
I so love such strong girls!
Thanx for coming up with such amazing shot!

BEST OF LUCK FOR YOUR EXAMS! 👍🏼
Give your best without any stress!

And lastly, will miss you Di..
Come back soon!

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