Swaron OS: Jealousy doing wonders

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: smartypantstanu

Thank you so much 😃 🤗

no problem... 😆😆

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

😊AMAZING OS dear...

I just love the way u writ...u kept it simple..realistic and it was not at all dramatic...

Swayam was the typical Swayam -the lover boy and Sharon was the Siren here...

Loved it 😃

Even gang was beautifully portrayed 😳

Keeps writing dear😊

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

wish this actually happened when i watched d3!!

fabulous ending!!

ty for the pm!

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swapna

@shan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

lyk button nt working...

i lyk the OS ...jealous shron is fun to watch...i njoyed reading this OS...hope it happens in real...

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

loved it to the core

swayam worrying for Sharon so cute

and Sharon jealous of aashi nice

swayam and Sharon close moment hayeee

and swayam announcement yaar it will be more fun in watching rather reading but this was also great

nice os

thanks for the pm

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awww it was so cute!!
ahhh I loved the jealous Sharon 😆
their convo was just so adorable.. loved it...
and the announcement was awesome.. 😃
beautifully written.. 👏
thank u for the PM 🤗

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VruShan_MaNan

@VruShan_MaNan

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Awww such a cute OS.😳

I really wish something like this happens in D3.😉

Although SwaRon are a couple, but I still want Swayam to see Sharon's jealousy and possessiveness. It will be the cutest.

Thank you so much for the lovely OS.🤗

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Rohan :)

@RoHaNmAlHoTrA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

cute os...

the first thing i wud like 2 say is the selection of title...really very well thought...

then the concept...i mean once sharon returns...really waiting for it...

and then coming to the os...

While thinking about her a smile crept on his face as he remembered their jogging date'

yeh accha hai jab GF saath naa ho toh majnu yadoon mainhi khush ho jate hain...😆

They wanted to run to each other and pull each other into a tight hug but to their bad luck the entire gang was there

really bad luck when swaron saw each other after so many days...but damn it gang was der...😭

Swayam (walking forward and a bit hyper): Agar weakness hai toh you should rest'.. Tum college kyun aayi?

the concerned swayam...so cute😳

SMS Convo

'Hey you ok na?'

'Ya baba don't worry! I'm fine!'

'Mujhe tumse baat karni hai... I want to spend some PT with you'

(blushing) 'Ok we'll meet after rehearsals'

'Kya! After rehearsals! I can't wait that long'

'Swayam!!'

'Ok fine!!!'

oh God pls tell the love birds to be a little patient...but not their fault...after all they r swaron...romance nahi karenge toh kya karenge...😉

She settled next to Swayam and started fiddling with the laptop which was still in Swayam's lap'.. They both were inches apart but now were use to this closeness (obviously yaar girlfriend-boyfriend hai)'

aww...i just love them being close ignoring the presence of the gang...😊

They all had a small laugh'.. The boys also made it a point that Rini and Neha kept Aashi away from them'.. But here Sharon didn't know how to react'.. She just walked out of there as her eyes had welled up'..

yaar inlogon ko aur koi kam dhandha nahi hai kya...always trying to hookup someone or the other...and shron got sad...hmmm😊

Sharon smiled as he kissed her forehead...Swayam pulled her into a bone crush hug'.. She reciprocated and nuzzled into his chest'.. That was her place'.. No one dared to trespass it'.

aww... trespass!!!🤣 nice use of words...

they announced...thats nice...

well finally...

awsm writng...no need to say that u r always a fab writer...this one is very cute...and well imagined...nicely penned down...i ll take it as a return gift...:P

Rohan :)

P.S.:hope u r enjying 2day...

Edited by rohanmalhotra15 - 12 years ago

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..Aishaa..

@..Aishaa..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

firstly i would like to say thank you so much for the OS. swaron screen pey toh nahin par OS mein toh mila

the OS was superr cutee. i wont say romantic because it more of an innocence to it that romance. And reading such OS at times is a good change for me.anyways i loved the OS.

Thoguh this Os wa ssuper cute but im not realy fond of watching it on TV. so i dont wnat such a revealation but yes definitely ill still maintain the Os was amazinggg.

and 1 thing i would even like to mention is that uve done a good job by maintaning the romace but still showing it to an extent. it had actually made it look very realistic.

in short, amazing OS, keep writing

PS - hope the comment was not that short. reading ure work for the 1st time so didnt wnat it to be too short :P