Miscalculation: A kriyaansh and Swaron FF

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Sneha

@Arsha_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Amazing update.

Great going.

Loving your story very much.

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Ankita

@anki_22

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
anki...mumma...muje bahot sochna padta hai tumhari update pe cmnt krne ke liye...
sorry in advance..cmmnt will be short...
so rey is having a huge crush on the girl with green hair...as told already..i love him..nd kriya dont u dare hurt him...or else..or else kuch nai mai kya kr skti hu...
jokes apart...dude swayam is pretending himself outside...he is back to himself with rey...nd he will protect him...wow.rab ne mila di jodi...again jokes apart...i felt hatred for vicky in prologue bt it seems mask is his choice too...green hair girl...she felt sparks with my boy...nt a bad start of realisation kri...4th yr bstch dsnt involve themselves in clg ffairs...mostly r of 2nd yr...dats strange..nt so common...but dat is y u r anki right...???...
woah...she crumbled the ribs of two seniors...impressed...
diva is here...sharon...youth icon of country...mask again...sensitive girl...simmi is a darling friend i must say...over all...fantastic start..
loved it...
dnt worry nt more than you

i love u loads bachcha..😳😳 thank you soo much for the comment..😃

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Rey is a Nerd! 🤣🤣

LOL.. it seems like Role-reversal between Rey n Swayam..

well 1st chappy was pretty cool..

I'm loving this story

continue soon

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Rupanshi Garg

@PunjabiKudi_17

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Hayee lovely chaptr..
Cntinue soon.. :))

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alex754

@alex754

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Secret admirer woah thats something
I think i can never imagine kriya with green hair and the way u described its funny though
Awesome update kriya's POV is sooo goood
Thanks for pm