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Hello friends, this is my another work on swaron......Please bear with my mistake and do leave your reviews regarding the OS...😊


FALLING IN LOVE

He was here on the beach in this beautiful morning while Sun is just giving his mild presence and cool breeze making him feel light...as if taking all those thoughts away from him which is bothering him nowadays...These waves hitting his feet lightly...making him feel relaxed...He was enjoying his walk on the beach when his eyes caught the beautiful sight of a girl...actually his angel...She was helping some kids in making their sand castle...Her soft hairs blowing due to wind and irritating her a little...A wide smile touched her lips as she had a final look of the master piece created by them...

"Swayam come here...See this we made this...Isn't it beautiful??" she shouted breaking his trance

"Sharon u said something" he asked confusingly coming out from his thoughts

"Swayam what u were thinking so deeply ki meri awaz bhi sunai nhi di tumhe...I guess may be thinking about Tanya" she said teasingly

"Nothing like that Sharon...bas aise hi" he answered

"It's Ok lover boy...thinking about your fiancee is fine" she teased him again

Hearing word fiancee from Sharon again drifted swayam back in his thoughts. He wondered how much easy his life was still 6 months back.His life revolved around his family, friends and most of his best friend...Tanya. Tanu and Swayam knew each other since child hood..She was his First friend...A small smile crept on his lips as those beautiful days replayed in his mind.

Tanu was a really understanding and caring friend. Whenever he was in problem she was all ready with the solution of it. When they were in college they started to feel a liking towards each other and hence they started dating each other. But things changed 6 months back when Sharon got admission in the college. She affected him very much from the very first look of hers. Yeah despite being in a relation he was not able to control his heart. Her first look and he knew she definitely is special to him.

Flash back

Swayam was walking towards the class. He was late today which is very unusual of him. He was walking hurriedly towards stairs when his eyes got stuck to a girl. He couldn't see her face clearly as her soft silky hairs were blocking his view. He felt a sudden pull towards her and his feet automatically started moving towards her.

"Excuse me" Swayam heard himself saying to the girl.

She was turning to see the owner of the voice when she slipped. It was only by reflex that he held out his arms and caught her. He looked at the girl in his arms. The world around him stopped as he laid his eyes on her beautiful. Her eyes shut in fear of falling and her smooth silky hairs blowing. She slowly opened her eyes when realized that she was saved by someone.

"Hi...Actually I'm sorry...I just didn't realize how I slipped...thank u for saving me" her voice brought Swayam back from his thoughts while she realized that they were still in the same position...

She straightened herself and extended her hand towards him

"Hello...I'm Sharon Raiprakash...Actually I'm new here can u tell me the way to B.com II yr Class room" She asked hesitatingly'.

"Hi...I'm Swayam...Yeah I'm going to class only...you can come if you want" he said hoping to get a positive answer to which she nodded and smiled at him.

His smile widened remembering their first meeting.

Flash back ends

Soon they became very good friends. Sharon's friendly nature always attracted him. The way she talk, expresses her thoughts...her innocence and most of her smile. He never understood when she became integral part to his life. Tanya was always there in his life...but what he felt for Sharon was way too different. Actually he too never understood these new emotions which he only felt for Sharon. He mostly found himself either admiring her or stealing glances at her...all this was so new for him...which only his heart felt...

He knew only Tanya can help him out with this problem..but he was little hesitant to ask her help in this matter..But she was there to help him like always...

Flash back

"U know something...u love her swayam" Tanu said surprising him

"No Tanu how can this be possible...I know I feel attracted to her but It can't be love...U know na I love u" he explained her

"Mr. Genius u r wrong this time...U loved me swayam...and U still love me but only as a best friend...Swayam if u would have loved me, I would have been the happiest girl in the world...I wanted to see that love in your eyes and believe me I saw it but for Sharon" she said honestly

" You know Swayam somebody was so correct in saying that if u love two people at the same time, choose the second. If u really loved the First one u wouldn't have fallen for the second...and you love her swayam...u really do...Just realize this before its late" she continued

" You know what tanu you are the most amazing person I have ever met" he said giving her a friendly hug.

"I know that Swayam...and now when are you going to express your feeling to her" she questioned him

"Very soon" replied swayam

Flash back end

Sharon shook him hard to bring him back to present and they started walking again on wet sand.

"Swayam you wanted to tell me something na isiliye bulaya than na mujhe...and here you are so quiet...Kya hua??" Sharon questioned him

"Sharon I love you" he broke his silence

Sharon was numb after his confession.He did have feeling for her. She got excited that he reciprocated her feeling. She hugged him tight to let him know she too feels the same. She knew she had fallen for him on the very first meet of theirs when she fell in his arms. But his being in a relationship always stopped her from expressing her feeling, and then realization stuck

"what about Tanya...this is not right" she thought

"Swayam this can't be possible.How can u do this to Tanya??" she voiced her thought

"Sharon I never did wrong with her. She knew I never loved her and that's why we decided to move on in life..You know Sharon she was the one who made me realize that I love you and wanted me to tell u. I love her Sharon but only as a best friend and nothing more. It is u who made me realize true love, who evoked this new feeling in me.I love u alot..More than anything in the world...and even then you thing I did wrong I'll never force u Sharon..." He replied honestly to her.

Finally she looked up at him to see it in his eyes if he meant what he's saying only to get lost in those chocolate brown eyes and forget everything else. Both didn't notice how long they have been staring into each others eyes but landed back in the reality when the kids playing around pushed Sharon and she landed in swayam's arm

"Some things are meant to be Sharon... Like your falling in my arms" swayam said gaining a light punch from Sharon on his chest

"Swayam you know you ruined my dream proposal...but you are for sure the person I dreamed of...I love u swayam" Said Sharon hugging swayam tightly

"I love u too Sharon" Swayam replied tightening his grip around her'

Meeting someone is fate, becoming friend is a choice, but falling in love with someone is beyond our control. It is heart that can feel and express the emotion of love which is beyond any description<3



So guys do tell me how was it..😊


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Swaronvrushan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Sanju...it was indeed beyond description... I love each emotion each relation u portrayed.. . I may not able to conveyy my feeling abt how beautiful is ur os... bt I love it.


Just one question. Swayam and Tanya never got engaged to y did Sharon referrers her as his fiancee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing piece of work di...
its lovely😳
boleto ekdam jhakaas😉😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was beautiful
lovely
amazing piece of work
i loved it a lot...
thanks for the PM
do write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Story.😃
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww dear
its just amazing
out of the world
loved it
the feeling of love aww awsm
gr8 work
keep writing
enjoyed it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

Hi Sanju...it was indeed beyond description... I love each emotion each relation u portrayed.. . I may not able to conveyy my feeling abt how beautiful is ur os... bt I love it.


Just one question. Swayam and Tanya never got engaged to y did Sharon referrers her as his fiancee



Thnx alot for loving this OS😊
I'm glad u liked it

yeah actually by that line I wanted to show that Tanya nd Swayam were engaged...nd sharon is teasing him not knowing the about their broken engagement...




AninditaSwaRon thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Excellent work dear ..
Keep writing :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow such a lovely OS.😳😳👍🏼
Beautifully written and I really liked the thought behind it.
And I am glad Tanya realized that Swayam is in love with Sharon and she took the right decision.
Lovely work👏👏
Edited by VruShan_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sweet cute nd lovely os..
beautifully written..
loved it:)

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