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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
That was really amazing...😃

Rey ko realize toh hua ki usse kriya ko dhundne jana chahiye...😛

Kitne try kiye... police station hi chala gaya... awww... 🤗

I really wish ki kriya ki entry jab ho to vo aise na mile.. lifeless.. padh ke hi dukh hota h... dekha to bilkul nhi jayega...😭

I'm glad... they are back together.. everything izz normal... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Abhi last part update kar na...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Loved how rey realised he loved kria only

Update Soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
guyzz update will be by 2mrrow or day after 2marrow..plzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Heheheheheee
hhahahaahhahahaaa
abhi mereko hasne de!!!
hehheheheheee
yaaayyy heheheheee
haan ab abhi khatam hasi!!!!
u noe wat I love u kamini!!!!
I love u!!!!
awesome update!!!!
the start wonderful!!!!
amazing lines...will he be able to move on? Heheheheee
nice!!!!!
nd den flashback!!! Haayyyeee
I was confused... Pata nhi. Chal raha tha ki whether I m happy ya thoda sad...
nd smriti ne confess kia nice...
nd baatcutter is back!!!!
yiiipppeee
loved that scene sooo much!!! I was like 😃😃
loved it!! Nd den sabse badi khushi is jab web I saw baatcutter is back!!!
nd wo bhi 20th december ko!!!
wooowww!!!!! Love it;!!
nd kamini ab jaldi update kar... Warna tera sar itna khaungi ki tu pareshaan ho jaayegi nd sochegi link nahi dena chaiye tha!!!!
kyunki I m waiting for nxt update!!!
after all baatcutter 20th December ko aa rahi hai!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
abhi diii !!!
i love so so much <3 <3
kitna mast OS h ... !!
ab bas jaldi se next part update kar do
me waiting ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Hey Abhi indeed a good one!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏

Sorry for being late in reply!!!!!!!!!!!!

Continue with its second part soon!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhilashaarsha

guyzz update will be by 2mrrow or day after 2marrow..plzz

kal ko gay huya purso bhhi chal gay or no update 😆😆
kya soch rhi ho ki santh ayaga invite karne 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Hey superb one!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏

Good one Abhi !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just loved this creation and how they met again!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 😃

Do write it's second part soon as well.

Will be waiting !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Last Part

St. Louis college Mumbai,

It was normal day all the students were roaming here nd there nd gang they as ussual doing thier fun nd masti all. The atmosphere in the college was full of masti nd fun. But most happy in them was REY yuss he was the most happy today nd why wont he afterall his baatcutter was re-turning today. Seening reys smile the realy smile which was gone away when kriya went nd now it was back after so many day's or should I say year..?? Seening rey happy nd his real smile gang was also happy. Today THE HEART THROB of many girls THE COOL HUNK of the college was back again with full of life as hie LIFE was gonna come today. They all came to attium.
At that time a girl with white frock*the came one kriya wore on thier first meet* nd hair pin up with cute white pins on one side. ans was smiling and looking at the gang. All others around her were half shocked to see her half were happy. One girl shouted gaining everyones attention "OMGGG...!! I can't belive kriya u r back..!!". As soon as the gang heard that they looked at the direction where kriya was standing nd looking at them nd seening her they were hell shock accept rey. Rey was having a 32 inch grine plaster on his face as he saw his baatcutter after 2 months. Whole gang looked at rey with worried face as they thought that his smile must have gone by now but it was totaly different he was now grining like stupid and was staring at his baatcutter.
Vicky: guyzz rey pagal toh nhi hogya kriya ko dekhke..??
Nilesh: ya guyzz i think vicky is ryt dekho na kese pagal jese smile kar raha hai..
Sharon: stop it guyzz..!!
There on other side rey nd kriya were looking in each others eyes nd were conveing thier felling for thier speration of 2 months. They unknowningly started walking towards each other without breaking thier eye lock. They were only inch apart. Gang was hell worried nd was scared specialy for rey as they dont know how will he react to this all. And the next thing what happen made gang to go again in shock. Rey pulled kriya into a tight hug. Kriya was first little shock by his sunden action but then she hug him back with her all mighty. they broke the hug and again looked at each other nd rey spoke
Rey: baatcutter are u seriously here..??
Kriya: yes rey m here again back..
Rey: baatcutter m so so so happy tl see u back..nd he again hug her.
Gang was still in the shock they couldn't believe wht just happened in front of thier eye a minute back. The first one to recover was sharon.
Sharon: rey..
KriYaansh turn towards the gang. Kriya was now worried as now she have to face them her friends nd that was frightening her to the core by thinking how they will react to all this..?? nd due to this fear kriya tighten her grip on reys hand. Rey looked in her eye nd he understood that she was affraid. Rey slowly loosen her grip on his hand nd took hold of her plam nd looked in her eye as if asuring that everything will be ryt. KriYaansh went towards the gang kriya looked at them they were still shock.
Kriya: heya guyzz..!!
All looked at her nd rey nd then to thier hands.
Rey: guyzz kriya is saying something.
Vicky: rey tu kriya se..?? i mean u hate her na usne tujhe use kiya na..??
sharon: yeah rey vicky is ryt how the hell u can hug her..??
As soon as the word USE passed by vickys mouth rey could feel the changes in kriyas body. All were saying some or other thing to rey except one nd he was swayam. swayam was going through mixed emotion he was hapy to see his BFF back but angry also as she left without a word sad for his sister but happy for KriYaansh. All were saying nd not letting rey to speak a word nd kriya was having tears in her eyes nd seening this rey heart left like bleeding. Finaly rey shouted
Rey: stop it guyzz let her nd me speak.
saying this rey along with kriya started to walk towards RH nd the gang was following them silently as they never saw rey so angry specialy on them. As soon as they reach RH all started seening KriYaansh as they were standing in the middle.
Rey: guyzz atleast once plzz listen what she is trying to say atleast once..rey literaly pleaded them to hear it.
After kriyas enter for the first time swayam spoke: kriya say what u want to say..
all looked at him nd was going to say something but swayam spoke again
Swayam: kriya why did u left us..?? rey..?? nd why didnt u tell me that u r leaving do u dont think that m ur BFF..??
Kriya looked towards swayam nd said: no swayam u were u are nd u will be my BFF u will...she said ths in tears.
Swayam: then why did u left us kriya..?? why did u left ur BFF alone..?? Why ur love..??
Kriya: swayam i was in such a stiuation that i have to do so..saying this she narrated whole story frm tujhko jo paya till pre-valentine's night.
As soon as she finished all had tears in thier eyes all were feeling guilt as they thought kriya to be wrong but she sacrifies her dream 'DANCE' her love 'REY' only for them. They were proud to be her friend. swayam came near kriya nd hug her tightly nd said
Swayam: kriya u did all this for us why r u so nyc..??
Amar: haan kliya tumne ye sab humareliye kiya aur hum tumhe ki galat samjhrahe the..
Kriya: nhi guyzz tumlog gilty maat feel karo plzz..
Saying this weakling huged eachother
Sharon: welcome back miss rival
Kriya: aap bilkul bhi nhi badli pehle jesi thi wesi hi ab ho aap..
Sharon: but this time I want to be ur frnd not a rival..
Sharon nd kriya shaked hands with each other nd others were in shock reyam smiled by seeing the new krisha frndship. One by one all the dazzalers hug her *except rey*
Swayam: but rey..?? rey ne bahar esa koi behave kiya ki use sab pata hai..??
Rey: koi ki mujhe sab pata hai..
Sharon: kese..??
Rey: wo actualy guyzz u remember mene leave liya tha clg se nd he told everything to them frm starting
Swayam: rey tumhe sab pata tha toh tune hume kyu nhi bataya..??
Kriya: kyuki mene rey ko bola tha nhi batne ko..
Rey: as kriya ye baat tum sabko khud batana chati thi..
Everyone understood nd finaly were damn happy to see rey nd kriya smelling again
Vicky: so guyzz its time of celebration so letz celebrate in canteen
Amar: haan chalo
Evryone went to canteen everyone had a gala time over there enjoying, teasing..KriYaansh were stelling galances of eachother in between nd the same was going on with SwaRon.
Kriya was in her house arranging her things when her moblie beep showing a message. Kriya looked at the ID nd a smiled crept on her face. It was reys message
"heya baatcutter free ho kya..?? actualy mujhe aaj tumhe kidar toh leke jana hai..r u free..??"
Kriya quickly replied rey "yup rey m free aap batao aap kitne baje tak aane wale ho..??"
"I will be there till 8 be ready bye love u baatcutter"
Kriya blush by reading the last of message. She quickly arrage everything nd got ready it was 8 when the door bell ranged she went to open it.
As soon as she opened the door a smiled crept her face. On other side rey was lost in the beauty which was standing in front of him. Kriya called out reys name twice but got no respone as rey was continuesly staring kriya. Nd kriya sawed this nd a evil smile crept her face she piched rey. Nd rey came back to his sense.
Rey: oocchh..!! baatcutter tumne ye kyu kiya..??
Rey said this will rubbing the place where she pinched nd makking a baby face. Kriya was laughing like mad by seeing rey reaction
Kriya: *pulling reys cheeks* aww..u look soo cute..nd again she started laughing..
Rey pout by showing fake anger but still cutely
Kriya: rey sorry
Kriya said very cutely which took no minute to melt reys fake anger.
Rey: aacha toh chale..??
Kriya: haan chalo
Rey took kriya too his farm house it was accualy a beach villa on the outskrits of mumbai. The villa was full of flowers nd trees
Kriya: rey wow ye kitni aachi jaga hai..?? but hum yaha kyu aaye hai..??
Rey: baatcutter ye mera farm house hai acutaly tumhe beaches bohot pasand hai na so I thought to surprize u..kesa laga..??
Kriya: *admiring the beach* its beautiful rey..i loved it.
Rey nd kriya had a long walk on the beach by holding each others hand walking
Suddenly rey came in front of kriya. Kriya got confused by this sudden action of rey.

Kriya: rey aap ye..

She was going to speak but rey kept his hands on her lips making her quite.

Rey: baatcutter aaj me bolunga nd tum sunogi..baatcutter u know when u felt me I felt very bitrayed I thought there is no one who loves me. But I was wrong I was very wrong. U r the one who loved me till infinite nd sacrifice everything. Baatcutter m really sorry for what I did m realy realy very sorry. U sacrifice ur happiness for my happiness. U gaved me all ur happiness nd u took all the sorrows with u. but baatcutter now its my turn I promise u that I will turn all ur sorrow in happiness. Baatcutter will u be with me forever nd ever..??

Kriya had tears of happiness in her eyes she couldn't utter anyword she only said "yes". And she hug rey tightly rey too responsed back with all his mighty

Rey: I love u baatcutter

Kriya: I love u too rey..

Rey: I promise u baatcutter I will never let this sorrow come back in ur life I promise u baatcutter.

Saying this rey hug kriya more tightly.

~*~*~

Heya guyzz here was the last part
Hope u all liked it
Do hit like tab nd leave ur reviews back
Nd m realy realy sorry for delay in update.
~Abhilasha


Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago

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