The song was good.. Lyrics wise, as I havent Heard it yet..
I was actually discussing This with Vaish before commenting..
Coz I really dint get the end of it..
As always .. The way u wrote it was awesome..
Especially their povs.. And their feelings..which totally heated up the atmosphre.
It was like everything was upto the feel.. A sexiness personified wala Rey.. And Kriya almost like his slave..as if under his spell..
But dont know kaise.. I kinda lost track.. It was like I was waiting..and waiting.. That yes its gonna happen Next.. But nothing did..
Dont ask what was I waiting for.. Coz I myself am not sure..lol
And the end.. I'm back.. Welcome me? Im clueless what happened here..
since I always thought Reyaansh and Kriya could Never get along.. It has always been the softer Guy inside That Kriya had seen through and fallen for..
So all in all maybe some more.. That could actually put things together would do it..
Im not complaining.. But even after I finished reading I couldnt get the content wala feeling..
And like I said.. Whatever is written is picture perfect.. Just a lil more would do wonders..
Do write more of awesomeness.. Ciaoo :*