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20 December - The Most Memorable Day
A KriYaansh Two Shots


It was the same day yup the same day 20 december how can he forget this date its the most spl day for him in his life for all the other for them they think that he has move on but is it realy like tha..?? has he realy move on..?? or is he stuck over there only..??

Rey the cool hunk of the college the one on whom the girls a ready to do anything but he is ready to do whatever for only one girl in his life nd only that girl still rules his heart after hell 1 n a half year but the place of that girl no one have or will take this was the words he said to himself when he learn the truth. the real truth about her.

FLASHBACK

It was the time when taani left the college. once again a girl broke the cool hunk rey's heart but as time past he understood that he never ever loved taani infact he never liked her also. from beganing he always use to find that girl in taani. yup he understood that he was only attracted toward taani it was only a attraction nd he only use to find his baatcutter in her and nothing else.

So he started to find his baatcutter everywhere hell he found in every nook nd coner og mumbai but he didnt got a single clue about her anywhere. he then decide to go to dehradun the hometown of his baatcutter. as soon as he came he started search for his baatcutter. a whole week was pasted away but he didnt found a single clue about her.

One day he was pacing by the streets of dehradun when he came across the club DESTINY yup the same club DESTINY. a smile of hope came on his face he went inside the club nd meet the manager of the club. but he came dispointly out of the club as he got to know that she had enter that party without any entry. then one think clicked in his mind the pocile station. where they both where locked up together. with again a smile of hope he went over there.

Rey: sir..??

Cob: yes..??

Rey: sir do u remember me i m reyaansh singhnia who was looked up with a girl over here on 2011 new years eve night..??

Cob: ohh yaa how could i forget u..?? so wht did u did now..??

Rey: sir actual i did nothing i want a small fever from u plzz will u help me..??

Cob: hmm..wht help do u want from me..??

Rey: sir plzz can u tell me the adress of that girl wo was locked up with me..??

Cob: sorry son but i cant tell u that as we are not allowed..

Rey: sir plzz its important its realy impotant i need to find her its for my life for my DIL..

Rey tried to convice the cob nd in the end he told every thing to the cob. he realy left bad for rey nd kriya too.

Cob: look son m giving u the detail only coz its important for u.

Rey: thnk u so much sir realy thnks a ton.

The cob gave the adress to rey nd spoked: go son bring your love back in your life. i wish luck for u.

Rey showed a smile of gratitude nd said: thnk u sir..

At evening he eached at his baatcutter house. he was a bit nervous but he went inside and rang the doorbell of the house after two three rings the door was open by a lady.

Lady: u..??

Rey: yes anuty i know u dont like me but i want to meet kriya plzz anuty let me once meet her

Lady: come in u shirtless wonder. *yup the lady is none other than smriti*

Rey: thnk u anuty.

Rey camed inside and looked everywhere in search of his baatcutter he saw some childhood pics of her which were hunged on the wall. he saw a door closed nd he had a feeling that kriya was there only inside that room.

Smriti: rey right..??

Rey: yes anuty..

Smiriti: rey i want to say sorry to u for my deeds

Rey: *confused* anuty wht deeds..??

Smriti: i knw rey u love kriya alot nd i seprated u like this without any reason m realy sorry saying this smriti broke down nd a guilt was clearly visible on her face.

Rey was hell confused now only one think he understood that the reason behind kriya's sudden deprature was somewhere smriti.

Rey: anuty m sorry but i realy dont know what are u talking about..??

Smriti: rey m talking about the reason behind kriya's departure nd smriti told every think to rey starting from the dance wher smriti saw them dancing together till the end.

After learning the truth rey was crying badly as he realy left bad for his baatcutter nd understood she have suffered more than him.

Rey: *snobing* anuty...where...is..kriya..??

Smriti: she is in her room her she pointed towards the room which was closed rey she dont talk much plzz bring back my kriya your baatcutter back plzz rey plzz..

Rey got up wiped away his tear nd went near the room nd open it. there inside was his baatcutter sitting like a body without the sole. seening this rey got even more hurt. he went inside and went behind kriya. he slowly placed his hand on kriya's shoulder. with such a small touch also a shiver went down her body. saying this rey smiled as he got to knw that he still have the same effect on her nd she have recongnied him. kriya turn back and was only staring at rey.

Rey: baatcutter..??

Kriya: rey r u realy here..??

Rey: haan baatcutter m here only..

As soon as this words came out of rey's mouth kriya hugged him tightly nd cried out all her heart out rey was consoling her nd letting her cry as much as she want as e knew that its her need. after sometime rey broked the hug. nd this brought kriya back to her sense nd she got hyper.

Kriya: rey u here..?? mom will see u..?? wht r u doing here..?? go from here..??

Rey was only smiling seening his baatcutter have return.

Kriya: why r u smiling like stupid..??

Rey: woah..baatcutter how many questions baatcutter i knw everything anuty told me everthing m realy sorry baatcutter for everything m realy sorry.

While saying this a lone tear passed by which was noticed by kriya. kriya hugged him tightly once again and she was only saying sorry nd sorry..

Rey broke the hug and cupped her face and said: no baatcutter u need not be sory i should have trusted ur love but wht did i do i smiply move on..?? how could i..?? m such a bad person..

Kriya: no rey u are not bad i only wanted that u move on..i u fullfilled that rey u r not bad..

Rey: m sorry baatcutter m realy sorry..

Kriya: its ohk rey..aacha now leave it nd lets go out m hungry..

Rey chukkled that kriya's behaviour nd her way of chaging the topic then they both went out smriti was very happy to see her daugter is back. they had a great time dining together having lots of talk nd fun.

After the dinner kriya nd rey went to kriya's bedroom to talk rey told her everything about what all happen after her leave till how he land up at her house. kriya was happy by getting her dil nd dance back in her life once again.

It was time to rey go back to mumbai as his holidays where over he asked kriya to acompany him but kriya rejected it saying she is still not ready to face her friends. rey understood her nd told her ohk but when u will come u will inform me. she nodded nd they hugged each other nd rey left for airport.

FLASHBACK OVER.

From that day ever night they both use to talk with each other nd share everything with each other about thier life they fought like child took care of other like parents nd romanced also. nd today was the day when kriya was going to come mumbai nd was going to join st lousis on the same day 20 december the day when kriya first time confessed about her filling by saying 'app mere dost se kuch jada ho'. rey was damn happy by this new nd he planned something for his baatcutter.


PRECAP : Reys surprize..!! kriya getting back her dosti..😊

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heya peps my new two shots hope u all like it..its just a random thought..
do hit like tab nd leave ur reviews back plzz..
next update may be by 10 november..
have a nice day

Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
unres
frst of all i wanna say tht this os is very sweet just like u
rey ne kitna hard work kiya kria ko dhundne me
just like deewana
bechara kaha-kaha bhatka apni baatcutter ko dhundne ke liye
nd vo DESTINY hotel gaya jahan vo pehli baar mile the
vaha bhi use kuch pata nahi chala
atlast police-station me officer ko patake usne kria ki info nikal hi li
smriti ne use sach bata diya nd he is feeling guilty
hona hi chahiye
apni baatcutter ko bhul kar move on kar liya
nd kriyansh ka convo mast tha
nd 2 baar hug kiya unhone vo bhi tightly
amazing sweetypie!
Nd ye kya me to kiss expect kar rahi thi but kria ko bhukh lag gayi
rey ke sath me bhi has rahi thi kria ke behaviour pe
nd rey Mumbai vapas ja raha h
aww...bechara apni baatcutter ke sath tym spend karne ka mauka hi nahi mila
but I'm sure next update unka kiss nd thode romantic scenes honge
ab hasna mat mera comment padhke me esi hi hu pagal
love u sweetypie nd jaldi next part update kar nd mujhe mera hi dialog mat sunana-'intezaar ka phal mitha hota h'
Edited by Neha_KR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres
wow
nice strt
waitng 4 prt2
Edited by chand91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res til i read
unres

awesomeee start⭐️⭐️

wowww rey meeting his baatcutter😳

finally shes goin to return to st.louis😳

waiting for d nxt part😊

well-written😊

lovedd ittt😊
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res remaing me later Done
well-written😊

lovedd ittt😊
Edited by nature2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb
rey realize his feeling for kriya
rey meeting his baatcutter
shes goin to return to st.louis

waiting for d nxt part😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res...😉
unres...

haye 20 december... sach me most memorable hai yaar...😛

it's just fab...

rey ka realization... i just wish k D3 me bhi rey ko aise hi realise ho...😳

dhundhte dhundhte dehradun pohch gaya...😳 so sweet yaar...😛

destiny club... vahi jaha destiny ne first time unko milvaya tha n second time bhi milvaya...😉

wow usne toh police station jake inspector ko bhi emotional kar diya... n smriti aunty ka guilt... 😛

all i can say it's super se upar...👏

ab jaldi se next part update kar...

Edited by ..krisha.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres
Loved it alottt...
Woaahh rey found her baatcutter...
And everything is settled down
Uupdate soon next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mast part tha...
Rey came to dehradun just to find her how sweet.

Do update soon.

Ty for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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haaye it was awesome
loved it yaar
update soon

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