A TAAREY FF: LOVE IS BLIND

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Ashu

@Avalanche.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesome concept!!
Please continue soon and pm me!!

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Priyanka Saha

@StarBull

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

love it...

nyc cs...

plzzz updt ASAP...

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914863

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

hai guyz😊...so my first chapter is ready👏..im damn nervous 2 knw d reaction f u guyz...finger crossed 2 hve gud result...so here u go😃

CHAPTER 1

Everything ws perfect...d chillin night...d cold wind...d beach..d sea waves..d cute couple n dier date...its 1 f dier happiest momnt...he proposd her 4 marryin him...she felt herself as d happiest person in d world...it ws always her dream 2 marry him, KARAN her boyfrnd...he always made her life happier dan b4...dey vere considered as d mst cute couple...every1 vere jealous f dem...

'hello!...taani u didnt answer me...my knees r painin...'...he cutely said n waitd 4 her answer
'yes..😊'...she said n smild seein her impatient boyfrnd..

he happily gt up n huggd her tightly...ahh!..even d god vil b jealous seein d cute couple...dey broke d hug n smild 2 eachothr...

'trust me taani...nothin gud happnd lyk dis 2 me ever'
'd only gud happnd 2 me s u' ...she said lookin straight in his eyes...

he tuk her hands n went near d fastly rollin sea waves...it felt as if dey vere also happy 4 d couple...d water touchd bth f dier feet...

'sss...dey r so cold'...she said while stepin bck..
'not so mch' he said while tkin a step forward 2wards d sea...

he turnd n lukd at her...she nodded her head in a 'come here'...he nodded bck in a 'no' n den *splah* he splahd d water on her...

'karan!!'...she frownd...

he laughd ...n again threw sme water...dat ws enough 4 d angry bird, she splashd water bck sme...

'whoah!!'...he didnt expectd dat...

he spplashd sme mre on her...bt taani ws taani she s nt less dan any maths teachers in school...her anger reachd its height😡...n strtd 2 chase karan...bt b4 she cud catch him he ran frm his angry gf...bth vere enjoyin d cat n mouse game...a min b4 she felt d water cold bt nw her aim ws 2 get karan n 4 dat she ws ready 2 bear d cold...she ran in d water 2 get him...while dis fun ws goin on unknown 2 bth f dem karan ws runnin little deep in d water...taani stpd chasin ven she saw karan goin too far...

'karan!!...stp...i'll nt do anything''...she shoutd ..
'u sure??'...he askd nt sure bout her
'yea...n dnt go dere its dangerous...come here'...she shoutd again
'nthin vil happen...see'... he tuk a step bck
'cme!' ...dis time she gt worried seein him goin further deep

he laughd at his gf's worried face n strtd 2 walk 2wards her...bt splash...a huge wave covered him...

'karaannn!!' ...she shoutd

as d wave passd ...he suffered 2 get up den again a huge wave came n he went mre deep into water...his hands tried catch smethin bt all in vain...

'karan...karan!!...ahhh!!...

taani gt up ...all sweatin ...she searchd around...full dark...her fear f darkness increasd she clsd her eyes tight...n calld her mother ...bt it didnt tuk her anytime 2 realise dat she ws dreamin...dreamin bout dat same terrible incident which really happnd...dat incident which tuk her life away frm her...

"kya hua beta"...her mothr entered her room n switchd on d light...
'ma...voh'...
'kya hua ...phirse voh sapna dekha?'...her mother askd all worried bout her daughter

she nodded n tears strtd 2 flow...

'nhi...beta ro mat'...

her mother huggd her...she too huggd her mothr...she cried so hard in d arms f her mothr while her mother jst rubbd her hands on her bck...almst everyday dis happnd...she never slept peacefully aftr dat incident...it had happnd 6 months ago ...karan...her everythin leaved her forever dat day ...she hasnt mvd since dat incident ...she tried so mch bt his dreams hauntd her...vil she ever b happy lyk b4??...ws d only worry f her parents...

'taani...yahan dekh' ...her mother liftd her head...

she lukd at her mothr wid dat dull eyes...she lukd really so weak...

'beta zindagi mein humhe har cheez nhi miltha...agar kch cheez jata hai toh kch cheez miltha bhi hai...shaayad baghvaan tumhareliye kch aur rekha hoga...kam se kam humareliye tum sab kch bhul ja aur apne zindagi mein aaghe badd ja..'...her mother said wid teary eyes
''maa...mein usse kbhi bhool nhi saktha...main..maa...m..m..main''

her mother kept quite n kissd her forehead...

''so ja taani...hum kal subhah baath karenge''...her mother left d room..

''mujhe pata hai main aaplokon ko bohut hurt kar rhi hoon par main usse bhool nhi sakthi...kyun krishnaji apne mere saath aisa kiya...ma kehthe hai ki shaayad aapne mere liye koi aur rekha hoga...iss duniya aisa koi nhi hai jo mjhe karan se zyaada mujhe pyaar kar sakthe hai...toh phir kyun??''...she cried so hard...

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'TRING' 'TRING'...d phne rang ...

'pta nhi ithne raath ko kon bhulaya hoga'...d boy who s sleepin on d bed lazily stretchd his arms 2wards d phne...n tuk it

'hello'...he attended it
'hello swayam...kya kar rhe ho'...d caller said
'REEEYYY!!...yeh poochne keliye tumne bhulaya😡?' ...he angirly demanded to d caller
'haan...kyun...bff hai tera jab chahoon call kar sakthe ho'...
'mera neend kharab kar diya'
'sry dude...tu jaldi door kholo im in frnt f ur home'
'what?..yahan😲?'
'haan jaldi bahar aa full dark hai yahan'
'haan...abhi aa rha hoon'

swayam lazily got up frm bed complainin 2 himself bout his bff...'click' he on d light f his room n went near d door n opnd it...n dere he stud d handsome guy REYAANSH SINGHANIA wid his killer smile 😃...

'ithna smile mat kar... u luk lyk a monkey🤢' ...swayam said angirly to rey 4 spoilin his sleep
'dude gussa mat hoja...mujhe sharon ne yahan aane ko kaha'...rey said as he entered d house n sat on d couch...
'sharon ne... bolo ...kya ha😳' ...his angry face turnd 2 a haapy face
'yuck man...sharon ke baare mein kaha toh bohut excitd aur mere baare mein toh gussa??'
'gf hai voh mera ...happy toh hogi...tu nhi samjega'
'hey..hello...mujhe ithna chotta mat samjho...mujhe bhi ek gf hai'...like a child he stuck his tongue out..
'haan...haan...naam keliye...yeh kaho tumne kbhi kriya i love u kaha hai??'
'har relation mein i love u kehna zaroori hai kya??'
'nhi...par as a gf treat krna zaroori hai'
'yeah...yeah...watever...tu ab ithne raath ko mujhe love lecture dega kya??'
'hummm...fine bolo kya kaam hai'
'k...dekho sharon ne mujhe ek file diya tha...par voh file mere haath se gaya...agar yeh tera gf ko pta chalega toh she'll kill...so tujhe mera help krna hoga...uss file ke copy sharon ke paas hai...tum usse voh file lega aur uss file ka copy banakar mujhe dega...wats say?? easy kaam haina??'
'oho...so sharon ke baare mein nhi balki tere baare mein hi hai...ryt??'
'haan...dude plzz yaar help kar na mera...'
'par voh file main sharon se lega kaise??'
'kch bhi karke le...actin or flirtin...kch bhi choice s urs'
'excuse me...voh mere gf hai main acting nhi kar saktha ...n fflirtin toh bilkul bhi nhi'
'ohh...mr.perfect kch bhi karke laaannaaa!!!'
'mmm...let me look...'
'thnx dude...kal i'll cme n vil take it''
'kal kab??'
'night"
'tum humesha night mein hi kyun aatha hai'
'kyunki...kyunki...mujhe tumhare neend kharab karne hai'
'i knew it'
'cool...den gud nyt'
'par rey...ab tum yahan reho...ithna raath hua na'
'maine kab kaha dat im goin...main toh tumhare neend kharab krne keliye yehi hi hoga'
'tu mujhe kabhi zinda nhi chodoonga'
'kabhi nhi😉'

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precap- "hello mom...aapne phone kyun kiya"
''swayam...taani aaj vahan aa rhi ho''
"aaj??...aapne pehle kyun nhi bathaya"
"aaj hi decide kiya tha beta...agar voh yaha aur rha toh voh kabhi bhi apne zindagi mein aage nhi badega

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Edited by silpa-taarey - 11 years ago

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awsm start

Loved it

Feel bad for taani

Rey spoiled Swayams sleep haha just for a file

Swayam sounds so cute wen complaining

Update soon

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Great beginning to a beautiful story :)

Loved it :)

Awesome :)

Update sooon :)

Thanx for the PM :)

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Aiman

@princess_tara

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

superb start
it was fabulous
feeling sad for taani
i hope rey make her happy soon
luv reyam part it was so funny
rey spoils swayam's sleep just for a file
luv their convo
precap is really amazing
taani is coming to live with swayam
update it soon