Snow White and her Prince Charming! KR OS

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

This is Just Sooo Beautiful !!

Loved each and every part of it the OS !!!

Soo emotional.

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Dammmnmmm
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Its so beautifull nahh beautifull bolana its not even 2% bit compliment for ur writing
Universe ji apne itne less word kyu banaye i hate u ha aab mai kya karu
If i read it 100 times na tho bhi kam hai
Really really really love it so much
Kriya reyansh ki fight
Unka 12 year ke the tab first kiss and romance
Full on suspense tha ki aage kya hoga
Awesome
Rey ka hamesha satana kriya ka face banana
U described everting just perfect *madhuri style*
Rey ki feeling ahh loved truely
Kriya conffesion full gathering people mom dad friend teacher sabke samane
Guts chahiye and she proven that
Conffesion <3 mindblowing
Thanx for the most wonderfull os thanks a lot

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

I don't even know where to start from ...

Pardon my rant because that is exactly what I am going to do after reading this piece of ecstacy

it has always been my personal opinion that write ups come out to be more elegant when written with simplicity where simple words are encarved .. And that is exactly what you did Pallavi ... You created magic , sheer magic with words . This piece had every damn element highlighted beautiful and every freaking emotion portrayed with utter brilliance that it striked the strings of my heart ... It felt like you knitted down the 12 years of their life in one OS . It felt complete and it was out and out bliss...complete bliss to read this ...,

You have an amazing quality of adding the right touch of words to the sequence ...the story flowed in a perfect streamline...the tiny punches , the light hunor , the hidden feelings , the outburst of emotions , the confession , lord it was flawlessly depicted ... It was absolute heaven to read this piece of magic you created ...

I loved your writing style and this by far is one of the best piece of write up I have ever read in this genre in any forum on any couple. This is ur first work I have read ...you should definitely write more Pallavi ! You ought to write moree

Thanks deetha for posting this or else we readers would have missed this amazing write up ^_^

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Supar dupar os
love it
rey irritating kria
n than kria n rey's 1st kiss in the age of 12
awww so sweet
then during snow white play rey wake up kria
was awazing
n then their convo in car n then scenes in house n at door was awsome
than kria's speech at graduation part
was adorable
f**king love the os

Edited by kriapatel - 11 years ago

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

unres...

hayee dii pehle to Thank uh fr d tag... <3 <3

coming to the OS... hayee... its... fabulous..

i dont have words to explain it...

perfect di... hayeee. KR ki sweet story...

awwwieee <3

Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 11 years ago

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

I normally dont read ff,os anymore,as i always run short of time,i just see the posts,commnt on them,and rush,but the name of this os caught my attention,i am a fan of fairy tales,i just thought ke lets open dis,and will read it after commenting on all the posts,and here i am not rushing anywhere,not gettng up for one time also,i rea dthe whole os in one go!!!!! dis is the 1st os i guess,maxm the 2nd os which i have read on D3 forums,and i am thankful that i took my time and opened this!!!!!!

The os was justt beautifulll,i always love dis love hate relationship and here it was a complte mix of both!!!! rey and kriya's fights,rey asking her for prom,the car sequences,tha caring rey!!!!! the part where rey kiss her on the porch,and reply to her questions,that was justt awesomeee!!!! then kriya hiding from her!!! the year book,ey's feelingss were soo beautifully portrayed!!! kriya's last speech and her proposal!!!! wowww sach mein dis is a afairy tale love story!!!!!!

thaaank uuu for postingg it and kudos to the person who wrote it!!!!!!

p.s--- i am going to read it agaain 2morw,bcoz i could imagine the scenes clearly and want the repeat telecast 2mrw😊😊 and want to add that i want a pm whenver dis person wrtes any story😊😊 and now i will start reading other stories also,bcoz i think i am missing a lot😳

Edited by pia.raha - 11 years ago

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GobarMata

@GobarMata

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Beautiful story
amazingly written
loved their Love-Hate relationship

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SaNa Rahim

@SSsanasonu

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

M.A.G.I.C❤️

Edited by SSsanasonu - 11 years ago

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Simmi/Anela

@LoveShakti

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Wonderful it is

Loved it a lot

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Jyoti

@jyoti_arsha

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

THIS IS ONE OF D BEST OS.. I HAVE GONE THROUGH DEE...loved it yr.. amazing work... i like rey as a cute lover boy (bonemind :-P) i want a boyfriend like rey :'( mummmaaa

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