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OS : Hold me Close.

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His fingers caressed her smooth skin drinking the image of her beautiful face and her closed eyes as she felt his touch. She was numb. Her body was gently crushed in between him and the fire exit wall. Her skin, so silky that he couldn't help but run his fingers to feel her face. His right hand which was on the wall beside her face pushed in further as he leaned in breathing hot against her face. His lips fused on her cheek sucking her skin. A sigh escaped her lips and she pushed him involuntarily as if his lips were burning her skin. She was helpless infront of him. 'Please..', was all she managed to stutter. He wanted to mellow down, melt to her words and dance to her wishes but he couldn't, just couldn't. He nodded his head in negation and voiced, 'not this time Kriya' huskily. 'I know you love me but aise kyun kar rahi ho?', he breathed on her lips and she knew she was a lost case again. 'I am tired of waiting Kriya..I want you to admit now!', she glanced up and met his eyes which were determined to make her lose the insecureness she was feeling but her heart couldn't let those words out. Her little fears were enough to crush her feelings and she was successful so far. She was close to her loved ones but destiny always seperated them from her and he could be just one of them. She felt his hand gently cupping her face and he whispered, 'Say it..', near her ear and he was welcomed with her usual silence. He nuzzled into her fragranced hair and placed his lips on her neck and sucked her skin. He didn't let her palm move him even an inch. He nibbled making her breath go higher and her fist clutched his shirt and he smiled. He moved back watching her face. 'Admit it', he said with a smirk. 'Rey...I nee...need some time', she said the same line for the umpteenth time once again. Her some time would never come and he realised after a month or more. She needed time to accept that her life can turn beautiful from dark glory with love and her past still scares her from accepting and he realised that she needed love and trust and him all the while and not the time as she kept it in words. He felt her shift movement trying to escape from him, from her and her feelings. He crushed her again pinning her hand to the back. He loathed the way he had to force her and cursed her for making him do something which he never could imagine. His lips took hers into an aggressive kiss. He bit them, suck them and his tongue explored her mouth as his hand tucked her tresses deepening the kiss making them breathless. He broke the kiss panting and his lips worshipped her neck caressing her sunkissed skin urging moans out from her as he trailed lovebites mercilessly. He didn't want to hurt her, he could say she was in pain as he savoured her hungrily and as she fought against the grip on her wrist. He softened a bit and peppered kisses from her neck to the shoulder. He left her wrist only to interwine his fingers with hers and then squeezed her hand. He loved how it felt so perfect and complete. She opened her eyes to meet up with the chocolate brown eyes gazing at her sensuously. Her eyes were teary, full of pain and much more. 'Kriya', he said cupping her face with the left hand. He tried letting go off their interwined fingers to stop her from breaking down but thats when he noticed she was holding onto his hand tightly. His heart was washed with relief, happiness twinkled in his eyes but that vanished when she loosened his hand from hers. Casting a last glance at his eyes, she ran away without giving a chance for them.

He straited out but darkness engulfed him instead of her.

~*~

She avoided talking to him or either would barely would give the most shortest replies. Looking at his eyes. It was very easy to decipher she was avoiding everything related to her, him and them.

He was taking all of it. He would still keep looking at her waiting for the moment. He wanted to hold her in his arms, make her feel loved. Gain trust and her love for lifetime.

She could find a million excuses in the name of musicals and he waited for it to end.

~*~

The team were very happy. They exchanged hugs for the very successful musical and for the brilliant time they had spent. They laughed and had the heartiest time and whenever he does notice, his eyes would end always on her.

~*~

Sharon was walking around in the rehearsal hall setting back the things around. Kriya was sitting on the cubicle in her black top of crew and shorts. She was instructing Sharon and her voice was hitched a bit and her face went pale. Sharon turned around to check on her, when she found Rey standing at the entrance of Rehearsal hall.

She hadn't expected him. She thought he gave up on her because she was nagging too much of time.

'Rey, tum yahaan?', Sharon asked surprised. 'Haan..I need to discuss about an important college work with Kriya',Rey answered and Sharon understood that she should give them privacy amd excused herself.

Kriya stood up and waited for him to speak up. With every step he took towards her, she found herself thinking of the past few days, glimpses of how she avoided him intentionally though he gave and tried every possible effort to talk to her. The way she was hurting him oblivious to the fact that he was taking all the time in world for her. She felt bad too and it hurted her very much the way it did to him. She couldn't take the big step to mend her mistakes.

'Rey...kuch kehna tha?', she asked when he was silent for minutes. It felt like ages since she actually took his name. It still had the same effect..infact more. He automatically took a step towards her. 'Kriya...', he whispered and waited for her to look him. 'I know jo kuch bhi hua tha woh galat hain..I shouldn't have forced you...but..', he trailed. 'But...common Kriya you know what I feel for you and also you know what you feel for me', his voice raised a bit. 'Why can't we just start all over again?', he yelled grabbing her by the arms closer to her. His every inch was mad at the countless times she avoided him when he felt like talking to her and spend time with her. 'Mein apne aap ko tum par force nahi karna chahta hun Kriya', he voiced. 'You love me right?', he asked hopefully. She twitched her lips together looking down and his later side was still trying to take over him. He wanted to kiss her, yell madly at her for the state they were in but he pushed her away before he did anything which would make go on a guilt trip. 'Shayad ye hee sach hain ki..you don't love me anymore Kriya and we might not meant to be forever', he hoarsely whispered and turned to leave when he felt a tug on his hand, he stopped and then she felt her arms hugging him from behind. 'Don't.', was the only word she uttered. He held her palms and turned around noticing her watery eyes. He engulfed her in his arms kissing her hair and holded onto her tightly.

~*~

She cupped his face as he kissed her feverishly with him over her on the bed. She was now offically his. He kissed her face and his lips mouthed kisses down her neck as his hands worshipped her body. He squeezed her curves making her moan and his eyes burned with intensity. His lips explored every inch of her skin worshipping her body. She anticipated as his hands worked skillfully on her body making her sigh in pleasure. They made love savouring their little moments of encounters and foreplays.

The darkness of the night was in the room giving the moonlight an exception. She stirred in the sleep making him held her more possessively. He opened her eyes with her movement. She was holding his arm and sleeping peacefully in his arms with the white blanket hugging her body. He leaned down and pecked her forehead and she moved closer for warmth.

~*~

Posting this on behalf of Snigs aka snigdha_arsha.

Please drop your comments.

This OS is dedicated to Zala becoz she was d one who probed for dis.😆
Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 11 years ago

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Effacious thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
resss

unress..

snigs..cant blv tune likha kuch finally..!!! 😆

that too..somehow regarding the present track!!!

needless to say... i loved it... 😃

Rey's yelling...restlessness was completly valid...

Kriya made him wait for soo long... poor soul... but...haha...circumstances were to be blamed in there situation...

but finally destiny brought them together yet again!!! 😳

Loved the makeout part!!!

waise he you are expert at it.. 😉

Loved it!!!


Edited by Effacious - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS 👏
Loved It 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Extremely well written. It's beautiful and I just love how it flows so smoothly.
If anyone asked me to describe tge current Rey I'd probably redirect them here, that's how perf it is. I'm still fangirling from imagining it all in my head.
It's the first time I've read you as an author and I'd love to read any further works by you. Beautifully expressed and phenomenally written. Kudos to you
Apologies for my increasingly annoying dysfunctional like button 🤢
Edited by BEYOUtiful_soul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was reallyawesome...
just loved it...

how you brought it about?

the wya you showed different layers... was awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb OS
loved it very much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its just so so beautiful..i fell short of words...snigs u r hell beautiful as a writer..na..kr writer...
i would love it the most agar d3 ke writers ye padh le to...its beyond perfect...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haye... rabba
snigz di. after so long uh wrote smething
its amazing ya.. rey ka restless behavior towards kria
I loved kria's part... too <3 aww...
a sweet one... <3 <3 <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing OS ...
beautifully written ...
loved the ending of how she did not let him leave her again ... a beautiful moment
just simply amazing OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow just wow
Fantastic ah-mazing os
So beautifully written loved the way rey waited for her
Awesome

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