SS- SWARON KRIYAANSH AND OTHER (part 4 updated in pg5)

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Swathi

@Pinkylibbi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Hi guys! This is my first SS. Actually it is a little longer. So I am posting it in parts.

I have involved all the members of the team, but I concentrated more on SWARON AND KRIYAANSH.

As I said this is my first writing, so please bear with me and my mistakes.

Joothe, Chappals, Ande, Tamatar -all welcome. 😃😃😃

Part1- Page1
Part2- Page2
Part3- Page4

Part4- Page 5

PART 1

It's early morning. Swayam was sleeping on his bed with a smile on his face. The reason behind his smile for which all girls die is none other than his SIREN SHARON. The dream was a screenplay of all the sweet moments he spent with her recently (I know they are very less😭) and when they were a couple. Suddenly his phone beeped which woke him up from the beautiful dream. He jumped out from his bed all confused as to why he dreamt of Sharon all of a sudden. He then managed to bring back himself to the present. He checked his mobile. It was a message from Ruhi. (sorry for that. But no worries, Swayam's day begun with those beautiful memories of Swaron and not with Ruhi's message😃). It said " Good Morning Swayam ". He didn't give much importance to it. So, he just replied, "Same to you." Then he said to himself with his precious smile on his face.

" Patha nahi lying? Aaj Sharon ko msg karne ka mann kar raha hai. Kya Karun? Ek kaam karthi hun usse GM wish karthi hun. "

Saying so, he immediately took his mobile, typed "Good Morning Sharon 😊😛😊" and sent her. He smiled and left to get ready for college.

Here Sharon woke up from her bed hearing her mobile beep. She took her big mobile still half asleep. She checked out and her eyes widened with shock, filled with joy and happiness and she totally woke up from her sleep as soon as she found out that it was Swayam's message.

" Wow! Subah subah Swayam ki message? Lagtha hai aaj ka dhin bahoth accha hone wala hai. "

She said with a cute smile. She opened it with anxiety and happiness filled in her eyes. Her happiness knew no bounds when she saw a GM wish from her man after such a long time. Because it yet was high time since they shared such cute moment. She was even more happy when she saw the smiley in it. She knew that this would have also brought a smile on her Mr. Shekhawat's face also. This meant a lot to her. She too replied and left to get ready with her blushy face.

Now, Rey woke up and found that has become too late already. He hurried. Suddenly his fell on the calendar and he became shocked.

"Yeh kya ho gaya mujhe? Aaj Kriya New York se wapas aane wali hai aur main yahan ithni der thak so raha hun. Shit yaar! Mujhe toh usse pick up bhi Karna hai airport se. Mujhe jaldhi jaake thayaar hona padega."

Saying so, he hurried really fast just to meet his one and only love Miss. Kriya Ghai.

That's it for today guys. Please let me know if I can continue or not. And please leave your valuable comments.

This is just the start. I have many interesting things to come. If you guys feel that it is worth continuing,then I will. Please forgive me for any spelling and grammar mistakes.

Edited by Pinkylibbi - 11 years ago

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akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice start...continue soon...just do note in swayam monologue...u hv written in female voiceover..use change kr do

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RadhikaMishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

do continue... i like it...

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AimanAsim

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice concept

continue soon

n plz pm me

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AimanAsim

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update

continue soon

n plz pm

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don girls

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Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing start ...!

Please do continue and please PM me when you have updated, would love to read further on, thanks

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Iman

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome Start
Loved It
Continue Soon & Plzzz PM Me

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Swathi

@Pinkylibbi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you so much for all your comments. It really means a lot to me.

Guys, I am really sorry.😔 Since I am new to this forum, I really don't know to pm😭. So if anyone can help me, I would definitely do that.

Thank you.

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow.. too good morning... loved it... do continue

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Swathi

@Pinkylibbi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Hi guys.Thank you so much for your support and valuable comments. It really means a lot to me.

I am really sorry for those who asked me to pm. But I really don't know how to do that. Really sorry guys. 😭😭😭

Now here it is.

PART 2

College Atrium

Nil was walking absent minded with his mobile in his hand. He was actually waiting for his bestie Vicky's call or message. Simmi entered the scene. She wished Nil. He too retorted her but still with a sad face. This was noticed by her. She put her hand on his shoulder and said

"Relax Nilesh.Vicky zaroor jaldhi wapas aajayega and tum donon ke beech sab kuch teek bhi ho jaayega lol." saying so, she told consoled him.

Nil felt lighter and he hugged her tightly.

"Thanks Simmi mera mood teek karne ke liye "

"Tumhara girlfriend jo hun. Toh itna toh karna padtha hai" said she with her naughty smile. The duo hugged again. Bharat and Amar came to them coating their throat as they saw them hugging.

Bharat started " Wah banta kya baat hai? Aaj donon subah subah bada kush lag rahe ho.Vicky se baat hua hai Kya"

"Nahi yaar abhi tak toh nahi" said Nil sadly. Amar sensing the tension in him patted and said

"Chol (chod) na yaal.Sab teek ho jaayega. "

Just then Shareyam entered the scene. And everyone wished each other in their usual way. All were about to move to the canteen, just then suddenly Amar started,

"Are Simmi, Linni(Rinni) nahi aayi abhi thak.

Everyone smiled. Nilesh and Bharat said together "CHEMISTRY...!!!!!!!!! " in their usual style. Everyone left for the canteen teasing RiMar except Shareyam. Rey turned towards Swayam and started

"Are Swayam Kriya se baat hui? Matlab, usne tumse kuch kaha ki woh kab hai?"

He kept on asking questions about her continuously in a single breath. Swaron looked at each other shockingly and smiled on seeing his anxiety and impatience to meet Kriya. Swayam suddenly stopped his flow of questions and said,

"Woh woh woh. Ek hi breath main itni sari sawal toh sirf tum kar sakthi hun. Par me ek hi time main itni jawaab nahi de saktha. (smiling) Vaise abhi tak toh nahi.Par jab uska call yah msg aayega toh tumhe zaroor batha dunga. Chill. "

They were about to leave when suddenly Swayam's phones rang. He took it to see that it was mines other than Kriya. He smilingly said,

"Wow mera dost sau(100) saal thak jeeyegi. Dheko uska hi call hai." Sharey stopped suddenly. Rey restlessly said, "Toh utha na. Dekh kya raha hai tu. Speaker pe daal." saying so he snatched the phones from his hand and turned the Speaker on. He signed him to talk.

S- Haan Kriya. Bol, tu nikhal gayi

K- Yes Swayam. Main thodi dher main flight board karne wali hun. May be I will be there in Mumbai airport in 2 hours.

Hearing this there came a bug smile on Rey's face expressing his happiness in meeting his lady love after such a long time.

S- Okay cool. Rey tumhe pick up karlega

K- What?!!! Nahi Swayam please tum aa jao na. Rey ko mat bejna. Please please.

(Rey's smile vanished after hearing this. )

S- Are par kyun? Rey toh...

K- Nahi Swayam. Kyun tum apni best friend ko lene nahi aa saktha?

(She diverted the topic not realising the fact that Rey is also hearing their convo to hide her feelings from him)

S- Okay main aajaoonga.

K- Okay bye. See you soon.

S- Bye

The phone conversation ends.

Swayam and Sharon looked at each other and St their best friend sadly. They started to speak to him. Rey unable to understand and digest what is going on, left the place not letting them to talk. Sharon and Swayam looked at each other tensed and said together,

"Inn donon ka kya Kare?

S- Samaj main nahi aa raha hai ki inn donon ko teek kaise Kare?

Sh- Yeah day by day problems badthi hi jaa rahi hai, par solution nahi mil rahi hai. She actually meant about Ruhi.Then she went into a deep thought about that Chuhi. Swayam seeing her called out her name. Sharon coming back to the present said,

" Haan? Kuch nahi."

S- Don't worry Sharon sab kuch teek ho jaayega. Hum donon sab kuch teek kar denge. Vaise bhi agar hum donon milkar kuch kare toh I am sure ki sab solve ho jaayega.

Sharon was happily shocked at Swayam addressing them HUM DONON. She looked at him pleasingly. Both shared a cute eye lock with their cute smiles on their faces.

(Yeah of course their music in the BG).

This was noticed by the vamp Ruhi from a distance. Her anger knew no bounds when she saw both of them lost in each other's eyes. She fumed with anger and left the place frustrated.

That's it guys. I think there second part has too lengthy. But dirty I can't help it. The main part is still yet to come. By the way this SS is quite a long one, so ur will have at least 6 parts. Hope you like it. Please leave your comments.

Will try to upload the next part as soon as possible.

Keep waiting. More to come.