SwaRon OS :Anklet Love ... - Page 3

Well m shocked :P
u wrote this os?
Ofcourse d perfect writeup has to be wriiten by u par aap kabse itna romantic likhne lage😳
Generally i wouldnt be blushing after reading a romatic os
but well when it comes to u who can help it😳
The title edit..amazing
the os is..out of the world as usual
loved the backdrop and d fact that the os was so light heart-ed and sweet:)
Swayam's dialogues were fab..(biting ur lips is for me to do etc etc wont elaborate or quote)
sharon's innocence along with ur moon part was nicely penned.

Well i will just stop now. I seem to blabber a lot when it comed to appreciating u
i want a pm next tym di..
Love
Veronica
ps- first tym i did not res..MAGIC of ur os..do keep writing more such stuff!

Nice Os 😊

awwee deepu di i remember... this is one of chapter frm your ff 😳but while reading it again gives a fresh revolt..love it.
Sharon cute antics and swayam naughty bit gives perfect combo of romance...

Ps- waiting for u me back to us update...it quite long nw 😭

awesome os it was great

goood to see ur work after long time ...i think i hve read similair stuff in one of ur ff...

Hey Deeps di...i hope you are not shocked to see me here...you haven't changed a bit really...your way of saying at the start of the post i think this is bad and i hope you read it your cost...and at the end you ask good,bad,very bad or boring damm i missed reading all these for last many months...

Gosh i feel so happy to reading deep style romance finally after many days..you know i have always liked your style of writing. I am totally in love with your writing style. I am big fan of yours deep i cannot say biggest because i guess many better more talented person appraise your work appreciate better than me but dont think that i am less i have always been a fan follower of you deeps...you were my best friend in the days when i was highly active on forum..now days you are busy and you dont get time to talk so i am not in active contact with you but it is also true that i miss your works and talks we had.

Now coming to this particular OS dude a perfect romance of man and woman. Ankle love you know tittle made me very curious ankle romance how it is possible...but when i saw the name of author deeps then i realised that if you are there you can create romance from absolutely anything...

It was joys reading. Again that SwaRon bond of feeling each other was very evidant here also as it has been pretty much evidant in all your works...

But in this write up you had so many teasing events in there and finally the intimate moment came and trust me i started sweating like hell...there are only three persons who make me sweat reading their works one is you others are Nehal and Baz.

You made a hell romantic os...but it was all worth reading it...thank you deeps for writing a beautiful os...

Thank you again...keep writing...

Pratik...