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Sanjana

@sanjana.sanju

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

its a nice os. Really hated d gangs behaviour atleast swayam realisd his mistake after all. Bt i felt smtg mr should have bein included so dat gang also realise der mistake.its Just my pov. Taarey part was so emotnal. Keep writing mr.. : )

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Di...loved it..
Ye gang..how mean..seriously...
And swayam...I say the only flaw in swayum was and is that he couldn't understand his own sis...
TaaRey*dreaming with teary eyes*
Hitler...😲
Di...soch samajh ke likna chahiye na re...me bhi hitler hai...🤣
Perfect title...
You on writing frenzy ????
Roz ek nya OS..ab jaldi sacred love ka update do...

Loved the os...❤️
Luv yaa..🤗

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Sharina

@shamanbk

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Amazing os

Beautifully written

Thanks for the pm

Edited by shamanbk - 11 years ago

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Namita

@anatomy_nerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

aww...it was really damn cute

i wish it actually happened in D3

" hasna , hasna tab acha lagta hai jab aapke paas koi ho jisko aapki hasi se khushi mile aur rone ka kya fayda jab koi aansu pochne wala hi na ho "

this line was damn emotional i loved it

plz do write some more OS

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Naaz

@zulfinazi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

superb os
hate gang behaviours towards taani
n rey scolding swayam was nic he shld feel shame on himself
taarey wer awsm

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Soumya

@.-Soumya-.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

SUPERB DI

GANG WERE SO RUDE TOWARDS TAANI

FEELING REALLY BAD FOR TAANI

LUVED TAAREY MOMENTS IN CLASSROOM

DEY WEREE ADORABLE

THANX FOR PM

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Ziya Khan

@ZiyaGautamholic

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

I wish aisa hi hua hota di..! Aaj taarey hamare samne hote..!
CVs couldnt realise this.. They just killed the pure love..!
Shittz..!
Anyways reading ur os's and ff's makes me happy..!
A big smile comes on..!
Again awesome os..!
But i missed that natkhat romance..! ;) ;)
Awww rey love u yaar.!
Yeeahh rey screamed at swayam too..!
And team ki toh >_<
Hehheeheh nice cute realisation..!
Love u taarey and miss u alot.!