'SwaRon TwoShot- Just Enough' Part2 updated! April 14 (No PM

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fanista

@fanista

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

superb !

this is my fav OS !

bang on

all the emotion exploded like

water comes out of fountain :D

loved it soo soo much

i cant expressed

espicially the silent confession

in which unspoken words

were spoken

and the song

and swayam's dance

sharon's reaction

swayam sensing her

everything soo perfect

and swaronish

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kapoormenka

@kapoormenka

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Superb part too speechless just speechless how to express it's really beautiful. This song is my Fav. now I so wish to see it on Swayam

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Perfect os
Swaron forever,ruhi out
U write great
Write more os

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cscs

@cscs

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

res

unres

sakshi 🤗

its perfect.. o saiyan song, swayam solo, swayam taking revenge in his own style from ruhi.. this story had everything which i wanted to see in D3..

loved it.. 😊😊

Edited by cscs - 11 years ago

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

kya batau sakshi...maar daala re... just brilliant work...

Kuch drama nahi...kuch nahi best part ki u kept that ruhi away from Swaron...

And Swayam's dance mein kya batau re,... i so wish we get a emotional solo of swayam i really

hope so LOved it dear Kepp writing

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

awesome !! swayam emotions brillantly penned down.while dancing..i always love to.see.swayams love fr sharon n it was beautiful sakshi...loved it

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

what I loved the most is when swayam answers ruhi bluntly... swayam's pain through dance was briliantly shown... swaron together...happy...

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Wo bang on. .
It was brilliant. .
I loved d swayam danced his feelings out it was so emotional n touching n d way u wrote it hats off to u. .
Moreover jo ruhi ka popat hua was super fun just loved it..
Sakshi u really r one of d finest writers out here. .
Its always a feeling of happiness n pleasure reading ur write ups. .
Keep writing more n more

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Nice one killer..meri ek aur wish puri Kardi tune..^_^
Ruhi jealous..aahhh...it was so pleasing to read...;)
Aapka Bohot Bohot dhanyawad meri ye ichha puri karne k liye..😆

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Vadhana

@Vaddy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

swaron swaron swaron!!! I'm not telling bravo coz this was swaron <3 pure n only swaron :)Swayam ka write up :') ilysm di for this, Swayam the lover boy, Swayam palki maam's creation, the Swayam was what I saw in this part. The Swayam whom we've lost since a few months :')And swaron swaron swaron, Swayam sharon swaron. Period. No one can interfere coz their equation is different <3 I loved it :D this is what we call swaron :)

I swear fans understand swaron better than ameeta :P