A prized Possession !! KriYaansh Two Shot!! Last part pg 6

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kriyaansh.reyam

@kriyaansh.reyam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

I loved your os ...
It's amazing ... Luv the way rey trapped her between the wall and asked her the question...
I luv this os ... Plsss jaldi doosra part bhi de do di ...
Aur haan apne abhi tak Chahun mein ya na ka update nahi diya hai ... Use bhi update kardo na plshhh

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome part...
Loved it...

Sharey convo was fab...
Kriya jealous...👍🏼

Rey ki habit hai Kriya ko apne aur wall ke bichmei trap karne ki...
Some habits dnt change...😉😆

Do cont soon...
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Plz update d next part soon...

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natasha

@tashu_kriyansh

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

nyyyccc..

update the next part sooon...n pls do pm me!!😊

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Do i need to say how much i fell in love with this OS..

naahh.. i guess, but still i will brag about it..

See first thing first don't know what harmonal problem is with my practical brain.. i so loved this childhood romance wala concept..

god that long distance friendship is maintained over years..i liked when kriya thought of cheating a bit and then bechari so hi gayi rey ko dhayan mein rakhte that was cute...

to be frank i never felt the need of relationship wala note which u gave on above because this stry is so mind capturing ki logic gaya tel lene..

then that prank scene... rey smart hai kriya ko jhatt se pehchan liya, i so loved this line

"jisne tumhe pranks khelna sikhaya usi pe prank??? naahhh!! bad idea "

and I can't stop myself imagining his face with that devil smirk...

laddo wala sequence toh kamal tha double meaning talks suna tha par aaj double meaning actions bhi dekh liya, you managed really good in this teasing scene...

those jealousy part was mindblowing i was grinning like an idiot on every line of sharey... to be honest nobody else shows this side of friendship of sharey better than u...

last mein woh kriya ka puppy ki tarah follow karna and then rey ka usko double stana... frankly i loved this mysterious rey, bolta nahi hai par kaam kar jaata hai apna... and more than that i love it when it comes from u...

are u serious yeh part boring tha?

then read this line twice...

"toh call him, pehle wo tumhareliye apni jaan dega and then hum shaadi karenge!! "

its really catchy and made me go mad... i am loving this OS and concept..

here i would mention this Reyaansh ka KRiya ko baar baar cage karne wala scene galat hai yeh toh attyachar hai bechari par, kriya ko complaint karna chahiye... so uske behalf pe main karing tere se..

deetha dear please aise tadpaya na karo paas paas lake fir dur lejake or middle mein latkata chod deti hai, hume next update de do jaldi se please...

_/\_ haath jodti hun...

I so wanna read how rey will proceed with his mission of feelings acknowledgment...

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ash

@CrazyGirl.21

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

As always I loved it.

Rey as always is such a flirt. And he is always the one jisko realise karwana padta that yes Kria u love me.. 😆 Me just loved it. Waiting eagerly for the next part. Do post it soon and keep me informed about it. :D

-Ash. :))

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Awww... this is awesome...😃

I just love this.. bachpan ka pyar ... & specially when its abt family relations...

Aww wow... being in touch with each other from 15 yrs... great..😊

I sooo knew it... rey's in love with her... & she being a naive - never knew about it... 😉

Lol... he's so strict... 11 pm pe kaun sota hai re... 😆

Omg... he's full on flirting ... making her go weak in knees... almost kissing ☺️☺️ & confess bhi kar diya...😲

Rofl.. i loved his comic timing... banda hazir jawab hai... mujhe de de isse ... 😛

Dude... sharon se bhi flirting... bwahahaha... shararati dono ke dono... 😆

Jaldi update kar... shubh kaam me .. no deri...😎