Yeh to hona hi tha(swaron current track)updtd last part - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
read all 3 prts
really awsome
specially whn swayam slp ruhi
writ more story and pm me

thnx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Sab se achi baat in ur last update was da "THUD" dat to on ruhi's face frk swayam...waooohhoowww...
Hehehe.,...wicked me...cnt tolerate her any morree...

Thanks for DA update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
finish read ur whole story together... thanks that swayan found out about her intention
before only to save sharon from get hurt from her... and was in touch with the doctor...
and also inform vp about this... and sent her back to home... lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u all for ur likes and precious comments they mean a lot.Here comes the last part hope u all enjoy.
Part 4


The two souls in love were left alone to answer all the unsaid questions. Sharon moved towards Swayam and wiped the lone tear which escaped his eyes. He held her hand on his cheeks hold it and kissed it,Sharon felt the sensation through her body his touch made her weak.Sharon said "Swayam I m sorry I know..." before she could continue Swayam placed his finger on her lips "shhh... no Sharon not u today I will speak and u will listen , he took a step towards her closing the distance between them, placing his one hand on her cheek and with other holding her hand tightly." Sharon I am sorry I am v sorry ,Maine tum par trust na karke bahut badi galti ki, I am sorry for judging u ,for hurting u , for not believing u,for shouting at u ,for insulting u... for every thing " he took a pause before continuing Sharon had immense love In her eyes and could see the same love in his eyes too.Sharon I hurted u but trust me Maine jab bhi tum he hurt kiya I felt the same pain, whenever I saw tears in your eyes it hurted me the most and I being the reason behind those tears killed me "he didn't know when his eyes started to flow .Sharon's eyes were flowing down with tears knowing that he was also hurt." Sharon after that rejection in font of every one I was broken , mujhe nahi pata tha kya sahi hai kya gal at , aur jab tum try kar rahe thi to make things work I noticed u I noticed everything that u did and I I liked it , tum mujhe special feel karwa rahe thi , tumhari Payal, tumhara white choodidaar ,tumhare gifts ur changed attitude he had a smile on his face while remembering those moments.I noticed everything but mein darr gaya tha ki phirse mujhe reject kardoge and thought made me rude and harsh towards u, Maine tum he kriya me liye bhi judge kiya , I m sorry, air job tumne mujhe ruhi me bare mein warn kiya to I thought ki u were jealous of her kyunki woh mere friend this, but trust me won mere surf friend thi hamesha she has..."he tried to explain Sharon. Sharon smiledI-"i know ruhi tumhari friend thi u donnt need to explain me , aur aan mein much bolo if u allow " he nodded a yes with his head just like a small little boy.
Sharon-" Swayam I know u were hurt beyond repair maine Jo kuch bhi kaha tha that was my impulse I didn't meant it I swear Swayam,par baad mein I realise that it won't be easy , mein apni us galti ko right karne ke liye har koshish karna cahti thi aur Maine ki bhi woh bhi poore dil se .mein ruhi ka truth tum he ialiye nahi batana cahti this because I was jealous of your and ruhis bond but I was worried about u , I just wanted u to be safe. I know Maine kriya she friendship ek agenda she ki thi but the v next day I realised ki won bahut achi hai and my friendship with her is just as true as your .". Both looked into each others eyes and had their llhh , their was silence, Sharon broke the silence " Swayam tum he kabhi nahi laga ki I loved u when we were in a relationship ". She had pain in her eyes ,Swayam saw that pain and felt guilty" Sharon won mein ... ha woh .." he didn't know how to start or what to say.. sharon- " Swayam do u trust me, do u love me?" He was not expecting this he kept quiet for sometime thinking how to react he wanted to scream his lungs out but didn't know how , Sharon took his silence in a wrong way , his silence was killing her she thought his silence meant a "no" and started to move away from him with tears in her eyes. On seeing her going away his life stooped , he was not able to breath he shouted " Sharon I LOVE YOU" she turn around and ran toward him crashing into him . He hugged her tight both were enjoying their place giving each other the tightest hug. She wept and mum led "I love u Swayam", "l love u" . "I love u too Sharon" , "I love u".
Both were in each others arms for for knows how long . When Swayam left his shirt getting wet he moved back and saw a tear stained face of Sharon , he wiped all the tears from Sharon's face by kissing them . He first kissed her eyes , then her cheeks , her nose, her forehead , her chin and then her lips but before pecking her lips he looked at her to seek the permission , in return she just closed her eyes giving him the permission , he placed his lips on her kissing her and making their first kiss special. They parted away for oxygen . Both smiled' and Sharon was blushing , when Swayam saw a blushed Sharon he took advantage of her condition and kissed her again first she was shocked but after few seconds she responded back withsame passion . While kissing they lost their connection from the world, little did they knew that they were being watched by a shocked gang . Everyone's mouth was open, simi and rey were smiling ' ,ahem 'ahem'
Both of them were embarrassed to see the gang.this time Sharon holded Swayam hand in front of every one and said" I love Swayam and we are a couple", Swayam looked at Sharon and was drown in her eyes both were enjoying their. Llhh
Then gang saw this and started singing and enacting
Ek mein aur ek tu

dono mille is tarah

aur jo tann mann mein ho raha hai

Yeh to hona hi tha.


The end

Guys I hope u all like it, sorry for the mistakes .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
wonderfullly writtten
spell bound by this one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
The whole series of chapter was damn amazing!
It was ike watching an episode...with short updates...

Lovely and awesome ending.
Loved the blushing... their kiss and the tight hug!

you described their states very well..
Keep writing! If u write another story do inform me.! Eager to read from you!

Sakshi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
swaron are back.. ye to hona hi tha.. loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
A very big Thank u for ur lovely and encouraging comments they really mean a lot.
Thanks for the likes
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was wonderful and perfect confession to express their feeling of love...loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Superb update...
Love it from the core of heart

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