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Entry 10 : Challenges and Distances




Distance, that's what they needed right now, but it was painful to stay away after seeing each other after 1 whole year. A year filled with loneliness, wait and exasperation. Exactly, that's how both defined it, a year filled with wait, which was painful, very much painful. And the biggest thing was, they themselves decided to stay apart just to prove their thrones.

She rubbed her arms, an eerie feeling getting on her nerves as the silence was leading this meeting to nowhere. She pressed her lips in a hard line as she saw him struggle with the same feeling. If he is having nothing to say then why he wanted to meet her? And this was probably the dumbest question as she herself was so desperate to meet him. After a year they were meeting and they had nothing much to say, WOW! She shoved her hands in air, imaginary.

"So, Ermmm...How is your Mom?" He asked her, just to fill in something.

And she hold her breath back, did he saw her imaginary shoving her hands? She closed her mouth, watching him look here and there.

"Mom is fine. I am happy you think so much about her." She said curtly, yet maintaining the sarcasm. Exactly, they were meeting after awful 1 year and he asks about her mom, but then she won't blame him fully, that's how he was- Not so Romeo types. In fact he never was romantic, and she realized it on the last day of their training when she expected him to propose her but nothing happened, in turn they both challenged to be ahead of each other, to be on top positions of their respective companies.

He chuckled hearing her reply, obviously the sarcasm didn't went unnoticed by him. This was the Kriya he knew, always playing on front foot. And even after so many months she was same, the same Kriya he loved challenging.

"Yep, so how is your company going on? I mean I hear so much about the progress in market stats"

He asks her, watching her imaginary rolling her eyes at his question. He knew she was getting irritated, But that was what he liked the most and he wanted to take it all out today.

"Company Stats? So you keep a watch on my Company's stats Reyaansh?" She replied in her ever-royal way, obviously not forgetting to roll her eyes at the end.

"Yes, I think It is necessary in business, to keep an eye on what the opposite firms are doing" He replied genuinely, keeping back the urge to hug her in the moment.

Her face dropped hearing the word "Opposite", she hated how easily she gets swayed each time when she is with him and it's always him bringing her back to reality.

No matter how deeper the feelings were, but the fact remains the same, they were leading persons of two rival companies, fighting in this hustle of mass money making. Past whole year was just not a wait- but was for establishing their individuality, to be ahead of each other. Despite of staying kilometers apart, this was the thing which kept them close, probably the only thing which kept them in their circles.

"My company is going well. And yours?" She spoke, breaking out from her trance and immediately regretting, obviously she knew how his company was, how he has been, how his company struggled from a fall after reaching the heights.

He looked at her immediately, reading her eyes. "My company is doing fine now...Pretty much." He added with a smile.

And she smiled weakly, feeling guilty; this is not the Reyaansh whom she knew. That Reyaansh was never dejected, He knew how to win.

She looked at his face, seeing how drastically he has changed, peeled off, tired, wanting love.

"No, Your Company shouldn't do fine... It should be doing best. Remember, That Challenge?" She spoke immediately, leaving him baffled.

"Ye-ah... Why?"

"Let's renew it. After 3 months, we will see who is at top. And the winner can ask the other to do anything." She added with a smile.

"Oh, Challenge Miss Ghai? Bring it on. Then I think I'll see you from the top next time" He replied with charm. And she smiled at her inner conscience. That's what she wanted, to see him back.

Bidding her a good bye, he stood up from the pavement, walking away. And she was left numb; probably this was their fate, Distance and Challenges, which they needed for their individual growth. But this never questioned the feelings they have for each other.


"See you soon Rey" She said with a thin water film covering her view. She looked at his disappearing form, she do wished to hug him once. To just let all their distances merged into a thin line. But then as they say, Love carries pain hidden in its emotions' their story was the same, their love had pains of Distance and Challenges, and they are the reason of it being alive also.








Edited by ..nams.. - 11 years ago
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Entry 11 : Yet Another Romeo Juliet





How to deal with situation when something which depicted Life to you glares back at you as Death? Mulling over the same, I started swinging between Life and Death or maybe to and fro, as any onlooker can see. I was staring ahead at nothing when I saw him, his back facing me and his stance emanating profuse tranquil. I stopped the second I saw him abrupt-ing the whole ordeal of choosing my fate. I stepped down from the swing and started walking towards him in slow apprehensive steps only to see him walking further, drowning himself in sea. NO! Not again. I won't let him die at the hands of water... again. I ran towards him as fast as I could, went further trying to catch him, stop him, hold him so tight for never letting that hold loosen and letting him leave me. I won't let him leave me... again. Why is he doing this to me, leaving me all alone to face this world without his assurance? Wait. Why am I unable to get hold of him? This should not be happening. I stopped to glance at him only to have myself panic stricken. NO! REY! All I could do was to shout watching him downing himself and dieing along with the glowering red ball of hope. I guess that was what I needed to come back to veracity and find myself drown in sea until my shoulders. I smirked sadly, I guess this is my time of departure. He has been waiting for me since last four months, now I shall return to him to complete what was left incomplete in this world. Here comes your Kria, Rey.

Kria Ghai, national level swimmer, intractable in this field, star of college and Soul of Rey. Rey, Reyaansh Singhania, dancing icon of college, dream of every girl and Life of Kria. These two were inseparable since the time they were born, both their mothers being best friend they kept meeting each other. The equation between them furthered to friendship during school to finally love in second year of college. For Rey life was Land while for Kria life was Water given the fact that the respective elements were an important ingredient of who they were. As much Rey was passionate about dance, he pried away from water for he had hydrophobia but then the fact never made him stop Kria to live her passion. In fact there were numerous auditions he missed just to cheer her up during her competitions. For Kria, she lived life only under two circumstances, either while swimming or with Rey. When swimming, she felt her true self, she let herself fly like a mermaid as if it was her kingdom.

It was one of those days when both Kria and Rey came for spending quality time at private beach. In between Kria went away to swim and Rey sat back watching Kria live her life to fullest. Seeing the contended look on her face, while swimming, did wonders to him. While swimming Kria stopped at a point, blank faced. She seemed to look beneath her. When I shouted her to ask what happened she replied airily that it was nothing, just her feet got entangled in certain hydra plant. She bent down trying to unravel herself completely not in possession of the fact that a tide was heading in her direction. Seeing the tide approaching her, Rey panicked, forgetting the detail that he doesn't even know basics of swimming courtesy his fear of water, he ran towards her to salvage her. Amidst reaching to her, Rey found himself caught in water. Flapping himself like fish out of water, he tried to reach towards Kria instead of getting himself out of sea oblivious to fact that Kria was screaming her lungs for him to get out, to save himself. In the matter of few minutes Kria saw her Life snatching away her Life, in matter of few minutes Kria found herself as reason behind Rey's death, she held herself guilty for not being able to save him. She somehow survived tide and found herself disentangle but for what, her life was snatched away cruelly from her by none other than by her Life. It was in that moment she left swimming, in fact she left going anywhere near water.

After four months, in the same place Kria gave up on her life to join Rey in Afterlife to be able to laugh with him, talk to him, share her Life with him. Their love story has not been much different from that of Romeo and Juliet. In the play Romeo died seeing Juliet lifeless and Juliet killed blaming herself for his death. Here, Rey died to protect Kria and Kria, well, she deliberately killed herself at the hands of Life to compensate the guilt she carried along with her.







Edited by ..nams.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Category 1 : Entry 2 [The Funny Business Of Love] & Entry 3 [Old School Romance]


Category 2: Entry 8 [Edge Of Desire] & Entry 9 [Beyond this World]


I wanna vote for one more in Category 2... I wish I could.
Edited by _SenbonZakura_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Category 1 : entry 1 (ishq wala love)
Entry 2 (business of love)
Category 2 : entry 9 (beyond the world)
Entry 8 (edge of desire)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Category 1
Entry 2 : The (Funny) Business Of Love
Entry 4 : Unwanted Charms

Category 2
Entry 8 : Edge Of Desire
Entry 9 : Beyond This World


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I soo wish I could vote for three in Catagory 2, but well..! these are the most beautiful stories I've ever read.!! thanks to this contest...!😊
Edited by anki_22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Category 1
Entry 1 : Ishq Wala Love
Entry 3 : Old School Romance

Category 2
Entry 9 : Beyond This World
Entry 11 :Yet Another Romeo Juliet

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Category 1:
Entry 3 - Old School Romance
Entry 4 - Unwanted Charms

Category 2:
Entry 7 - Affairs Of Honor
Entry 9 - Beyond This World
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Category 1:
Entry 2 -The (Funny) Business Of Love
Entry 4 - Unwanted Charms

Category 2:
Entry 7 - Affairs Of Honor
Entry 8 - Edge Of Desire
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CATEGORY 1 : ENTRY 2 AND ENTRY 4

CATEGORY 2 : ENTRY 9 AND ENTRY 11
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Posted: 11 years ago
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category1-
Entry 2 : The (Funny) Business Of Love
Entry 3 : Old School Romance

category-2
Entry 7 : Affairs Of Honor
Entry 9 : Beyond This World

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