Discovering love!! KR OS *HBD Vaishu*

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Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Misha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Simply superb sp

Missed your works so much

Loved the plot

Dumbo rey ! Uff !

Ajay was a great friend.

I loved everything !

Awesome !

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pallavi.14

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Its really nice deetha...
simple yet beautiful and you explained kriya's feelings her bottled up emotions just like a girl in love feels..
rey itna idio kaise hosakta hai? bday pe koi aise karta hai...

i really liked the way did catalyst part in their relationship and the ending was superb...

fab..liked it..

and belated happy birthday vaishali...

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Crazy_Arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Lovely os
simply amazing
great kria
dumb rey n
awsome frnd ajay
loved reading it
want an updt of SL n NT
actually want an updt of all ur works

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kriapatel

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Posted: 12 years ago

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amazing os love each n every bit of it kria is such a sweet heart n rey's friend is so good

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moumita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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simply amazing...

loved it...

happy birthday vaishu...

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luv_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesome OS...loved it very much

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Akanksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Dee... this was awesomeee kamini... 🤗

The mosttt Hatke Love Story i've ever read till date... 😃

i just loveddd it... 😃

damn ladki... tu dhamaal hai... 😃

First tym i saw a girl pampering a guy... 😆

ladko ko akal dene k liye jhatke dene he padhte hain...😃

when Ajay said "kya tum mere sath" .. i was like... WHAT... 😲

but then baad mei sab clear hua... hehe... 😃

i really really loved it... 😳

Love u for this... 🤗

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Asma

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Deeth yeah tune likha..
Sachi muchi...😲
Yeah concept kab kahan aur kaise sochaaa..
Bhanak bhi nahi tha mujheee...
Its awesome yaar...
HBD Vaish

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

Kasamh se dee...

main kinni baar padh chuka hun isse...

majjha aaya iss chote se bacche ko... :D

Though i have some questions:

ajay ko realise kaise huya?

fir ek mein rey is thinking juta maare apne aapko.. coz he didn't kiss her.. lekin pehle tph karta tha.. so woh wala nhi samjha of feeling wala...

fir ek baar scrap check kana vahan bhi ek question hai...

coming to the OS:

i just loved it...

it was lovely.. especially the way u drew various parallel situation...

and then the way u showed the relation in an opposite way was amazing...

i really loved how u showed small gestures... it was amazing...

just loved it...

and thank you so much... :*

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