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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

And you let her commit suicide???? 😲 😲 Omg... Such kinds of one shots genuinely make me cry at times. You didn't thankfully because that tragedy was right at the end. The start was beautiful. Every single paragraph was described with sheer beauty. Even the suicide part was a matter of fact. 😆 Nice os. 😃

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Okay, this is one the best things we have read in a while. The title made me curious and we opened it and we are glad we did.

Beautifully written. The flow in your writing and your writing style itself is really good.

Keep writing. And if you can please send a PM the next time you write something. :)

-Shreya and Kanishtha

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Shivani

@shivheena123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: muzzy_sk
Okay, this is one the best things we have read in a while. The title made me curious and we opened it and we are glad we did.

Beautifully written. The flow in your writing and your writing style itself is really good.

Keep writing. And if you can please send a PM the next time you write something. :)

-Shreya and Kanishtha

Thank you very much for all the compliments! I really appreciate seeing the wonderful comments. Please like and comment! Thank you very much!

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

that was so beautiful and so sad!

i kept hoping for a happy ending,that they've had a mu and would make up but the last two paras compltely knocked the wind out of my sails.

he cheated and she killed herself😲

her pain and hopelessness were almost tangible and my heart still feels smothered under her unbearable grief.

thats some powerful writing there.

the last line is going to stay with me for a long time.its so simple and hauntingly beautiful.

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SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Though it had sad ending but I loved it!!!!Nice one...

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Shivani

@shivheena123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: austen4ever
that was so beautiful and so sad!
i kept hoping for a happy ending,that they've had a mu and would make up but the last two paras compltely knocked the wind out of my sails.
he cheated and she killed herself😲
her pain and hopelessness were almost tangible and my heart still feels smothered under her unbearable grief.
thats some powerful writing there.
the last line is going to stay with me for a long time.its so simple and hauntingly beautiful.

Thank you so very much! I really appreciate the comments that the readers leave on my writing. Thank you a lot! 😛

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

that was a lovable os that was fabulous and superb os... 😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Wow... this is superduper amazing...😃

You write so beautifully... i'm flattered...🤗

Even if its a sad ending...but the beauty of their love overcome it ...😊

He looked so deeply in love with her @first sight...

But ... every lovestory is not a fairytale...😳

The drastic reality of life n love is full of thorns & roses both...

Maybe their equation was for a shortterm only...🤔

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

amazing os

loved the way u described everything

it was all in all fab

really liked the start but by the end of the os u killed her only

why did u kill her yaar😔

it was a beautifully wriiten os

[trully speaking first wen i read the os i didnt understand the story nly bcoz i thouht dat sharon was seeing all the old memories n at end suddenly she dies /may i was half asleep at night /but finally after reading twice dat to in coll during lec i understood ]

loved it

thanx for the pm

keep writing more

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Shivani

@shivheena123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: yogini64
Wow... this is superduper amazing...😃

You write so beautifully... i'm flattered...🤗

Even if its a sad ending...but the beauty of their love overcome it ...😊

He looked so deeply in love with her @first sight...

But ... every lovestory is not a fairytale...😳

The drastic reality of life n love is full of thorns & roses both...

Maybe their equation was for a shortterm only...🤔

That is so true! Roses don't exist without thorns on them. Not all fairytales are pretty fairytales indeed. Thank you for the amazing comment! I really appreciate it.

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