Miscalculation: A kriyaansh and Swaron FF - Page 3

Originally posted by: -Vaish-

loved it...

especially the way you showed the character development...

it wasss so samazing..

ek doubt rey ia first year or second.. Rey is a first year, and Kriya second.. Swayam a first year. and Sharon is still in school..😃

and fourth year status sunke ekdum college ki yaad aa gayi khe khe... IKR..😆hum hi to hain woh log..😆

waiting for next chapter...

Originally posted by: RiyaArShaKapoor

This is amazing
the way of explaining the characters is wow 😃
Loved it,very well written..
I'm puzzled Kriya is 1st yr studnt?? Or 3rd? Kriya is a a second year..😊
Luking frward for story to unfold
Update soon

Originally posted by: So_Naley

I always expected this one to be good coz u are such a fabulous writer Anks !! 😊

that made my chhatii bigger by 2/3inches..😆😆

But guess what !? Its turned out great !!!
Each character is starkly different from each other !
They have their own individualities yet everyone is likable in their own ways! (Yeah even Kriya ! ;) )

I have and will always be a hardcore Reyam shipper and you created such a beautiful bond between them !! Kudos to you for that !!
Love how Swayam understands Rey so well !!
(I have already developed a minor wala crush on this Swayam...he is just so perfect *blush* ) 😆😆😆 am really really glad that u liked him😳😳 and the reyam bond..yush, that ish something we all ship, no..?😉

Kriya seems like the wildcard in this one who can turn the story in whichever direction she wants to...will be intriguing to see how you use her in the future chappy's !!

that is making me all nervous..😕😕 I really hope I can deliver what you expected..

Sharon seems like a beautifully layered but yet lovable character!
I just like her a lot !

My fav part was Kriya noticing Rey's piercing glances at her...atleast she is aware that he exists and is affected by him !
Good going !!

Update soon !!!!
And ty for the pm !! 😊