The Effect- Love.. (SwaRon OS) Part 2 - page 3

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I wrote this Os two days before but got time now to post it..
Grammatical mistakes n Spell , if found..then Sorry !

Based on the Scene -Aashi n Sharon encounter...Simmi listening..


!!...The Effect- Love...!!


Aashi- Ab samajh mein aaya ki sab log aapko itna hate types kyun karte the.
Sharon- Correction..! Koi mujhe hate nahi karta tha Vo log mujhse darte the...
Aashi- Haan darte hi the.. ki kahin aapke saath reh kar vo pagal types na ho jaye...

Sharon froze at that moment.. Aashi's look was full on attitude one.. Simmi was shocked !
Sharon was hurt..badly very badly.. She just didn't knew what to answer back or rather should she answer back ?

But someone heard the last line by Aashi...
Suddenly Aashi received a call...
On Call..
Aashi- Okay mein aati hun...

Aashi- Thik hai thik hai...
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Aashi excused herself from Sharon n Simmi and went !

Aashi went to a room...
Aashi- Haan Swayam..aapne bulaya types mujhe ?
Swayam(anger)- Kya keh rahi thi tum ?
Aashi- Kya... mujhe kuch clear types nahi samajh aa raha aap kya bol rahe ho ?
Swayam- How could you Aashi...kaise hurt kar sakti ho tum use ?
Aashi was confused...

FLASHBACK
Aashi to Sharon- Haan darte hi the.. ki kahin aapke saath reh kar vo pagal types na ho jaye...

Someone heard her...it was Swayam..! He was passing through there and just heard the last line...
Swayam was shocked hearing harsh sentence about Sharon...he saw Sharon hurt ! His anger knew no bounds..
He called Aashi instantly to meet him in projector room...
FLASHBACK ENDS


Swayam- Tumne kaise Sharon ko bol diya ki uske saath reh kar log pagal ho jaate ? Huh ??
Aashi- Vo.. hain hi aisi.. hamesha..dusro ko hurt types karti hai..
Swayam- Shut up Aashi..! Tum aisa bol kaise sakti ho , huh !
Aashi- Unhone hi baat shuru ki.. aapke saath baat krte hue dekh types liya tha aur fir

She naraated the story about Sharon was serious about Boys vs Girls and all...

Swayam- Huh.. kya tumne usko samjha ? Vo uski repo ke liye usne aisa kaha...
tumhi batao kya kkoi aur girl boys se baat kar rahi thi ? Nahi na...
So usne apne POV se bol diya.
Aashi- Are to kya baat types hi to ki !
Swayam- Tumne jaake usko bataya ki hum kya baat kar rhe the ? Nahi na..
Aashi- Umm..vo..
Swayam(loudly)- Bolo Aashi ?
Aashi- Nahi...
Swayam- So...khud ki jab galti rahe to dusro par ilzaam lagane se pehle socha karo..
Aashi- Sharon ko kuch bolti types to vo kabhi samjhti hi nahi...
Swayam- Bohot ho gaya Aashi ! Just shut up ! Ek word bhi uske khilaaf nahi...
Aashi just hung her face down.. Swayam started going when he heard Aashi murmur..

Aashi- Hamesha Sharon ki hi to side types lete hai..unke aage vaise bhi aapko kuch dikhta types nahi hai...

Swayam turned back and replied
Swayam- Agar tumhe aisa lagta hai to apne mind ko refresh karo aur recently hue hamare trip ko yaad karo Miss Aashi !
He just in anger bandged his left hand very harshly on the door of projector room..in turn he got hurt and his plam started to bleed...
Without paying heed to injury He went out in search of Sharon..
Meanwhile when Aashi n Swayam were arguing ! Here Simmi n Sharon..

Simmi- Sharon..hey..
Sharon just stopped her by showing her palm ! She instantly ran back to her room...

Swayam was searching her but he didn't found her...
In Room,

Simmi- Aashi ki baat ko seriously mat lo...
Sharon- Mujhe akele rehna hai Simmi you..you just leave...
Simmi- Tum itni ache person fir kyun Sharon ?
Sharon- I said na Simmi...ple..please go..

Tears flowed from her eyes...
Simmi also couldn't resist , she felt bad for her best friend...tear dropped down from her eyes also...
She came out of the room..and saw Swayam coming... She looked at him... he also saw her...
He came infront of her... Simmi just wiped her tears and looked inside from the window..and just went aways without saying a word...
Swayam understood that Sharon was inside... he slilghtly opened the door...

He found her speaking something to herself...he simply heard...silently...

Sharon- Thank you Aashi..you helped me open my eyes... you made me realise that I..I still don't respect you guuyss.. and still I am the rude..the arrongant Sharon Rai Prakash... the girl who always hurted people ! Wahi SRP..jisne...us person ko hurt kiya jo..jo ki uske..dil ke sabse *sniff* karib hai...*sniff* , hamesha se uss person ne Sharon ko support kiya but Sharon ne har baar use ignore kiya yaa..yaa chillaya..! Use door kiya aur fir wahi doori...! Shayad yeh diva se normal wala change mere liye bana hi nahi hai... shayad mein hi...*sniff* mein hi kisi ke liye...nahi..nahi bani hun...!!

Light sobs could be heard of Sharon... Swayam's eyes became watery...he wiped it...
And jsut knocked the door...
Sharon on realizing the Knock...wiped her tears and turned around...
She was shocked !

Sharon- Tum..!! Kyun aaye ho yahan huh ? Just..just go... *diva* sunai kam deta hai ??
Swayam didn't spoke a word but just came inside and locked the door !

Sharon*irritatedly*- Swayam !!
Swayam came closer and just put his finger on her lips ! Her eyes wide open..!
Swayam- Kyun nahi aa sakta mein yahan huh ? Koi nahi rokega mujhe... ye nahi girl room hai na hi koi one person private place..

He sropped his hand down from her lips...
Sharon- Jo kaam hai jaldi bolo...time nahi hai mere paas...
Swayam- Tum yeh dheere bhi bol sakti thi..Health pe asar padega Sharon and please...apni care khud kar liya karo...
Sharon- You are right Swayam...pehle ki aadat hai kisi ki care pe dependent thi...ab care karne ke liye koi nahi hai to khud hi sab karna padega...

They shared a eye-lock... Sharon wanted to cry...she wanted to hug him..but she was left with no strength ! Swayam understood her... he had no words to speak...she said a very deep sentence...!
Swayam*concerned*- Sharon...
Sharon- Kya Sharon huh Swayam ?? Aadat se majboor hun mein...

She just turned back..facing the wall she had tears in her eyes... Swayam behind her...he felt so bad and guilty he just turned his hand into fist...as he didn't remembered about the injury it hurted him...

Sharon- Itna door ho gaye hain hum ki ab...ab mein darti hun ki kahin agar tumhare paas aana bhi chahun to kya tum mujhe apnaoge...

He went near her , held her wrist which sent shivers... and turned her around...

She continued...
Sharon- Ab sab kuch pehle jaisa hai...vahi arrogant Sharon.. wahi chillana.. wahi ego..eveything is back...

She started sobbing.. He came close and cupped her face... She immediately felt some fluid like substance on her right cheek... She held his wrist..he tried to free his hand but all in vain... and thus she found blood...

Sharon- Yeh..yeh kya ??? Swayam...wats this ????? Yeh kaise hua..?
She started searching something so that she could cover his palm... one thought came in her mind and thus she took her Dupataa's end ( remeber D3 Shar in traditional) and started to cover his palm...

He stopped her but she didn't listen...
Swayam- Sharon..tumhara dupatta kharab ho jaega leave it...
Sharon- No...tum chup raho...
Tears were still flowing down her cheeks...

Swayam- This is not that much necessary...
Sharon looked up and...

Sharon- Swayam...tumse zyada important mere liye kuch nahi hai...
Swayam just stared at her... She wrapped his palm by only one flap...coz it was very big...
She just dropped down her dupatta as it was coming in between...

Sharon couldn't resist so she just spoke her heart out...

Sharon- Swayam..mein nahi reh sakti tumhare bina... It's very very difficult for me... mujhe aisa lag raha hai jaise I am alone..
I need you Swayam..I need You...

She started crying...badly...He held her shoulders... before which the dupatta from his hand slid down...
Sharon- Tumse door rehti hun to mujhe mere aage kuch nahi dikhta...
Swayam- Sharon...tum coldly behave kyon kar rahi ho ?
Sharon- Mein..mein nahi chahti ki kisi ko pata chale ki mujhe bhi chizen(things) affect karti hai...Swayam...you affect me...
Your effect affects me...each second...everytime...

Swayam wiped her tears...
Sharon- I..I want to ask a question Swayam...
Swayam- Bolo Sharon...
Sharon- Kya..kya tum ab..ab bhi mujhse pyaar *cry* pyaar karte ho ?
Swayam*teary eyes*- Vo to marte dum tak karunga Sharon...
Sharon*tears rolling*- Mein chahti hun tumhara saath...Kya tum mujhe fir..fir se apnaoge ? Kya hum fir ek ho sakte hain??
Swayam- Sharon...you know na...ki "Your Wish Is Always My Command"..so defenitely YES...! Now Sharon and Swayam are back..as ONE...
As soon as he said these lines...tears flowed down his eyes...
Sharon had glitter in her eyes... She immideately hugged her..
He responded back... It was an intesnse hug...
While hugging...
Sharon- You presence means my existence and you..Swayam equals My Life... !!
Swayam caressed her hair (right hand) and kissed her head...
Swayam loosened her grip and slightly moved back as to see her...
Swayam- Shh..now no crying...okay...
Sharon- You also...
She also wiped his tears...
Swayam- And Sharon...Am So happy to get you back...I Love you..
Sharon- I Love You too...Swayam... Sharon is blessed to get back to you.,
Sharon's Swayam Forever...!

He planted a kiss on her forehead and bo
th shared a tight..ever lasting hug...

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Part 2-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93229315

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PMs Later
So how was it guyss.?
Hope you all liked...!
Do comment n like..

Love,
Sakshi..

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pooja123456 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesomely cute os!!
jut loved it
very well written!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OH MY!!!
it was such a cute OS
i loved it so much
really nice
and well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS :)
I loved how Swayam answered Aashi and defended Sharon 😳
confession was cute :)
Coming to second chapter ...I loved how they sorted out their misunderstanding about that kiss fiasco😊
Lovely OS :)
Edited by swaron_pk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was beautifully written!!
Fab work.
Loved it a lot.
Keep writing more!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was a very cute Os :) bahot acha tha actually :)par ek wish puri kar sakti? isko ek aur part likho na? Wo chot ki baare mein...something where sharon realises he's still bleeding or something...u get the line yeah? I would love to read something like that by you :Dawesome job! Keep writing! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Killer!!
First of all...m sorry..m veryy sorry...mai humesha tere works pe late unres karti hu..m sry..!!😭

Cmng to this os..!
Ahmazing..!!
Loved it..I always love reading ur works!!😊
Aise hi Kuch hum sab d3 me dekhna chahte h..par ms.palki!!-_-
Thank u so much ye pen down karne ko!!❤️
N tujhe ye to already pata h ki mai kitni badi fan hu tere wrks ki!!😉
This one was superb..!
The way tune sab emotions ko express kiya..swayam ka aashi pe chillana..Sharon ka sad Hona..n everything..ekdum awesome!!❤️

N ye kya..Yaha to total filmy scene ho gya..dupatta bandhne ka!!🤣
Maine try kiya apna ek dupatta faadne ka..but use Kuch nhi hua..I wonder ye log kaise quality ki kapde pehente h!!🤣
Lolz..!

But still..killer..I loved it..!!🤗
Beautifully written!!
Aur 2-3 likhde jaldi se!!😉

N again sry yaar..fr not unresing on tym!😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW I loved it.👏
Very beautifully written.👍🏼
Loved the way SwaRon emotions came out.
Awesome work.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superbest based.on current scene OS ...iv eva read :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS
Very well written👏
Love the way u describe SwaRon emotions 😳
Keep writing 😊

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