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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

the chapter 1 was great... her mom look and take of her...
kriya had gone for a dance audition but got rejected... and then the boy
who was outside talk to judge and the judge call her back and told this boy are taken
audition and are looking for background dancer and want to work with her...
and have select her... do continue soon and pm me

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

hey tis is fabulous n amazing...

totally luv it...

superb...

thx fr the pm n do pm me for the next part...

Edited by jazsidhu - 11 years ago

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alex754

@alex754

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Nice concept and i am liking the way u started the story
Kriya is awesome
Waiting for reyaansh

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KReyAS

@KReyAS

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
the chapter 1 was great... her mom look and take of her...
kriya had gone for a dance audition but got rejected... and then the boy
who was outside talk to judge and the judge call her back and told this boy are taken
audition and are looking for background dancer and want to work with her...
and have select her... do continue soon and pm me

thnx dear

will pm u😊

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KReyAS

@KReyAS

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: alex754
Nice concept and i am liking the way u started the story
Kriya is awesome
Waiting for reyaansh

thnx dear

rey is going to enter soon

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Supab update
love it
n who was tht black boy??!!!

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Awesome start loved it
First decision of her life lead her trouble

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Karishma

@Mystique.Kishi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

wow...it seems like my lucky day in IF or something...There are just so many awesome writers out here...And this was beautiful You have an immaculately neat way of writing. Please keep me posted on the updates, will you?