SwaRon lacking in terms of concept , creativity and storyline - Page 3

Very well written post. And to be honest I have nothing to add, as for now I would love to have action take on these issues than adding more issues to the list.

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

Great post Akanksha. You said it all. I would like to comment on the romance part a bit. I was a DMG viewer and D3 is from the same CVs and still is. D3 is better than DMG in all respects expect the romance part. The Romance Qoutient in DMG was like way too high than what we see in D3. Specially the post relationship phase was a big let down. It didn't go beyond 9-10 scenes I guess. The couple is different. But still I I expect more from creatives in D3.

Originally posted by: muskurana

Very well written post.

My issues with the current SS track :

1: Ameeta ma'am said SwaRon ka lovey-dovey romance aapko jitna dekna hai aap dekh chuke hai. Sorry but in 2.5 years ,we have seen only 1 week of romance. Just one week. And by giving us more conflict, she is not giving us something new to spice up things but actually giving the same old thing and boring us more.Break up track has been running for 4 months now.

2: Swayam's character has gone from becoming special to ordinary. His immense love for Sharon is nowhere in sight, Swayam's dialogues which have always been his USP are missing. Swayam's care is missing. His life revolves around Sharon.How can that change in a day?

3- SwaRon have no passion for dance now. I mean the college's dancing diva is nt interested in dance and Swayam the thinking tank of the team doesn't care either.

4- SwaRon scenes seem filler with just cute randomness and with patch up track nowhere in sight.

5- Screenspace needs to be proper too equal to KR and not equal to supporting characters for god's sake.

@red I agree with that.
Sharon and Swayam are not supporting characters and should not treating like one

Originally posted by: silver6strings

I agree with you on this topic...SwaRon have NO Concept-Creativity-Storyline...You have said it clear enough so I won't say much...

the base that their Characters had is nowhere to be seen and their story is given an effect of a leap which they din't even take 😳

It all looks as if, it's been years since SwaRon had a breakup and are meeting each other, Swayam has lost the Phd on Sharon who understood Sharon without a word and hence is now confused even if she clearly says something :/ and is even SO casual with Sharon that I won't take a minute to misunderstand them to be best of friends who have met after years 🥱 I say met after years coz they act as if they don't know how the other person will react or what the other will be feeling :/

Swayam has forgotten all that he has gone through n is being casual with Sharon but isn't giving her a chance -_- Sharon, Swayam ke paas aane ke chakar mein sabko apne paas la rahi hai but Swayam -_-

the basic connectivity he nahi hai SwaRon scene's mein joh honi chahiye

Pata nahi yaar ab toh sachmin likhne mein bhi boriyat hoti hai...mann ubh gaya hai aisa treatment dekh ke SwaRon ka 😭

Want SwaRon giving proper Focus...

Totally agree with you .. Swaron cannot be casual with each other 😕
the base of the track is soemwhere at fault 😡

Originally posted by: Mihi4VruShan

Very very well thought of and penned down post partner. 😊🤗

And honestly, thank you for a walk down the memory lane. It reminded me of all the good times, and well, some of the bad times. I won't be digging much into that, well🤔

Coming to your post, thank you for explaining everything in a nutshell. I loved 2013 Jan-November ka phase the most, reasons being too obvious , and as if a volcano had erupted, 25 November ke baad everything went hocus pocus and there was no continuity at all. Leave that, there was NOTHING worth watching.

SwaRon Track: SwaRon track doesn't mean "coochy coo" romance. It means substance. It means development. It means depth. It means intensifying the character. It means utilizing VruShan potential in the Dil track as well. It means, NOT butchering SwaRon and their individual characters.

And yes, not only me, but ALL SwaRon fans think that you don't know ANYTHING about Swayam and Sharon. My earnest request to you is to rewatch VruShan/SwaRon/TanHa scenes to at least know what Swayam and Sharon are all about.

I loved Sharon's love track. Thought ki, after relationship an effort would be made to develop their love track, but result? Babaji Ka Thullu 👎🏼

I'll prefer to keep quiet about the cycle ride. It didn't have any continuity, god knows why they were behaving like everything is right about them :v LMAO. I watched it on daily motion and practically thinking it was crap in terms of creativity -_- Perhaps the first and foremost thing due to which the viewers fell more in love with SwaRon. Cliched scenes are not good. They were shown long back in April also, and they were shown during the cycle ride also. And we are like, WHAT THE HELL? Already SwaRon fans are pissed off, not watching your show, do you really think you show scenes by copy-paste formula and SwaRon fans will eep on it?

No! For gods sake we need a proper track! CONTINUITY. What is happening between them ? Please let us know. Monologue kaha hai? 😵

Intimacy I don't think a couple needs to be intimate to prove the love between them, and it's neither like VruShan fans want SwaRon and only SwaRon romance. But the only intimate scene was during RDX party wala. -_- Which I liked, in fact I loved it. Uske baad there has been no intimate scene, but when you are in a relationship you tend to be intimate.

Base Of SwaRon Arey individual characters ko hi maar daala hai toh how can you expect the base to be intact? Pehle fix the characters CVs. Then develop a SwaRon track.

Oh dude, woh rehearsal hall wala dance was __/\__ I think this says it all. It wasn't a dance, the post dance reaction, awkwardness, nothing at all. Not good. 👎🏼

I would say nothing about third unwanted person in this angle. You have already said everything about it. So I'm in no mood to mention about it -_-

Dialogues They are a BIGGG let down. Seriously, I mean I want to know what's with the script writers? Theeke I don't blame them because creatives jaisa bolenge waisa hi likhna hoga. The dialogues make no sense AT ALL. No sense 😕 Monologue 👎🏼 Interactions 👎🏼 Crap👍🏼 SwaRon thinking about others 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 WHICH IS A BIGGG NO FROM MY SIDE. SwaRon can't think about each other? Really? They have been in a relationship for gods sake and they can't think about each other? Wacky enough?

Patch Up I won't take an aera gera patch up. I will DETEST it even more than I'm detesting the new CVs now if there's no proper build up and patch up is given IF SWAYAM ACCEPTS HER BECAUSE OF KRIA. Abhi toh phir bhi I watch on daily motion, but if Swayam accepts her because of Kria, I WILL NOT TOLERATE IT and stop watching D3 even on daily motion. That'd be the end of D3 for me.

If she says she wants to explore the break up phase, let her! SwaRon have been stuck in this loop since freaking four months. Doesn't that prick her conscience or doesn't she feel that she's showing crap in the name of SwaRon?? Doesn't she feel that YES SHE SHOULD EXPLORE THE RELATIONSHIP PHASE AS WELL?

Frankly, she's been a BIGGG LET DOWN.. Bada wala. I hope she reads this post of yours. Hope she comes to know that she's not showing SwaRon the way their characters are. A biggg thumbs down to Ameeta from my side. No ma'am. She hasn't earned it yet. 👎🏼 I don't have ANY hopes from her. Palki ma'am please come back. She's the one who knows SwaRon the best!! 😎

lovely comment.Totallly agree 👍🏼
what irks me is why are we the only fanbase who have to beg for every single thing 😭 😡

Originally posted by: D3fication

Agree with each and every line of your post. Creatives really need to look into all these points and actually take some proper action heeding this because the current SwaRon is absolute nonsense, like the rest of D3 is. The only saving grace of SwaRon right now are VruShan. If they weren't there in the show right now I swear I would've quit the show. :/ :/ Here just for them.

ditto//..NO Swaron=no d3
I really hope they llok into the matter 🤢

Originally posted by: Silver.Surfer

Very well written post. And to be honest I have nothing to add, as for now I would love to have action take on these issues than adding more issues to the list.

😆 One can only hope 😛

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

Great post Akanksha. You said it all. I would like to comment on the romance part a bit. I was a DMG viewer and D3 is from the same CVs and still is. D3 is better than DMG in all respects expect the romance part. The Romance Qoutient in DMG was like way too high than what we see in D3. Specially the post relationship phase was a big let down. It didn't go beyond 9-10 scenes I guess. The couple is different. But still I I expect more from creatives in D3.

@red: so agree... We technically enver got to see them together..I dont want to see them patching up on the last episode 🥱