Don't Ever Leave Me...A Taarey OS...

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Holla guys...me here with an OS and this is my third work as i have 2 on going fan fictions..Love or Attraction and Kitni Baatein ...ok now no more bak bak ...

Concept: the story starts from where rey was playing basketball while Sharon comes there asking if he's okay as he was upset with taani not realising her mistake of keeping him away from NDC. so here it starts...

Sharon: agar vo nahi maanegi to use break up karlo...

Rey: huh..?? after 5 mins of thinking he says...your right Sharon break up mujhe taani se break up karna hoga vahi hum dono ke liye thik rahega...

But unknown to them someone heard it and yes its taani she just came to ask rey that wat is he doing here so late in college...and she got d biggest shock of her life...rey is not happy with her...he cannot understand her situation rather he's also blaming her...she walked out of d college like a lifeless body...soon rain started heavily but there was no effect of rain on taani she was just walking in d middle of the road lifelessly ...

Here sharey went to their houses as it was raining heavily rey dropped Sharon to her house and then went to his house... it was 10pm at night...

Taani was walking in rain suddenly a car was about to hit her but luckily she was saved and just fell on the road the driver got out of the car and was shouting at her..

Driver: abbe ee madam sunai nahi deta kya(cnt u hear) abhi kuch ho jata to...agar marne ka itna hi shock h to kahi or jaa ke maro humari gaadi ko baksh(spare) do..!!!

But taani din't respond she was just sitting on the ground...

The person inside the car noticed hw disturbed taani was and came out of the car and asked her excuse me..??

Taani:no response...

Person: hello..??

Still taani dint react..he went near her and shook her ..taani looked up wid tears and pain clearly visible in her eyes...the person somehow managed to make her come with him to his house...in the whole journey taani dint even uttered a word while the person kept staring at her...they reached his house and went inside...he made taani sit on the sofa and said...

Person: hello...i am sourav...sourav malik and you..??

Taani once again looked up with teary eyes and he continued ok fine dont say anything and he sat beside her...

Taani: taani...taani shekhawat...now will you please tell me why have you brought me here..??

Sourav: i would love to..but first you tell me whatsup with you..?? why are you so disturbed..?? paraya hun par apna samajh ke bata do..??

Taani: kyun..?? kyun samjhun apna..?? listen you mr. Mind your own business and let me be..she got up to leave but was stopped when she heard him saying..

Sourav: dil toota hai tumhara..am i right or am i right..??

Taani looked back with a shocked expression..and said tumhe kese pata..??

Sourav: iss feeling se guzar chukka hun..i totally understand what you are going through..but please stay here for tonight as its raining heavily outside..if don't want to share your pain its ok but atleast don't leave like this..

Taani nodded her head and again sat on the sofa..

Sourav: do one thing i'll give you a pair of clothes go and freshen up..till then i'll make coffee for us ..yeah..??

Taani nodded and said you too change..sourav smiled seeing her concern..taani changed and came till the time sourav appeared with 2 cups of coffee and sat beside her on the couch and handed her the coffee..they were drinking peacefully when taani spoke..

Taani: sahi kaha apne dil toota hai mera..but usse bhi zyada trust..

Sourav smiled looking at her as if telling her i have faced all this..

Sourav: i see..so hua kya actually..??

Taani: i'll tell you a story..sourav smiled and said continue..taani continued ye story hai ek ladki ki jo jhodpur me rehti thi koi khaas sapne nahi the uske..just ek prince or princess ki story ki tarah happy ending and true love pe believe karti thi..ek din uske bhai ne use indiafest ke tickets send kiye..when she went their she saw her prince charming..she fell in love with that person..blindly , madly and deeply..phir kya har din uske dance ke videos dekhna usko janne ki koshish karna yahi karti rehti thi..jab usse ye pata chala that vo ladka or koi nahi uske bhai ka best friend tha..she was really happy as usse uske bhai ke college st.louis me admission mil gaya tha..saath hi saath she could stay close to her price charming and she has the advantage of being close to him as he was her bhai's best friend..when she came to Mumbai the first person who clashed with her was her prince charming..she was lost in his brown hazels while he was looking at her suspect fully..as his friends were planting a girlfriend for him and he thought the girl was one of them..but after a small fight her bhai came their and cleared the misunderstanding..her bhai's gang's passion was dance..everything was going smooth the boy was friendly to the girl until te girl got to know about her prince charming's love or say ex..one day she wore the dress similar to the boy's ex..and he was lost in her..and then she fought with him without any reason just as his ex did..finally he asked her the real reason frustrated and angry and the poor girl said everything that she loves him and he was damn shocked he gave her a big lecture and left the girl was left heartbroken..but then the things were normal again until the girl was made AGS by the boy and the false rumours were spread about them and one boy appeared as her boyfriend but in real he wasn't her boyfriend they were just acting but the behaviour of her pc suddenly changed and e became very rude to her since the declaration of her relationship after the fake boyfriend did something and her pc was removed from GS position and the boy himself became GS when the boy's real face was shown he left the college but unfortunately the dance was banned and the girl was assigned as GS..then many misunderstandings and fights took place b/w the boy and the girl..and finally they had a chance to lift the dance ban..the basketball match...as the girl's brother was not ready to teach basketball the boy forced him to do so..when the girl came to know about this she rushed to rehersal hall of the college where the boy was sitting..they shared an intimate moment that time..but the other day knowing that the boy must be feeling guilty she said that it happened because of the boy's tension and to loose out he did so..the boy got disheartened and more fights finally after the basketball match they confessed their love...their relationship was going smooth until the NDC appeared and girl's tauji appeared who hated dance and his son..the girl forced the boy to hide his identity from her tauji and he did so..but her tauji was coming to the NDC quarters and if the boy danced their everything will be out and the girl asked the boy not to dance in those quarters and they fought on it..the boy dint dance at last moment her tauji returned back from the venue of NDC and the boy danced but the boy also misunderstood the girl like others did he thought the girl was driving his passion away from him..accusations were posted against her on the college website as she was a non-dancer..one night she heard the boy talking to his best friend about the girl not realising her mistake and the best friend gave him the option of break up and the boy agreed to it but unknowingly the girl heard it..now what do you think the girl should do..??

Sourav was very shocked about what he just heard..is this real life he thought..after 10 minutes of thought process sourav spoke break the relation , prove yourself and this would be a big slap on the face of that boy..

Taani looked at him shocked as if asking if he was serious he nodded..now taani was thinking somewhere or the other he was right she decided to do this only..

Sourav: i think now we should sleep..it's quite late..

Taani: ya right..i have college tomorrow..

Sourav: ok then , goodnight there's your room...

Taani: thanks..goodnight..

Sourav: anytime..

They headed towards their room and slept because they were tired..

Here with swayam..

He was pacing around the hall trying taani's no. As she was still not home it was 12 now..he called rey..

Rey: in half sleep..hello kon hai be..??

Swayam: tera baap..rey sun tu kya kar raha hai..??

Rey: naach raha hun..pagal soo raha hun yaar..teri tarah khuli aankhon se siren Sharon ke sapne nai dekhta mein..

Swayam: what soo raha hai dude tu meri sis ke saath chii rey..and chup kar or taani ko phone de abhi..!!

Rey: huh what..?? taani kaha se ayi beech me..??

Swayam: rey mazak band kar or taani ko phone de..

Rey: ye tu kya ke raha hai swayam taani apne room me hogi na..

Swayam: what..?? vo tere sath nahi hai..??

Rey: mere sath kyu ghar par nahi hai kya..??

Swayam: nahi rey taani to ghar aayi hi nahi..pata nahi kahan hai..? phone bhi nahi utha rahi hai..rey kuch kar na...

Now rey got up with a jerk and replied swayam tu ruk me college me check karke vahin aata hun..

Swayam: han rey please jaldi aa..

Rey went to college and checked but taani was not there he even asked watchman but he said taani went long ago..now he was damn worried he checked all the places where taani could be..but she was nowhere to be seen..atlast he went to swayam's house and informed swayam about this..reyam were very worried for taani..they spent whole night checking here and there but taani was nowhere they also called the gang but none of them knew about her..like this night passed..now it was morning..

Here taani woke up and got fresh and was leaving when she went to meet sourav last time..she knocked on the door of his room..he said come in and she went inside..

Taani: goodmorning..

Sourav: morning have a seat..

Taani: no no i would take a leave now..bhai must be worried moreover my phone and bag is in college so..

Sourav: do you mind giving me your number..

Taani: sure note it..and give me yours..

They exchanged numbers and taani left to her house..

Here with d3 gang..

Simmi: guys i think now we souls report to police..

Rey: ya right chal swayam..just then they heard the doorbell rang and swayam rushed to open it..looking at taani he sighed a breath of relieved and so did everyone..

But here starts the lecture..

Swayam: kahan thi tum taani..puri raat are you insane ek baar phone bhi nahi kara..?? han..?? itni badi kab hui tum or agar ho bhi gai tab bhi me tumhara bada bhai un..samajh nahi aata tumhe..itni carelessness kuch ho jata to..?? ab kuch bologi ya nahi..

Taani was in shock state seeing her bhai worried so much..

Taani: bhai chill me thik hun..see i am perfectly fine..sorry na..please*puppy face*

Now how could swayam ignore tis he hugged her tight..and said pata hai kitna darr gaye the hum..

Taani: hum..?

Swayam: han he moved aside and she now noticed the gang..and said hii guys..whatsup..??

Everyone passed angry glares to her but then seeing her puppy face everyone smiled even rey siled seeing rey their eyes met for a second but taani immediately broke the eye contact..here rey was confused..

Everyone left except rey as swayam knew rey will give a nice scolding to taani which he coudnt give..swayam went to freshen up and taani to her room and rey followed taani to her room..

As soon as taani entered the room rey closed the door and hugged her from behind placing his chin on her shoulder..

Rey: taani ye sab kya tha..?? mujhe bhi nahi bataya kahan thi..??

Taani: han nahi bataya to..

Rey: he was starteled listening her answer he turned her and asked taani you ok na...??

Taani: han kyun nahi hona chahiye..

Rey: tum ye kya bol rahi ho..??

Taani: sach..you know what rey enough of the crap..i am breaking up with you..

Rey: what..?? ye kya bol rahi ho..??? dimaag to thikane pe hai tumhara..??

Taani: kyun bura laga ..?? kal jab yahi baat ke liye aapne Sharon se agree kiya tab apko kya hua tha..??

Rey was stunned to hera this from taani..he did not expect that taani couls have heard their convo..he was about to speak something but taani showed her hand..and he stopped..

Taani: leave rey leave right now ...out of my room..she held his hand and dragged him out of his room..and he could not react as he still could digest the fact that she heard everything..

Taani closed the door and fell down crying silently...

Rey also went his home to be alone for sometime..as he knew he was wrong this time..he couls not forgive himself for it..

Taani stopped crying amd got ready for college and swayam too..though taani's eyes were red due to crying but she covered up with make-up..

Sharon somehow managed to get rey to college but he dint speak anything about his break-up..and Sharon wondered what happened suddenly..but ignored it for the time being

In college canteen d3 team..

Vicky: taani..

Taani: ya Vicky..

Vicky: tum or rey thik ho na..??

Taani looked at rey for 1s but then turned but rey still dint speak anything..he was lost..but none of them noticed it..

Taani: ya kyun..??

Vicky: you dint tell rey about you whereabouts he should know as a boyfriend isn't it..??

Taani: her eyes brimmed with tears and rey also looked up but then taani said why should he know about my whereabouts when we broke-up..

Everyone looked at her not able to digest what she said..so did rey..he thought how could she just reveal it..

Swayam:what taani ye tum..

Taani: sach keh rahi hun bhai..i don't want to trouble him more driving him away from dance his life(looking at him from corner of her eyes) just because of tauji and rey..turning to him..you don't have to hide your identity anymore..with this she went for her work..here everyone tried to console rey but none of them could succeed from that day everyone tried talking to taani but no use..even rey was tired of trying now..but he knew she was hurt and anger had already took over her...

Now was the time of NDC finales..but rey he was only physically present there but mentally he was still lost..

On the finale day..

Sharon: guys kuch karna hoga rey perform nahi kar payega varna..

Swayam: exactly hume to reason bhi nahi pata why they broke up hum kare to kare kya..?

Rinni: kyun na rey ko taani ki kasam de and tell him to dance for taani..

Everyone looked at her shocked..

Rinni: kya...?? why are you guys looking at me like that..??

Everyone: rinni you made sense..

Sharon: ok stop guys..chalo lets go to rey..

Somehow the team manages to make rey dance for taani and they won NDC...

Taani was very happy so was the team..

Someone: guys..

Everyone turned to find a broken rey saying something on mike...

Rey: guys aaj me aap sabke samne kuch confess karna chahta hun..mera pyar meri heartbeats.. meri taani i am sorry..i know bohot galat kiya mene i should gave it a second thought but i dint kya tum apne rey ko maaf nahi karogi..?? apne pyar ko second chance nahi dogi..?? bolo taani itni nafrat karti ho mujhse ki itni door chali gayi..ek baar bhi nahi socha ki ek baar rey ko ye bataun how i feel..bolo na taani..itna bura hun me ki mere sirf kene par tumne itna bada kadam utha liya..me tumhare bina mar...thats it..taani hugged him so tightly that he had to take steps back to control her weight..

Taani started sobbing digging her face in his chest..and rey he was feeling at the top of the world..he could not define this feeling..he was giving his killer smile and everyone was clapping for the reunion of two lovebirds..

After all this everyone went home..(tauji was out of town for business) and swayam went to drop Sharon and rey came home with taani..

Taani opened the door , switched on te lights and was heading towards er room wen she felt a grip on her hand she turned and found rey holding her hand..she smiled and asked kya hua rey..??

Rey: taani ab kabhi tum mujhe chod ke to nai jaogi na..??

Taani: she came close to him and said nahi rey...kabhi nahi ..par..

Rey: par kya taani..??

Taani: vo rey tauji..

Rey: he put his finger on her lips snd said...shhh bas tauji kya poori duniya se tumhare liye fight karunga ok..??

Taani hugged him tightly as if telling im i am always with you..

Rey: don't ever leave me again taani..i am incomplete without you..

Taani: no rey i wont leave you..even i am incomplete without you..but now we are complete with each other..


Ok so here i end guys..i know very long os na..3 hours it took me to write..ugh..very tired now..

Guys do hit like and comment..no kanjusi in that..

Bye

Love..

~Niki~

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing one yr..

I can feel the pain taani was going thru at starting

Luved sourav n taani frnd ship it was adorable

Taarey brk up was so emotional 😭

Felt bad for dem

N doer confession..OMG

It was too gud nikz..

All in all dhansu updt yr..

Keep writing more

N thanx for PM
Edited by -Sweet_Soumya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was nice story😊😊,kash d3 par yahi scene hota!!!!!🤢🤢🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res/unres
wow star just love it... 😊
i really hoped k D4 mein bhi aisa hii hota 😉
ur a superb writer...👏
Taani listen sharey conversation
Taarey break up 😭
taarey patch up😃
rey realize his mistake😆
loved it...
it just awesome...
thanxs 4 the Pm yaar
love u star...
❤️Teri Pagal Roshini ❤️
Edited by QTPie99 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome Niki 🤗

kaash D3 mein bhi yahi hota :|

n Saurav Malik *ahem*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome

taani heard sharey convo

taani tell taarey journey

Taarey break up

taarey patch up beautifull

rey realize his mistake

keep writing more😊😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os niki ...
Really luvd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg...this is just mind bloeing...i so loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww...
loved the os so so so much!!!
its supa cute!
pls keep writing...
and ho sakey toh send it to palki
thoda akal aa jayega!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh wow!!That was just super amazing!😃😳 it was emotional and awesome.😃 I loved it!kaash kaash D3 mein bhi aisa kuch hota!

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