SS- SWARON KRIYAANSH AND OTHER (part 4 updated in pg5) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
awesome update dear.. lovely kriyam convo... hope ruhi could not able to create mu b/w swaron... update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi everyone.
Right now I am on with a SS on Swaron and Kriyaansh. I got this idea of a FF exclusively on SWARON suddenly. I am only giving the character sketch now. If you guys like it, I would continue with it after competing the ss.
Note: The ff is only on SWARON, so I am not including any other d3 characters.

Character Sketch

VRUSHIKA MEHTA AS SHARON RAAI PRAKASH

A bubbly, naughty, kind girl. A lovely sister who can do anything for her brother's happiness. A fabulous dancer. Believes that love is the greatest emotions in this whole world. Enjoys each and every moment of her life.

SHANTANU MAHESHWARI AS SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT

A mature, soft, and kind person. A great friend whom anyone would like to have. Was once a dancer but left dancing due to an incident in the past. Doesn't have any idea on love.

KARAN SINGH GROVER AS NAVEEN RAAI PRAKASH

A strict, mature and kind person. Elder brother of Sharon. Knows her in and out and can read what's in her heart and mind. Committed to his colleague Ankhitha.

DHRASHTI DHAAMI AS ANKHITHA GHAAI

A soft, simple and kind person.Childhood friend of Swayam. Knows that she can't hide any thing from him. Committed to her colleague Naveen.

I personally like these two very much, so I have penned them for these characters.

How do you like the story? Shall I continue????????


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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Hey!!
Dis is grt!!!
Swaron r talking!!! Lyk really just talking!!!
So sweet!! Ek gm msg ne sab ku6 good good kar diya!! 😉 😆
N kriyansh!!! Yaar!!! Dey r amazing!!!
Kriya is trying to ignore him!!!
N rey is dying to spend tym wid her!!!
Its really v nyc!!!
Iss chuhi ko ab kya mil gaya!!!
Continue soon!!!
N pm me plz!!! 😊
N btw d cs of d story is nyc!!! Pm me for dat too plz!! 😊 😊
Edited by kreya204 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys. Thank you so much for all your comments. I am glad that you you liked it.
I am really sorry for the late update. Was busy in some important works. I am really sorry.

PART 4

The whole gang except Rey was sitting in the canteen enjoying themselves. All were cracking jokes on each other and were happily smiling. Rey came to the canteen teasing totally depressed. He heard the whole team laughing and especially Kriya. Here was so happy to see her happy and laughing with others. He went forward heading towards her but stopped suddenly. He remembered her convo with Swayam where she clearly wanted to ignore him. He stepped back, hissed himself and continued admiring her beauty with immense love in his eyes. Swayam noticed this. He slowly moved out from the gang and went behind Rey. He patted him on his shoulders. Rey suddenly stood up and was shocked but relieved to see that it was only Swayam.

S: Tu yahan pe aise chup chup ke kisse dekhre?
R: Main? Pagal hai Kya? Aisa kuch nahi hai. Voh main... Voh...
S: Bas kar. Tu jaantha hai ki tu mujse joot nahi bol saktha? Toh kyyun baar baar koshish kar raha hai? haan?
R: Tu bhi tumhara sawal ka jawab jaantha hai na.Toh kyun pooch raha hai? Haan?
S: Haan voh toh hai. Main apna sawal change kartha hun.Tu usse kyun chup chup ke dekhre?
R: (in depressed tone) Yaar tune dekha na. Voh mujhe ignore karna chaahthi hai. Main maantha hun ki mujse galthi hui hai. Par kya voh ek baar mujse baat bhi nahi karegi?
S: (confusedly) galthi? Kya galthi?
R: Voh uski visa waali baath meri vajah se hi bahar aayi thi na? Uski vajah se toh usko wapas jaana pada
S: What? Rey stop blaming yourself unnecessarily. Isme tumhari kya galthi hai? Kuch bhi?
R: Toh phir kya yaar. Kyun mujhe avoid kar rahi hai voh? Tu hi bol.
S: Rey dekh, tumne usse yeh kaha tha ki tu usse apna friend maantha hai usse zyaada kuch nahi. Use yeh nahi patha ki tuh usse pyaar kartha hai. That's why she is avoiding you taakhi voh apni feelings chupa sakhe.I know her well yaar jab tak usse yeh nahi patha hotha ki tu bhi usse pyaar kartha Hai tab tak voh aise hi karegi. Tu usse aise chup chup se milne se better yeh hai ki tu jaake usse baath kare.
R: Kaise Swayam? Kaise bathavun? Voh toh meri taraf dekh bhi nahi rahi hai.
S: Okay okay. You give her some time, voh zaroor bath karegi. I promise.
R: Jab thak voh nahi chaahthi hai ki main usse baath karun tab thak main uske saamne nahi aavunga.
Saying so he left from there.
S: Mujhe aaj hi Kriya se baath karna padega.

In the canteen

Sh: Kriya
K: Haan Sharon
S: Main tumse kuch poochun?
K: Haan poochona
S: Tum Rey ko avoid kyun kar rahi ho?
K: (hesitant ) Nahi toh aisa kuch nahi
S: Listen Kriya
K: (not wanting to answer) Sharon I am tired. Main gar jaa rahi hun Mai aapse baadh main milthi hun
Saying so she left not letting her to speak.
She bid goodbye to all and left leaving Sharon thoughtful.
Swayam came to the canteen. He saw a lost Sharon and called out her name.
S: Kya hua? Kahan kho gayi?
Sh: Voh main Kriya ki baare main soch rahi thi. Maine abhi abhi baath ki thi uske saath.
S: Maine bhi Reyse baath kiya
Both shared about their talks with each other. Suddenly Sharon's phone rang. She excused herself from Swayam and left to check it. She was confused to see that it was a message from Ruhi. The message was more shocking. It said " Be ready Sharon. Hamara challenge ka result aaj hi patha chal jaayega. Game over." The message left her dumbstruck.
To herself, ' Kya karne waali hai yeh ruhi. Patha nahi ab kaunsa naya naatak karne waali hai Swayam ko paane ke liye.'

(Guys I am ignoring the part where she finds something in her locker to keep the suspense. You will get to know it)

She turned towards Swayam and was shocked to see Ruhi standing with him.

R: Swayam aap meri ek madhadh karenge
S: Yeah sure bathao
R: Kya hum college katham hone ke baadh aapki gar aa sakthe?
S: Kyyun?
R: Humain literature main bahoth saare doubts hai. Toh usme aapke madhadh chaaye tha. Isliye
S: Okay sure. Aa jao.
R: Thank you so much Swayam
Saying so she hugged him but he didn't reciprocate it.

Sharon was fuming in anger to see her man being hugged by her greatest enemy.
She saw Ruhi walking towards her.
R: Tumhe patha hai kyyya? Aaj raat mai Swayam ki gar jaa rahi hun. Doubts clear karne ke liye nahi humara challenge ka result patha lagne ke liye.
Game over.
She thought to herself, ' aaj mujhe jo mili hai tumhari locker se voh sab kuch katham kar dega'
She gave her evil smile and left. Sharon's anger had reached the heights that she felt like killing her.

That's it.

Once again sorry for the late update.
I know this part had more of Kriyaansh than Swaron. But I am sure that you guys are waiting for the next update more for Swaron. The next update is the last one. So thoda suspense toh bantha hai boss. Keep waiting. Will try to update it faster.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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aswom part loved it..

update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it... what was that ruhi found... plz update asap..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally finish reading rest of your chapter... the chapter 4 was fabulous...
finally rey had hear all their talk and have became a bit sad and therefore left it...
and swayan went and meet his best friends kriya and close her eyes and gave a surprise
gang member to meet and his happy about it and all were have fun in canteen and see
this all rey went into is dreamland... and sharon is really get worried for swayan
all becuase of this ruhi and then both sharon and swayan had a conversation
about rey and kriya ... do continue soon and pm me

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