SwaRon OS- I'll be there for you!||Challenged||

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cscs

@cscs

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

mihi🤗...its a lovely os...i hv nvr ever thought tht u would write such a unique os wid dese words..😊..really i was expecting sm predictable os..bt dis 1 is jst lyk swaron khubsoorat n unpredictable..😳

cmng to os...i loved it..😊..sharon n swayam both were in dre character..sharon d diva, go getter n fighter..she didnt stopped in bw.. n swayam..as usual majnu..bachpan se..😆..n knws sharon so well.. play was nice...n tht kiss..seriously tht was d major twist in dis os..nvr ever thought tht swaron kiss lyk tht..bt i liked it😳.. swaron LLHH..dere convo..swayam saving sharon..everything..i loved dis os frm starting to end.. thanx alot mihi fr dis os.. n dis is my longest comment on any os.. ps- mihi i knw u hv cmpleted ur dare...bt its a request..i want a sequel of dis os.😳

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cscs

@cscs

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: tanha29
Res charu di.

soory double posting😳😳

Edited by cscs - 12 years ago

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: cscs

soory double posting😳😳

It's difficult di! I have two more challenge OSS!

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cscs

@cscs

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

mihi..no problm..aaram se likh diyo if u feel lyk continuing😊..u knw na..m totally velle😆

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Keira Marina

@km29

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Such a sweet wonderful Os, Tks 😊

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Great OS!!!

loved the determination of Sharon!!!

she was willing to go rock climbing even if she has a fear of heights!!

and swayam being swayam always encouraged her!!!

i loved how you added the princess and the frog story in this!!!

that brought back a lot of memories!!!

is there another part??

if there is can you post it??

becuz i reallly want to know what happens next!!!

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Wonderful OS! :) I loved the ending bit the most. "Frog". Clicked the past memories! Acha, can you please add me, I am online through my phone, and it's pretty difficult to send a buddy req, and I so want to read your works. Love.

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

awesome os

i loved it frm the start to the end

it was just swaronish type soo beautiful n unique

p.s. can u plz write 2nd part of it also where swaron becomes a couple

thanx for the pm

keep writing !!!

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

awww the OS was just too beautiful.. 😳
it was totally unique.. and I loved reading this...
the way u described every moment was beautiful...
loved the idea of Rock Climbing 👍🏼
awesome work 👏
thank u for the PM 🤗