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Posted: 11 years ago
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Preparations of her engagement were on a role, even Taani started helping. Helping was an excuse; she was waiting ... waiting for her someone special to arrive
Bano re bano meri, chali sasural ko
Taani's taiji started singing in midst of all the preparations taking place.
Aankhiyon mein paani de gayi, dua mein meethi gud dhani le gayi
Taani smiled, forcefully. She was happy, she was getting a better future, but yet still something was incomplete.
Haaye, bano re bano meri chali sasural ko
Her friends started teasing her as they sang. Unknowingly, her eyes started to wonder around, in the hope of someone.
Aankhiyon mein paani de gayi, dua mein meethi gud dhani le gayi
Her impatient nature got to her as she waited. People came but he didn't arrive. The hope to see him had become lower and lower as time passed
Re kabira, maan jaa
He entered the farmhouse and his heart rate increased. Even he was not sure whether it was because of happiness or nervousness.
Re fakira, yun na jaa
He took his eyes away from the ground and looked at the atmosphere
Aaja, tujhe ko pukare teri parchaiyaan
As his eyeballs took notice of the surroundings, it stopped at a sight. She, climbing up the ladder to hang a decoration item.
Re kabira, maan jaa
Her eyebrows curved in irritation, as she was unable to put it properly.
Re fakira, yun na jaa
Her constant efforts had not effect. It was as if the one thing she was given to do had some enmity with her.
Kaisa, tu hai nirmohi kaise harjaaiyaan
His eyes were frozen at her, taking deep interest in her every expression. He just walked away from everyone his only destination was her.
Music
Understanding that she wasn't able to reach, she tried jumping. Acting like she was in a war, and she had to win it. She lost her balance while jumping, and she felt herself falling towards the ground. But instead, she found herself in someone's arms. Her eyes popped out seeing him. A lost hope had been regained. "Rey" she whispered slowly, in shock.

Tooti chaarpayi wohi thandi purvaayi, rasta dekhe

He couldn't believe she was in his arms. He didn't know what this was, a co-incidence or a sign? He felt her arms slowly wrapping around his neck, pulling her even to closer to him.
Doodhoon ki malaai wohi mitti ki suraahi, rasta dekhe
Was it a dream or reality, she questioned herself mentally. She was in this longing wait and it finally came to an end. Her breathing became uneven and heavy in the every second she was in his arms.
Tooti chaarpai wohi thandi purvaai rasta dekhe
He slowly put her down, not for one second he took his eyes off her, nor did she. Her hands, slowly moved it's position from his neck and slithered down to, feelings his arms, his touch ... once again.
Hoo, doodhoon ki malaai wohi mitti ki suraahi, rasta dekhe
His hands automatically went up to her cheek, seeing the small teardrop roll down after leaving her teary eyes. He wiped it away and cupped her face.
Gudiya re gudiya tera gudda pardesiya
Hearing Taani's Taiji singing again, they both broke away from their trance and suddenly she remembered that her engagement was taking place.
Jodi aasmani ho gayi, shagun pe dekho shad mani ho gayi
She stepped back as he looked at her in shock, that moment when they forgot the world was gone ... and they returned to the harsh reality
Haaye gudiya re gudiya tera gudda pardesiya
He didn't know what to say, he didn't want to say sorry because he wasn't sorry ... He loved that moment. After an endless wait he got to spend a, small, yet memorable moment with her
Jodi aasmani ho gayi, shagun pe dekho shad mani ho gayi
She ran away, leaving everyone to think she was shy, but instead she was confused, even she didn't know what she was feeling.
Re kabira maan jaa
She reached her empty room and her hesitated tears came out instantly ... Her decision of marrying Vishesh had started to change.
Re fakira yun na jaa
Whenever she closed her eyes, only one face flashed ... it was Rey. Her heart and mind were in the biggest war possible
Aaja tujhe ko pukare teri parchaiyaan
Where her mind said it was safe to marry Vishesh and her heart argued she would only remain happy with Rey.
Re kabira maan jaa
Puzzled was the state she was in ... then, she remembered her mother's words.
Re fakira yun na jaa
When confused, let your heart take the decision ... it knows best for you
Kaisa, tu hai nirmohi kaisa harjaaiya
It became clear on what she had to do now. She ran out of the room to the hall, where she thought he was.
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Her only aim was to find Rey. Her fearful heart worried even more when she didn't see him in the hall. She quickly asked on of the guests while giving his description ... She couldn't forget any detail about him. After meeting a few people and getting disappointed, one lady told her that she had seen him in Swayam's room. Without wasting a second, she ran to the room and opened the door swiftly ... She stood by the door as she saw him and he saw her. The only difference from then and now was he didn't have his shirt on and his eyes were blood-shot red. There was only silence as she entered and closed the door slowly, making sure to lock it.

~*~
And I'm done. Well, I loovvvee this song it was really really apt to the current situation. So, thoughts came through and I decided to write -_- ... I know, you guys must be regretting the fact that I actually heard this song and started writing. So do I so I'm ready for all the comments you are going to comment in my compliment *Note the sarcasm*

Edited by TaaReyD3_Neha - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
res/unres
Me first😲

Loved the OS

Perfect description

Hoping something like this happens


Edited by sashaz_sis - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh My Gosh!

That was heavenly Neha! That was so friggin' gprgeous! Gosh! I could imagine each and everything..

The end.. It seems sooo perfect! Ah! I thought she will go and hug him tight but this was better.. I could so imagine Taani opening the door and Rey looking at her with red eyes.. The pain! You killed me Neha! This was just so friggin' beautiful!

Lovvveee you! 🤗
Edited by ShReya_TaaRey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was awesome Neha...
I wish this could happen in D3...
*gosh* Perfectly described..
😊
me cant comment..my hand fractured 😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
omg...this is so beautiful...how i wish this happens in the show...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Wow!!! Why can't this happen in the show, it will be a dream come through
Wonderfully written
But it's not fair on how u ended this amazing OS ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
res
remind to unres it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
awesome OS😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
I need part 2 for this or else I'm not talking to you. You get me?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Awesome os
I wish this happens in the show
Lost in taarey world
Kya hoga show main?? I dunno
But it was gr8
Loved it

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