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This is not a frustration post . This is for cvs to know where exactly they are going wrong and what our expectations for SwaRon are.
Firstly, we want a proper SwaRon Track ..now SwaRon track doesnt mean random SwaRon scenes. SwaRon's story started with two characters having opposite personalities and sharing a love/hate relationship ..SwaRon has kept evolving with time...First came the Abandon corridor that brought many changes in Swayam and the trial relationship period brought changes in Sharon .. Sharon had become much more understanding person and had started to respect others .
In 2013, we witnessed different kinds of equations between SwaRon.. Well, the asthma track got them closer .they did not immediately start dating after Sharon's asthma got revealed but this took their relationship/bond to the next level . It lead to the creation of a new bond ..a bond of understanding between sharon and Swayam.. Swayam and Sharon together fought against their problems with Swayam being her support system.. Sharon gradually realised his true love, companionship and this honesty in their relationship made her fall for him,... She witnessed his selfless and caring nature that gradually made her realise how they are meant for each other..
Then came the papa track.. well, I had expected alot from that track in terms of SwaRon but it was again wasted in glorifying someone though ultimately I loved the way Sharon stood up for Swayam and even fought with Rishi for Swayam . The confession came as a surprise. The circumstances forced them to get closer . Well, all 3 confession were unique.. be it the trial confession, the papa one or the classroom one they were unique coz all three happened in different circumstances and took the story forward . How is Swayam melting for Sharon taking the story forward?
Yesterday's cycle ride scene was cute but did it make any sense.. from where did chai come? The scene was repetitive.. where was the creativity? how much of relevance does the scene have... cvs have mistaken us.. we will not sit and eep over swaron moments that come out of the blue without any connection .. did it make any sense? it wasnt as magical as the previous one.. a scene's exclusivity make sit more precious. Okay, Sharon and Swayam cannot be all giggly and blushy after a dance rehersal or cycle ride.. They are not a couple.. This is really ruining the essence of Swayam .. remember pehla nasha and ore piya where he tends to lose to himself but comes back to his senses the moment they share an intense passionate moment. Every Scene had a meaning earlier .
1. Creativity : SwaRon was never an ordinary love story coz Swayam never let it be. The concept was itself based on finding happiness in the most simple things. Thats what made Sharon realise that there is a life beyond class, and materialism .. This is what let her guards down and gradually accept her feelings for Swayam. Every little gesture made an impact in the story . Scenes/ dialogues were framed on the simplest of things like egg, scrap book, pencil, sharon corner..it brought out the passion, intensity between the relationship this couple shared... Swayam's wishlist was a cherry on the top.That only showed his pure and innocent this boy's love for Sharon is. Why repeating the same scenes that too when it doesnt go with the current storyline ? 😲 Okay may be cvs gave us a cycle ride seeing the posts on the forum but the scene should have some connectivity with the storyline .. ? 🥱 Remember the recent payal scene? It was too romantic in the way it was shot.It was shot at the time when Swayam and Sharon had major issues yet it was successful in bringing out the love swayam has for Sharon. Even the pehla nasha dance showed how desperate these two were to be close to each other yet could not be. Thats the passion level.
2. Initimate scenes: Now on a serious note, I did not understand what Ameeta mam meant by coochi coo scenes . We have seen many passionate dance sequences but we got ONLY 1 week of SwaRon romance.. I think the only initimate scene we got is the RDX sequence. well , RDX party still remains one of my favourite scenes for a reason . The reason is Swayam Shekawat's dialogue that followed "tum bohat spl ho...'" That highlighted his innocence, honestly, purity in love . It actually showed a jist of what SwaRon is all about . What Swayam and Sharon's characters were all about .
Khamakha nahi : It basically showed Swayam's underlying love /passion for Sharon and how hard Sharon was trying to run away from him but failed miserably.. Every dance sequence had a mood, a sense of passion , meaning be it haye rama, yaadein, maule mere, pehla nasha etc. It really is not about how intimate the scene but the level of passion , intensity and depth the scene brings out .. it has to depict pure love. For Eg : tum hi ho scene made Sharon realise that she does share something with swayam which is beyond "like" ..she hated the fact that he was avoiding her and moving away instead of accepting her advances and thats when she realised that Swayam is going away and she cannot let that happen .
3. The base of SwaRon track :We surely had a problem with Swayam being rude to Sharon coz of Kria but Swayam is now being casual with Sharon and his love for her. I cannot fathom the fact 🤢
He thinks Sharon is being nice to Kria hence she deserves a chance ? Now what exactly does that mean..I thought they broke up due to trust issues I suppose ..Swayam fell in love with her looonggg back ..even before Kria entered their lives and so how could sharon's behavior with Kria make him change his opinion on sharon. This is shallow . Swayam fell in love with Sharon for WHAT SHE IS . He could see thorugh her , understand her emotions which is why he refused to leave her when she was trying to send him away (asthma track) Its very stupid to see Swayam either being rude or just being casual. Swayam will never offer a Sharon a ride so casually when they are not a couple..where was the awkwardness ? where was the passion, intensity?? where is the story? How can a love story of two individuals be based on a 3rd person. ??
The recent rehearsal hall dance: I would frankly not call it a dance 😕 What is Sharon and Swayam's current equation ??/ They will never happily dance like that which would have no impact on them .. the next thing Sharon says .. Kria is an amaizng dancer lets ask get it choreographed from her,,seriously?? the dance was more like a filler 🥱
4. Krisha: Now, they started off as enemies so I have always expected to see a bond between them but its awkard to see them like best friends /.hugging n all 😕 Justify that cvs ... Sharon initially supported Kria to get into Swayam's goodbooks but why does she think Kria is a good person? That dint really impress me.. show the depth, ?where is the gradual transition.. Swayam getting impressed by all this is even more illogical ..Swayam , the character understands Sharon the most so he would her catch lie /pretence .. eg: the recent secret admirer track.
5. Kriyam: I think they are shown as really close friends coz they have been in touch all this while and swayam has evn told Kria about him and Sharon..so I have nothing to comment on that. I'm okay with that track but dont even think of giving a kriyam cycle ride..its just 🥱😡 No overdose plz :/
6. Individuality : Sharon is the dancing diva? she is the GS ? Where is her role ? She also has to do something apart from supporting Rey Kria , gang and impressing Swayam right?" 😕 Where is her passion for dance? Dance runs in her blood? What happened to her love for dance?
Swayam also seems to have no interest in the dance academy ? Why is that so? what exactly is he interested in? what is the meaning of his character since at the moment has no goals. no passion for dance or Sharon .
Somehow Sharon and Swayam are not central to the plot.
7. Screentime : I know it is important to show other characters as well but why at the cost of SwaRon ? Nil simmi track is treated at par with SwaRon , even nil vicky scenes are given more screenspace .. such scenes are important but giving uneccersary screentime to them and reducing SwaRon scenes isnt acceptable 👎🏼 They too are the LEADS of D3. Many fans out here watch the show ONLY for SwaRon... the fact that they are not given proper screentime and track irritates us even more .. We WATCH D3 FOR ONLY SHARON AND SWAYAM .
9. Patch Up : Now again..there is a reason why we keep asking for a patch up.. in the past two years we have seen differnt kinds of phases except this,..I dont think a love story ends with a patch up.. an interesting storyline can be built even after becoming a couple potraying their maturity, compatibility, togetherness. Beautiful scenes can be written too based on this .
Cvs please build a proper track for them and give a proper storyline.
I have said all that I wanted to . please share your views .
Firstly, we want a proper SwaRon Track ..now SwaRon track doesnt mean random SwaRon scenes. SwaRon's story started with two characters having opposite personalities and sharing a love/hate relationship ..SwaRon has kept evolving with time...First came the Abandon corridor that brought many changes in Swayam and the trial relationship period brought changes in Sharon .. Sharon had become much more understanding person and had started to respect others .
In 2013, we witnessed different kinds of equations between SwaRon.. Well, the asthma track got them closer .they did not immediately start dating after Sharon's asthma got revealed but this took their relationship/bond to the next level . It lead to the creation of a new bond ..a bond of understanding between sharon and Swayam.. Swayam and Sharon together fought against their problems with Swayam being her support system.. Sharon gradually realised his true love, companionship and this honesty in their relationship made her fall for him,... She witnessed his selfless and caring nature that gradually made her realise how they are meant for each other..
Then came the papa track.. well, I had expected alot from that track in terms of SwaRon but it was again wasted in glorifying someone though ultimately I loved the way Sharon stood up for Swayam and even fought with Rishi for Swayam . The confession came as a surprise. The circumstances forced them to get closer . Well, all 3 confession were unique.. be it the trial confession, the papa one or the classroom one they were unique coz all three happened in different circumstances and took the story forward . How is Swayam melting for Sharon taking the story forward?
Yesterday's cycle ride scene was cute but did it make any sense.. from where did chai come? The scene was repetitive.. where was the creativity? how much of relevance does the scene have... cvs have mistaken us.. we will not sit and eep over swaron moments that come out of the blue without any connection .. did it make any sense? it wasnt as magical as the previous one.. a scene's exclusivity make sit more precious. Okay, Sharon and Swayam cannot be all giggly and blushy after a dance rehersal or cycle ride.. They are not a couple.. This is really ruining the essence of Swayam .. remember pehla nasha and ore piya where he tends to lose to himself but comes back to his senses the moment they share an intense passionate moment. Every Scene had a meaning earlier .
1. Creativity : SwaRon was never an ordinary love story coz Swayam never let it be. The concept was itself based on finding happiness in the most simple things. Thats what made Sharon realise that there is a life beyond class, and materialism .. This is what let her guards down and gradually accept her feelings for Swayam. Every little gesture made an impact in the story . Scenes/ dialogues were framed on the simplest of things like egg, scrap book, pencil, sharon corner..it brought out the passion, intensity between the relationship this couple shared... Swayam's wishlist was a cherry on the top.That only showed his pure and innocent this boy's love for Sharon is. Why repeating the same scenes that too when it doesnt go with the current storyline ? 😲 Okay may be cvs gave us a cycle ride seeing the posts on the forum but the scene should have some connectivity with the storyline .. ? 🥱 Remember the recent payal scene? It was too romantic in the way it was shot.It was shot at the time when Swayam and Sharon had major issues yet it was successful in bringing out the love swayam has for Sharon. Even the pehla nasha dance showed how desperate these two were to be close to each other yet could not be. Thats the passion level.
2. Initimate scenes: Now on a serious note, I did not understand what Ameeta mam meant by coochi coo scenes . We have seen many passionate dance sequences but we got ONLY 1 week of SwaRon romance.. I think the only initimate scene we got is the RDX sequence. well , RDX party still remains one of my favourite scenes for a reason . The reason is Swayam Shekawat's dialogue that followed "tum bohat spl ho...'" That highlighted his innocence, honestly, purity in love . It actually showed a jist of what SwaRon is all about . What Swayam and Sharon's characters were all about .
Khamakha nahi : It basically showed Swayam's underlying love /passion for Sharon and how hard Sharon was trying to run away from him but failed miserably.. Every dance sequence had a mood, a sense of passion , meaning be it haye rama, yaadein, maule mere, pehla nasha etc. It really is not about how intimate the scene but the level of passion , intensity and depth the scene brings out .. it has to depict pure love. For Eg : tum hi ho scene made Sharon realise that she does share something with swayam which is beyond "like" ..she hated the fact that he was avoiding her and moving away instead of accepting her advances and thats when she realised that Swayam is going away and she cannot let that happen .
3. The base of SwaRon track :We surely had a problem with Swayam being rude to Sharon coz of Kria but Swayam is now being casual with Sharon and his love for her. I cannot fathom the fact 🤢
He thinks Sharon is being nice to Kria hence she deserves a chance ? Now what exactly does that mean..I thought they broke up due to trust issues I suppose ..Swayam fell in love with her looonggg back ..even before Kria entered their lives and so how could sharon's behavior with Kria make him change his opinion on sharon. This is shallow . Swayam fell in love with Sharon for WHAT SHE IS . He could see thorugh her , understand her emotions which is why he refused to leave her when she was trying to send him away (asthma track) Its very stupid to see Swayam either being rude or just being casual. Swayam will never offer a Sharon a ride so casually when they are not a couple..where was the awkwardness ? where was the passion, intensity?? where is the story? How can a love story of two individuals be based on a 3rd person. ??
The recent rehearsal hall dance: I would frankly not call it a dance 😕 What is Sharon and Swayam's current equation ??/ They will never happily dance like that which would have no impact on them .. the next thing Sharon says .. Kria is an amaizng dancer lets ask get it choreographed from her,,seriously?? the dance was more like a filler 🥱
4. Krisha: Now, they started off as enemies so I have always expected to see a bond between them but its awkard to see them like best friends /.hugging n all 😕 Justify that cvs ... Sharon initially supported Kria to get into Swayam's goodbooks but why does she think Kria is a good person? That dint really impress me.. show the depth, ?where is the gradual transition.. Swayam getting impressed by all this is even more illogical ..Swayam , the character understands Sharon the most so he would her catch lie /pretence .. eg: the recent secret admirer track.
5. Kriyam: I think they are shown as really close friends coz they have been in touch all this while and swayam has evn told Kria about him and Sharon..so I have nothing to comment on that. I'm okay with that track but dont even think of giving a kriyam cycle ride..its just 🥱😡 No overdose plz :/
6. Individuality : Sharon is the dancing diva? she is the GS ? Where is her role ? She also has to do something apart from supporting Rey Kria , gang and impressing Swayam right?" 😕 Where is her passion for dance? Dance runs in her blood? What happened to her love for dance?
Swayam also seems to have no interest in the dance academy ? Why is that so? what exactly is he interested in? what is the meaning of his character since at the moment has no goals. no passion for dance or Sharon .
Somehow Sharon and Swayam are not central to the plot.
7. Screentime : I know it is important to show other characters as well but why at the cost of SwaRon ? Nil simmi track is treated at par with SwaRon , even nil vicky scenes are given more screenspace .. such scenes are important but giving uneccersary screentime to them and reducing SwaRon scenes isnt acceptable 👎🏼 They too are the LEADS of D3. Many fans out here watch the show ONLY for SwaRon... the fact that they are not given proper screentime and track irritates us even more .. We WATCH D3 FOR ONLY SHARON AND SWAYAM .
8. Dialogues: They are a big let down. Dialogues make a great impact and establishing a character's personality.. I am so disappointed on this front.. The dialogues are very plain and flat.. this reduces the intensity.. Swayam and Sharon's lingo need to be worked upon.. Want the poet Swayam back 😭
9. Patch Up : Now again..there is a reason why we keep asking for a patch up.. in the past two years we have seen differnt kinds of phases except this,..I dont think a love story ends with a patch up.. an interesting storyline can be built even after becoming a couple potraying their maturity, compatibility, togetherness. Beautiful scenes can be written too based on this .
A proper track is an amalgamation of proper creativity, strong exclusive storyline, proper footage, justification of individualities , passion, intensity and everything . So where is the storyline for SwaRon? Right now, SwaRon is lacking in terms of creativity .. Writing of SwaRon is very flat, acks innovation and detailing .The quality has gone down . There is so much more to explore but their story is not being taken seriously.Its sad. 🥱
Cvs please build a proper track for them and give a proper storyline.
I have said all that I wanted to . please share your views .
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