SWARON OS: WE CANT LIVE WITHOUT EACH OTHER - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
eeeps rashi such an cute one baby loved it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
it was such a cute OS..
really really
sweet
love swaron a lot ❤️

please do write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: VruShanRashi

hey guys.. 😊 dis is my first ever OS..😃 i really dont know hw is it? 😕 ut still hope u guys like it...😉 SwaRon story se pareshaan hokar i wrote it.. 😛 plz read n leave ur comments😊

its awesome

(swayam is ignoring sharon.. sharon running behind him trying to stop him..)

sha- swayam! swayam stop plz.. swayam stop.. just listen to me once plzz... 😭
swa- (stops and turns towards her) wat sharon? kya hai? tumhari problem kya hai?😡
sha- problem ka toh pata nahi but uska solution definately tum ho😳

sharon's essence is cutely captured

(ders silence all around now.. dey both luk into each others eyes..❤️ both blush.. swayam luks uber cute n sharon... simply khoobsurat😛 suddenly swayam luks away..)

swa- STOP IT sharon..
sha- stop wat swayam? stop luving u? 😳
(swayam luks towards him with all the luv.. luks into her eyes.. 😳 he was just about to say something wen sharon interrupts again)

sha- jab tumne 5 saalo tak mujhe pyaar karna nahi choda to how do u expect me to stop luving u? hmm hmm? batao?
swa- sharon! sharon tum bhul kyu nai jati sab?
sha- bhul jau? kya bhul jau swayam?

(she grabs his hand and pulls him towards abandoned corridor..)
sha- dekho ye jagah swayam..😊 ye wohi jagah hai jahaan.. jahaan tumne pehli baar mujhe apni dil ki baat boli thi.. ye bhul jau mai swayam?

(both have tears in der eyes.. sharon again grabs her hand n takes him 2 rehearsal hall)
sha- ya fir.. ya fir yaha humne saath kiye hue saare dance bhul jau? bhu jau vo saare dance jinki wajah se hum itne kareeb aaye?

left me speechless too

(swayam is speechless.. she again pull him n takes him to d classroom where dey confessed der love for each other)

sha- ye classroom bhul jau swayam? jahaan.. jahaan humne ek dusre ko apne dil ki baat kahi thi? jahaan se humari relationship ki shuruat hui thi?
swa- sharon!
sha- ya fir.. ya fir tumhare cupboard me jo sharon's corner hai vo bhul jau? ya fir humne saath bitaye hue saare pal, vo saari wishes? wo bhul jau?

(all d wonderful memories dey cherished together comes in front of his eyes.. his eyes fill with tears)

sha- kya tum bhul sakte ho ye sab swayam? bhul sakte ho wo saari yaadien humari? bolo swayam..
swa- sharon pleaseee!! tum ise itna difficult mat banao plz i beg u..😭
sha- kya itna difficult hai tumhare liye swayam? i luv u swayam.. itna easy hai sab fir kyu tum ise complicate kar rahe ho aur zyada? I LUV U.. dnt u luv me?

so nicely penned that i was like yes yes he loves you

(swayam is silent.. he does not know what to say)
sha- agar aisa hai to apne dil par haath rakhkar meri aankho me dekhkar ek baar ye boldo swayam dat.. dat u dnt luv me.. 😭

(he luks at her.. in her eyes.. feels the pain in her eyes..😭 but is unable to speak a word.. he just walks out from there)

sha- (to herself while wiping the tears) tumhari khamoshi ne mujhe sab keh diya swayam.. tumhari aankhon me saari sacchai jhalak rahi thi.. u still luv me swayam.. u still luv me. ab ek final move ki baari hai.. 😉

nicely you showed how she has become majnuish by understanding swayam all the time like he does

(she rushes to the announcement room.. luckily d room is empty.. she closes the door, switches on the mike n starts speaking with tears in her eyes)

sha- hey guys.. dis is sharon.. yaha aaj mai sirf kuch confess karne aayi hu n i want ki puri college vo sune..

(swayam is shocked😲 the gang is surprided n confused😕 and d whole college is excited to know what is the matter.. before swayam can do anything sharon starts speaking😆)

sha- i, sharon raiprakash luvs swayam shekhavat..
(whole college including gang is shocked😲, rey n simmi r happy but confused and swayammm.. well he is angry,shocked,confused and what not😛)

sha- yes.. i luv u mr.swayam shekhavat.. remember.. remember tumne mujhse kaha tha dat u ll make me fall in luv wid u? u ve succeeded swayam.. i m madly in luv with u..
i noe tum naaraz ho.. aur tumhara gussa bhi jaayaz hai swayam.. isiliye i ve decided mai tumhe force nahi karungi.. tum mujhse dur jaana chahte ho ja sakte ho, mujhe ignore karna chahte ho kar sakte ho..

(NO ONE HAS ANY CLUE ABOUT WHAT IS SHARON SPEAKING?😆 EVEN SWAYAM IS CONFUSED)

sha- but... tum mujhe force nahi kar sakte..

haye 😊

(swayam remembers the tym when he had told dis to sharon wen she wanted breakup)

sha- yes swayam.. i ve decided ki mai tumhare saath hi rahungi.. whether u lyk it or not..😊 so here i am.. forever tumhari SHARON RAIPRAKASH❤️😳

woa 😆

(everyone is shocked at what she just said.. gang is happy but at d same time a bit worried at what will happen next..)
(swayam is shocked😲 isn't she dat srp who used to hate her 1ce? he is overwhelmed.. hearing all dis he melts away.. he just cannot control his feeling, his love for her.. he runs towards the announcement room and opens the door.. dey both luk at each other😳 *look look hawa hawa😛 he runs towards her and hugs her tightly🤗he finally accepts her again.. they both cry in happiness... )
swa- i luv u sharon.. i luv u..

i wish in reality bhi swayam ...lekin teek hai atleast tumhare OS mai toh maan gaya
sha-i luv u too swayam.. i m sorry.. i m really very very sorry for what i did.. plz forgive me swayam..
(just den dey realise dat d mike is on n switch it off)
swa- sharon tumne mere liye..
sha- ssshhh.. humare liye..😳
swa- (with a shy smile) yes humare liye..
(he picks her up in his arms.. adores her lady luv..❤️ dey r just too happy.. just den she says)
sha- so chale?
swa-kaha?
sha- tumhari fifth wish puri karne?

(n den both get lost in each other😛)
and we get lost in swaronland 👏

P.S- thanks alot for reading this.. please leave ur feedbacks guys.. criticisms are more den welcome😊


continue writing and do pm me ,when you post 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
aaawwwiii... 😳
well penned... 👏 gd job @rashi... waiting fr more... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
u wrote a freaking OS 😲
OMMMGGG 😲
i am sooo proud of u baccha 🤗
this was real cute believe me ❤️ loved it!!!
and indeed it was a shock to read an OS by you!!! 😲
keep writting babuuu!!! 😳
love u!! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Aww, It was really a cute one!!
Their patchup was indeed emotional and loved all the words from the Laila's mouth that the Majnu boy used to say.
Keep writing and reading stuff as well it will be of great help.
So write more :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
woww //superb patch up scene ..njoyed the OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Lovely Os!
Loved It! ❤️
Love,
Mini :D

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