'SwaRon TwoShot- Just Enough' Part2 updated! April 14 (No PM - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
I'm waiting to read more :Dbut this was like bliss seriously :D you know that bliss clam u get after a long hard day? Aisa tha :D I felt like I was reading swaron the swaron, palki ma'am's beautiful, pure creations after a looong hard battle with ameeta for them.
loved it to bits <3 :D
Cn u continue this one di? :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
it what i would love to see happening
brilliantly written 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Thank uu sooo much saakshi...😊😊😊 for writing this...😊😊😊 I just loved Swayam.. i soo haooy u kept Ruhi out of it...😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
awsome concept and awsome writng...will b waiting for second part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
superb... keep writing 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Awieee...^_^
I loved this one!
Just so cute...just so sweet..just so swaron!! ❤️

Killer..I know m being demanding now a days..bit pls tu iska ek aur part likh sakti h..jisme we get to see jealous ruhi..u know Wat I mean ryt!
So plsss!!!!! ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Nice story. You really penned it beautifully. SwaRon love never needs words to describe itself. The way you brought them together was really nice.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Awesome os
This is the lover boy Swayam 😳
Loved it to the core
Great work do write more
Edited by shaaz23 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Oh my my!
Super Awesome yaar!😳
I so want esa kuch ho jaye...
Ja jake dikha ye un logo ko bolio.. dekho isse bolte hai perfect scene!
Age continue karegi na...
Update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
PART-2

[STOP THE SONG NOW! When indicated ON it then ONLY! Plz.]


They broke apart... Sharon smiled...
"Umm...College??" Sharon asked him...
"Yeahh... but next week...okay?" Swayam spoke to her...
"But..please...na...Swayam... Musicals ki Rehearsals bhi hai...please..." Sharon pleaded...
"Sharonn...but...tum..." Swayam thought for a while... but then continued... "Acha okay...let's go..." He smiled...

She changed and both went together to Swayam's home...there he too changed and took his stuff and both headed towards their College...

At College:
In Canteen...

The gang met Sharon and asked her about her health... she felt happy seeing the care and concern from her friends...
Just then Ruhi came to her... and stood beside Swayam...who was standing beside Rey...
Ruhi was about to say something when Swayam moved near Sharon...Sharon gave a smile to him and also saw Ruhi... Ruhi was angry, she smirked to herself and came near to Sharon...
The gang now was busy with their silly talks...

"Aap thik to ho na Sharon?" Ruhi asked showing innocence...
Before Sharon could say anything Swayam interrupted...
"Ofcurse Sharon thik hai... aur hogi kyun nahi... mein tha uske saath..." Swayam smiled at Sharon!

Ruhi was shocked at Swayam's changed behaviour and also Sharon was amazed how Swayam answered back Ruhi... but somewhere in Swayam's mind... he was feeling guilty... he only knew why this sudden emotion grew inside him... Sharon saw his face expression... she was confused...was not really able to guess... Sharon found him lost...

"Swayam... mujhe apse kuch baat karni hai..." Ruhi looked at him...
"Later on..." Swayam bluntly spoke...
He turned to Sharon...
"Mujhe kuch kaam hai... see you later...and ya do take care!" said Swayam...
Sharon nodded and he left...

Here, Simmi asked Sharon to sit and all were chatting...
"Guys! Tumlogo ka ho gaya ho to, let's go for Rehearsals?" Rey asked...
"Haan haan Rey..tum jao hum aate hai..." Spoke Nilesh...

ON THE SONG- [Mobile readers...play the song "O Saiyaan" from "Agneepath" in Backgroud...]

Rey, Sharon got up and were heading towards RH... Ruhi followed them...which obviously they couldn't ignore! They reached RH but found the door closed [not locked]. Rey shrugged his shoulders to Sharon and they slightly pushed the door... and went inside... they were amazed...! It was Swayam who was dancing his heart out...

Meri Adhoori Kahaani
Lo Daastann Bann Gayi
Tune Chhuaa Aaj Aise
Mein Kya Se Kya Ban Gayi

Sharon was about to move towards him but stopped in mid way... Swayam was engrossed in his own world... unaware that Sharon, Rey n Ruhi were standing there...in a corner...
He stretched his hands forward... as wished to hold something but jerked back imagining that no one was there to hold his hand and nothing which could perfectly fit into his hands "forever"... he twirled around on one foot for two times...his eyes closed... images of Sharon flashed into his mind... when she was waiting for him, crying infront of him to accpet her...

Sehme Hue Sapne Mere
Haule Haule Angdaayiyaan Le Rahe
Thehre Hue Lamhe Mere
Nayi Nayi Gehrayiyaan Le Rahe

Sharon had tears in her eyes... watching Swayam into this ocndition... all in all both were somewhere at fault! "Trust" the only thing which was absent between these two!
Swayam did a one hand cartwheel step... and continued doing that in a circle...
He calmed down himself... and stopped for a second... pulled his hairs... in hurt... and sanked down on the floor straight... and slided up without any support with hands... he covered his face with his palms...and wiped his tears... Rey looked at Sharon...who stepped back a bit...

Zindagi Ne Pehni Hai Muskaan Karne Lagi Hai
Itna Karam Kyun Na Jaane
Karwat Lene Lage Hain Armaan Phir Bhi
Hai Aankh Nam Kyun Na Jaane

Swayam smiled remembering their Confession... he took a posture as if holding Sharon from waist and danced... he waved in such way that the people watching him could easily guess that someone close to his heart was dancing with him mentally... this was heart-wrenching... he smiled all the way... but stopped immediately and shifted back... turning his handas into fist...


O Saiyannn

Swayam moved left and to the right doing some beautiful contemporary steps... which well suited... a pont came when he thought Sharon was there but nodded a NO to himself and continued dancing... he cried... he did not paid heed to anything...rushed to his bag... and caressed something... it was his phone... Sharon's pic in it... he kissed it...

Just then gang came inside but soon their chats vanished when they saw Swayam and how the other two Rey standing... n Sharon sitting down! ... Simmi went to Sharon immediately and held her shoulders...Sharon shooed off her hands... [Ruhi exception]
Everyone exchanged looks... but the state in which Swayam was only Sharon could guess... gang just watched him silently...Rey could not bear this! Sharon was numb..Ruhi was confused and was like "whatever"... Sharon sat on the floor... all pale...

Odhu Teri Kayaa
Solah Singaar Mein Sajaa Lun
Sangam Ki yeh Rainaa
Isme Tyohaar Mein Manaa Lun

A tear drop fell on the screen...he immediately rubbed it off...
"I can't see...I just can't see...you in pain... I can't hurt you! I...just can'tt... Sh..." Swayam wiped his own tears also so that the pic of her stays smile filled... not with tears!
"I..I just want to see you smiling... just just happy... alwayss! " He didn't stop...
He slided back... sitting on his knees... Sharon slwoly stood up...

Khushboo Teri Chhu Ke
Kastoori Ho Jaunn
Kitni Pheeki Thi Mein
Sindoori Ho Jaun

Swayam was looking down...sitting on his knees... he was shedding tears... someone came behind him...he sensed the frangrance... he clenched his fingers when the person immdiately hugged him from back only...
"Shaarronnn..." Swayam spoke lovingly... Sharon closed her eyes... how he took her name with utmost love... Both stood up... he kept his hands on her..which were on his chest...[from behind] . He turned her around and made her face him...

Sur Se Zara Behki Hui
Meri Duniya Thi Badi Be-suri
Sur Mein Tere Dhalne Lagi
Bani Re Piya Mein Bani Baansuri

Swayam caressed her cheek..she slowly opened her eyes... he picked her up high... her hands were on his shoulders... he twirled round and holding close to him brought her back on floor...
Sharon wiped her own tears... and nodded a NO to him...
Ruhi here was getting all jealous... he had something in her hands... it was a pen... he tried something so that Sharon gets hurt... but couldn;t do anything as Swayam took Sharon a little back... she was safe !
Sharon left him... and then he just stopped her by holding her palm... she saw Ruhi fuming with anger...she smiled internally...

Zindagi Mein Pehni Hai Muskaan Karne Lagi Hai
Itna Karam Kyun Na Jaane
Karwat Lene Lage Hain Armaan Phir Bhi
Hai Aankh Nam Kyun Na Jaane

He pulled her close... her hand landed on to his chest...she gazed at his eyes... she was loosing herslef in the deep pool of choclaty brown eyes... they were speaking LOVE... and now were glittering due to immense happiness... and she smiled... her lips bent into a perfect smile... he knew...that smile cum blush was because of him... the smile was divine... just enoughh... he cupped her face...

O Saiyaan

She held him tight... he wiped all the remaining tears which were about to fall but she stopped him from doing so... she kissed his palms...

Mere Aasmaan Se Jo Humesha
Gumshudaa They Chaand Taare...
Tune Gardisho Ki Laye Badal Di...
Laut Aaye Aaj Saare... O Saiyaann

"Never...are we...happy na...n...so...why..." Swayam asked hurt...
Immediately she put her finger on his lips...
"Shhh...I craved... you know I CRAVED...'US'..." Sharon started light sobbing..!
Swayam kept staring at Sharon..and just digesting the beautiful words...!

This was audible to everyone... but these two... just were lost in their own world... Everyone was shocked!

Swayam pulled her in a bone-crashing hug... Ruhi's anger was damn visible...
"No sorry..no pain...justt...justt... LOVE" Sharon spoke while hugging...
"Yes...our Love..." Swayam too spoke...

Both tighetened the grip...and then silently broke the hug...
Swayam planted a soft kiss on her forehead...while she just smiled...

***

"Swayam! Emotional kar diya yaar..." Rey came towards them...
"Tu...and I mean tum sab..!" Swayam looked little amazed!

He also saw Ruhi there... but ignored her...
Rey pulled both Sharon n Swayam in a hug...! All clapped... but idn't spoke a word!

"Sapna to nahi hai na be...???" Vicky eyed Nilesh...
"Nahi nahi...sach hai...pinch to kar..." Nilesh spoke...

Vicky pinched him..and he shouted! "Ouchh...sach hai bhai.."
"Shar...now no crying more...okay?" Simmi chuckled.

Sharon was to speak when she coughed a bit...and Swayam instantly caressed her back...
"Hey! Tum..just come and sit here... Sharonn..."
Swayam took her to the stool and made her sit comfortably... She smiled...

"You need a..." Swayam was interrupted by Sharon...
"No...I need...YOU! " Sharon blushed.!

Swayam blushed... all chuckled...!
"Partyyy! guysss! " NiCky shouted.

Ruhi still was standing there...
Sharon walked towards her...

"Kya...kyaa hua??" Ruhi stammered...
"Ohh...sorry...yaha tumhe kisi ne dekha nahi...tumhari zarurat nahi hai..." Sharon spoke in attitude...
"Tum...Sharon..." Ruhi pointed her finger...
"Hey hey! Keep it with you!! " Swayam interupted!
"Should I explain you dear...what relation I n Swayam share...? OR for understanding that what happened now...is JUST ENOUGH...!! " Sharon glared at her...

Ruhi was damn jealous and angry on herself also as she couldn't get Swayam! and moreover lost everything... she just ran out of the room...

All hugged Swayam n Sharon...
"Swayamm... " Sharon called him...
"You need rest...now! No excuse... just...let me drop you home!" Swayam winked...
"My World's Best Boyfriend... You wish is Just Enough...oopss...my command!" Sharon smiled...

Everyone was happy to see Swayam Sharon one... Swayam Sharon hand in hand walked out...
Only they were in need of proper time, proper way...and everything sorted out...! Be it Ruhi or be it their Unspoken Confession! Few words, their eyes, their hug, their heart was just enough to convey everything they felt inside for each other!

***

How was it????
Sorry if it was not up to the mark! I tried my best to justify it!

Do leave ur precious comments plz! [No PMs will be send for this OS]😳

Thanks each n every one who liked or commented on the previous PART! Means a lot.! !

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Love,
Sakshi...😳

Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago

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