VruShan OS!!:) [first attempt] - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome first attempt yaar ! good to see Vrushan OS , after along time !
beautifully wriiten !👏
plz do write more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really nice OS!
Keep writing dear!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ikki215

awesome first attempt yaar ! good to see Vrushan OS , after along time !

beautifully wriiten !👏
plz do write more!

ThanK U!!!:)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was amazing and fabulous os... liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it! Keep writing re... VruShan ke baare mein padke mann nahin bharta... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was adorably cute :) Superb for a first timer.
The way you explained everything it was fun to read, all the characters behaving accordingly looked appealing. My favourite part is when shantanu says to ameeta mam that "it is none of my business but this twist looks interesting", it was the perfect line and this is exactly how one can explain shan in real life. So kudos to you on that!

Plus it was really cute how you didn't end this on a confession, it was surprising as well as didn't bother me much because the whole thing is written very nicely.

Ofcourse continue! No need to ask on VruShan ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

it was amazing and fabulous os... liked it

Thnk u so much!!:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshni_rj

Loved it! Keep writing re... VruShan ke baare mein padke mann nahin bharta... :)

Thnx... sme here!!:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhimathur

It was adorabely cute :) Superb for a first timer. The way you explained everything it was fun to read,all the characters behaving accordingly looked appealing. My favourite part is when shantanu says to ameeta mam that "it is none of my business but this twist looks interesting", it was the perfect line and this is exactly how one can explain shan in real life. So kudos to you on that!

Plus it was really cute how you didn't end this on a confession, it was surprising as well as didn't bother me much because the whole thing is written very nicely.

Ofcourse continue! No need to ask on VruShan ;)

Thnk you so much for ur views...!!:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great OS!
your first attempt was succesful..😆
i loved this OS..it was cute sweet and it was on vrushan..😳
nice one
keep writing

cheers
nishi
Edited by Nishi.Kss - 11 years ago

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