SwaRon OS : Sharon Disappears *Part 2 Pg no.4* - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
It was a good part but I didn't liked Swayam being so rude to Sharon that too because of Ruhi be it in serial or in any OS/FF.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Baccha 🤗
First time keliye bohut accha tha...👍🏼
Continue soon...but Swayam ko itna rude kyun dikhaya?

I hope next part mein he regrets it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the Likes n Comments! So here is the Part 2..I am soo sorry if the previous chapter was really bad
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Part 2

Sharon was thinking why Swayam was rude for a small mater :/
Swayam at his home was crying...He himself said 'How how can I being rude to Sharon? :'(
He called Sharon...but she didn't answer :(
Sharon decided that next 5 days she will be living in friend's house who came from Europe..She won't be there in college...

Next day at College

Swayam brought a small teddy bear saying sorry..He was searching for her..But she's not there...
Swayam saw Rey and asked...'Rey where's Sharon..?'
What?! Sharon didn't come today..? Rey replied..
Yes..But is it because of me?? Swayam asked
Yeah maybe... Rey replied and went..
Swayam was feeling very sad :( He called her again...but she didn't attend the calls...He sent her a text..saying that I am really sorry Sharon..I didn't sleep last night because what had happened yesterday :(
Swayam wanted to meet Sharon so without taking much time he caught hold of the pipe which lead to her room's window..In her room she wasn't there...He searched her everywhere...But she was not there :( Where did Sharon disappear?? :O :'( He again searched everywhere..He was crying..How can I do this to Sharon? :'(

He called Rey and said that Sharon is not there at home...Where did she gone??
'Sharon not there?? If something happened to her? :o Swayam this all because of u!' said Rey..
'Rey I am very tensed where she will be..? Please Rey call her from your mobile..' replied Swayam
'Ok..Let me try'..said Rey..
She didn't even pick Rey's call...Like Swayam, Rey also sends her a message..
Swayam went to Ruhi's home..
'Ruhi!!!!' shouted Swayam..
'What??' Ruhi asked..she was very scared..
'You are the one who did all these...I have to call someone urgently yesterday...I am sure it was you!' said Swayam angrily
'No-o! Swayam..' What are you talking abouuut??'said Ruhi
'Ruhi I don't have time to talk with you just get lost!! I don't want to see your face anymore >_<!!' shouted Swayam

Swayam sent her many texts saying sorry..but she didn't reply..
He was soo scared if something would happen to Sharon..He was going to inform police..
Meanwhile..
Sharon says to herself ' Swayam has sent me many messages..I have to go back :/ He maybe searching for me..'
She says to her friend the same..
Sharon was thinking 'Will Swayam be nice to me If I go back??'
She was confused..

Swayam didn't find Sharon the next day also..The gift was there with him..
He was saying himself 'Its all because of me! for small matter I was rude with Sharon.. :/

Sharon comes in a car...She was looking so beautiful..Swayam was very happy..
Sharrrooonnn! shouted Swayam with happiness
He hugged her..
Swayam? You are angry with me right? said Sharon
No Sharon I am really sorry.. And you know I looked for you everywhere..I was very tensed.. replied Swayam
Aww..What is in your hand?? said Sharon
Umm...This is for you Sharon..I LOVE YOU..
Sharon was shocked..Swaayyyaam?? Do you really love me?? said Sharon
Yes..you are the only one in my life <3 Swayam said
Swayam I love you too :) but promise me that u will be mine forever :) said Sharon
Sharon you will be mine and I will be yours too ;) Forever and Ever <3 :D said Swayam
They both are in tears with happiness <3
Both hugged again <3
It was official and everyone know about their relationship :)
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How was the second part?
Sorry if its bad :(
Need your feedbacks :)

Thanks to Sakshi di for helping :)


Edited by -Noura- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Wow Noni Beautiful part I really loved it. Great comeback girl.sorry for being impulsive😳.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
bohot achi hai nonu ..
but kuch jaldi hogayi ye sab ..
swayam kuch impulsive lag raha hai ...

anywaz
u r doing a good job
👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Wowww its Awesome Nours 👏
Loved both d parts 😳
Keep Writing 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Lovely lovely!

Sho cute one!
Loved it girl !🤗

Keep writing plz!

Love,
Sakshi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
oh dear---
but ur a good writer...n continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
aaawww sooo sweet... keep writing... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Hey Noura.

This was a amazing part. Beautiful OS. I loved how Swayam cared for her. That teddy. Aww how sweet it was. And the last part was short and sweet.
Keep writting more.
Luv
Your dii .

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