taarey n swaron dare os- FIRST DATE

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hey guys here is your all cutie with a os! i was given a dare on euphonies of taarey to write an os by mahi(...manyata...) so here you go-

TAAREY N SWARON OS: FIRST DATE

A girl in her room was getting ready for her first date. When someone called her from outside.

Person- taani jaldi karo! We are getting late! Aur kitna time logi?

Taani shouting- aa rahi hoon bhai! 2 minutes more!

Taani looking at herself in the mirror. She was wearing the dress given by him. Arey you don't know who is he? Arey he is her prince charming rey.

Taani's dress-

Taani to herself- aaj mera pehla date hai mere prince charming ke saath! Thodi nervous hoon but jab unke saath rahungi to meri nervousness gaayab ho jaayegi! Ok ab mai chalti hoon! Warna bahaar jo mera wait kar rahe hain wo room me aakar kheenchke bahar le jaayenge!

Taani goes to the hall. Someone looked at her and was lost for some time in her that she was looking so beautiful but then suddenly.

Person- taani kitna time laga diya tumne!

Taani- arey mere pyaare bhai! I know aap Sharon ke saath apni first date ke liye desperate ho par mujhe bhi to rey ke saath apni pehli date ke liye ready hona tha! Ok ab chaliye!

Taayam went to their car n drove to rey's place. Rey was waiting outside leaning on the hood of his car. He was there for almost half an hour. It was their first date n she was late.

Rey's outfit-

Taayam's car stopped in front of his. Taayam came out from the car. Rey looked at her n just kept staring at her with mouth open n taani kept blushing. Swayam came and stood beside rey n looked at him n looked that he was continuously looking at taani which was making taani blush.

Swayam- rey!

Rey still looking at taani- kon hai be?

Swayam- taani ko dekhna band kar!

Rey still lost in taani- dekhne de na! waise bhi tu hai kaun mujhe ye bolna wala?

Swayam really angry- rey I said stop staring at my sister!

Rey got startled and looked at swayam

Rey- swayam tu kab aaya?

Swayam- tabse khada hoon jabse tu taani ko stare kar raha tha!

Rey- uh sorry dude! Aaj wo kitni beautiful lag rahi hai na! I just don't want to take my eyes off her! N please haan! Aaj humaari first date hai! Kamsekam aaj ke din to no restrictions!

Swayam- see kuch rules follow karne padenge!

Rey- what??? Rules!!! Dude maine aaj tak koi bhi rule follow kiya hai?

Swayam angry- rey!!!

Rey- ok shoot!

Swayam- 1st no boozing

2nd no getting close

3rd be home before 12

4th no'.(rey cuts him)

Rey- oh hello! Bas itna hi rehne de! Warna ye date na date jaisi nahi lagegi! (silently to himself) jo mai karna chahta tha usko no bol diya isne! Yaar koi iss 2nd rule ko hatao! No getting close!!! Ye kaunse date pe hota hai? Urgh!

Swayam left taani there n went to Sharon's home to pick her up. Here taarey are on the way to their destination. In the car-

Taani was looking outside n rey was drving the car. In between both were stealing glances at each other.

Rey looking straight- tum bohot beautiful lag rahi ho iss dress me!

Taani looks at him- hmmm you too looking handsome!

Again the silent took over. But their eyes n heartbeats were talking to each other every second. Like this they reached to their destination hotel 'THE CROWN'. (just a random name guys) they already had a table booked there. Rey pulled a chair for her like a gentleman and then he too get seated. There was time for the dinner. Both were just drowning in each other eyes but little did they know than some other are also having eyes on them.

Here with swaron-

Swayam reached at sharon's place n saw her standing there dressed so beautifully. But wait a minute! Why she was looking red? Oh yes he was late on his first date! Oops! Swayam stopped the car n got down.

Sharon- ab aane ka time mil raha hai tumhe?(fuming) kaha the itni der se? mai aadhe ghante se tumhara intezaar kar rahi thi!

Swayam lost in her- tum gusse me aur bhi beautiful lagti ho!

Sharon's anger just flew away n she too got lost in his eyes.

Swayam- you are looking too gorgeous Sharon!

Sharon blushed- umm thanks! N you are too looking handsome!

Sharon's dress-

Swayam's outfit-

Swayam- wo I am sorry! Mai late ho gaya! Taani ki wajah se!

Sharon- umm no its ok! Chale?

Swayam- oh ya sure!

He opened the door for her n he himself get seated n drove to their destination but little did they knew one more car went after them.

Who were these peoples? Why are they spying on taarey n swaron? They are d3 gang! The gang get to know about the first date of these two couples n they decided to spy on them. The girls went after swaron n boys after taarey.

With taarey-

Rey slowly forward his hand n put it on taani's hand which was on the table. Taani blushed at this n rey too blushed a little bit seeing this n again they got lost in each other's eyes. A waiter came n this broke their eye lock.

On the table nearby-

Nil- kya yaar iss waiter ko bhi abhi aana tha! Kitna romantic scene chal raha tha!

Vicky- agar ye isi tarah ek doosre ki aankhon me doobe rahenge to ho chukka inka first date!

Amar- haan yaal! Ye log saali laat yahi kalenge kya?

Nicky(nil+Vicky)- kya bola?

Bharat- bol raha hai ki ye log saari raat yahi karenge kya?

Then something catched nil's attention

Nil- ye kahan se aa gaye?

Vicky, amar, bharat- kaun aa gaya?

Nil- udhar dekho!

They looks at the entrance n saw swaron entering n behind them girls are also entering. Boys looked at each other shocked. Suddenly nil called simmi

Simmi- hello nil!

Nil- arey apne left me dekho!

Simmi looked at her left n saw boys n she told this to other girls.

Simmi- par tum log yahaan kya kar rahe ho? Tum log to taani aur rey ke peeche the na?

Nil- arey rey aur taani bhi yahin hai! Tum girls idhar aao!

All the girls came to boys table.

Neha- kya taani n rey also came here!!! Ab kya hoga!

They looked at taarey n swaron's position n saw that they were sitting next to each other. Like this-

Rey-taani_sharon-swayam, so that rey n swayam were facing each other n taani n Sharon were facing their backs. They both had ordered their food n it came.

Taarey's table-

Taani- wow rey! Ye sab to mere favourite hain!

Rey- ab girlfriend ki favourites ka khayal to rakhna hota hai!

Taani- lekin aapko kaise pata ki meri favourite dishes kya kya hain?

Rey- bas pata hai!

Taani- batayiye na!

Rey- ab swayam mera best friend hai to itna to fayada hona hi chahiye!

Taani giggled- waise abhi bhai ne aapko rules bataye honge na!

Rey- tum haso mat mujhpar! Jaao nahi baat karunga!

Taani still giggling- ok sorry sorry!

Swaron's table-

Swayam- I am surprised! Saare mere favourite hain!

Sharon- ab tumhari girlfriend hoon!

Swayam- sach batao kisne bataya?

Sharon- rey ne!

Swayam- Sharon shaadi ke baad tum mere liye khana banaogi?

Sharon- par mujhe to khana banana hi nahi aata!

Swayam- koi baat nahi mai banaunga but tum mujhe khilana!

Sharon- ok!(blushing all red)

It was going all lovey dovey between both the couples suddenly swayam looked up to Sharon and noticed rey n the same time rey also noticed swayam. Swayam was eating so the food got stuck in his throat n rey was drinking his drink which he spit out suddenly. Swayam started coughing so Sharon got a water glass and went upto him.

Sharon- tum theek to ho?

At the same time taani went up to rey.

Taani- kya hua rey? Aap theek to hain?

Taani hearing sharon's voince n swayam name turned back n saw her bhai coughing so she went to him. N Sharon also turned hearing taani's voice n saw rey so she went to him.

Here with the gang-

Bharat- abe ye kya ho raha hai?

Vicky- haan ye taarey se taayam

Nil- aur swaron se sharey kyun ban gaye?

Neha- neha saying this is not happening!

Aashi- haan ye to ulta types ho gaya!

Simmi- kuch karna padega!

Rinni- idea!

They all discussed the plan n went from there.

Here with taarey n swaron-

After reyam got okay taani n Sharon asked together to reyam-

Taani to swayam- bhai aap yahaan?

Sharon to rey- rey tum yahaan?

Taani n Sharon looked at each other n asked the same question.

Rey- swayam tu yahaan kya kar raha hai?

Swayam- ye to mujhe tujhse poochna chahiye!

Rey- meri yahaan date thi taani ke saath!

Swayam- meri bhi yahaan Sharon ke saath date thi!

Reyam- wait a minute, what!!!!

Rey in his mind- what the hell! Date pe bhi no privacy! Urgh! Ab to rules tod bhi nahi sakta!

Swayam in his mind- what the hell! Rey aur taani yahaan pe!! Ab mai apni date par kaise concentrate karunga? Mera possessive bhai side to kick hota rahega!

Swayam- sharon chalo hum yahaan se chalte hain!

Rey- haan taani hum kahin aur chalte hain!

Suddenly some announcement- arey guys kahaan chale? Wait wait!

A host came towards taarey n swaron- you guys are the most romantic couples of the day!

This was followed by an applause by the others sitting there.

Host- aaj Sunday hai n every Sunday yahaan ke dancing floor pe most romantic couples dance karte hain n aap logon ke beech to tie hui hai so can we have the couples on the floor please!

Again there was a huge round of applause. It was all gang's plan.

Taani whispering- chaliye na rey!

Sharon whispering- chalo na swayam

Reyam smiled n took their respective ladies on the dance floor. The host played a slow song.

Bheege hont tere, pyaasa dil mera

Swayam held sharon's waist gently.

Lage abr sa mujhe tan tera

Rey kept hand on taani's hand and pulled her to him

Chhamke barsaayein mujh par ghataayein

Swaron started to sway their bodies to the tune

Tu hi meri pyaas, tu hi mera jaam

Taarey started to dance n rey was looking at taani with so much love in it but still craving for more love from taani

Kabhi mere saath koi raat guzaar

Swayam looks at sharon very lovingly

Tujhe subha tak main karoon pyaar

Rey strokes taani's cheek n she closes her eyes

Wo oh oh, wo oh oh, wo oh oh, wo oh oh

Reyam made their respective ladies make a soft spin n made their backs face them so that now they were hugging them from back

Saansein aanch teri, tan aag tera

Chheene neend meri, loote chain mera

Taani n Sharon felt the breath of their respective boys on their shoulders which made them close their eyes n shudder

Kaala jaadu kare lambe baal tere

Sharon's hair flew over swayam's face(just in the maula mere sequence)

Aankhen jheel teri, dore laal tere

Taani looks at rey sideways n both get lost in each other

Kabhi mere saath koi raat guzaar

Reyam make turn their respective girls to face them

Tujhe subha tak main karoon pyaar

They again swayed to the tune.

Wo oh oh, wo oh oh, wo oh oh, wo oh oh

Wo oh oh, wo oh oh, wo oh oh yeah, wo oh oh

Reyam make their girls do some spins

Aankhen keh rahi jo na hum kahe

Use sun le tu jo na lab kahe

Swaron again facing each n other swaying to the tune. Their eyes were talking to each other the talks can't be done from their mouths.

Tu na soye aaj, main na soun aaj

Tujhe dekhoon aaj, tujh mein khoun aaj

Rey and taani intertwined their left hands in such a way that they were facing each other in a sideway manner n they swayed lost in each other.

Kabhi mere saath koi raat guzaar

Tujhe subha tak main karoon pyaar

Rey kept both his hands on taani's waist while swayam kept one hand on sharon's waist n with the other hand he held her hand.

Wo oh oh, wo oh oh, wo oh oh, wo oh oh

Rey made their respected ladies a dip in the end

Bheege hont tere, pyaasa dil mera

Lage abr sa mujhe tan tera

The song ends with taarey n swaron still in the same position lost in each other.

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Edited by adi.cutiepie - 12 years ago

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Then suddenly the huge round of applause made them come to reality n they made their respected girls stand properly

Host- wow what an romantic dance was that! Thank you so much guys!

Taarey and swaron ate dinner together on one table n when they were going they noticed the gang. They went upon their table to confirm their doubt.

Taarey n swaron- guys tum log yahaan!!!!

Gang looked at taarey n swaron n stand up. They were smiling like idiots.

Vicky- ah wo rey hum idhar….(the gang told them the truth)

Taarey n swaron were angry

Sharon- guys manners nahi hain kya? Kisike private time pe aise spy nahi karte!

Rey- guys what is this! this is note done!

Swayam- guys kuch to sharam karo!

All looked at taani

Taani- kya?

Shareyam- tum kuch nahi bologi?

Taani- mujhe lagta hai unhe maaf kar dena chahiye! Ab sab khatam ho chukka hai to ab unhe daantne se kya fayada!

Nil- taani kitni acchi hai na!

Neha- taani right is! Forgiving us you all are! Please!

Shareyam- ok we forgive!

Vicky- waise rey hmm kya dance tha nahi! Clear chemistry!(taarey blushed)

Neha- and swayam and Sharon ka dance kitna romantic tha!(swaron blushed)

Vicky- arey rey, swayam ek moment pe to laga you guys are gonna kiss taani n Sharon.(again they blushed)

TaaShaReYam- stop teasing guys!

This was their memorable, crazy, weird but still romantic first date!

ok guys do comment! how was it? i hope i am up to your expectation mahi! i know it was not an romantic one but yeah a crazy n little bit funny one!😆

love aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww Dii ... That was such a sweet OS with such a jhatka ... Rey and Swatam apni lady love ko same place mein le Gaye ... And Swayam Is Really Posessive Bhai ... And In the end Gang were so funny teasing TaaShaReYam ... Loved It!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

Aww Dii ... That was such a sweet OS with such a jhatka ... Rey and Swatam apni lady love ko same place mein le Gaye ... And Swayam Is Really Posessive Bhai ... And In the end Gang were so funny teasing TaaShaReYam ... Loved It!

thank you neha! i am glad that you liked it! thank you so much!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS Adi, Reyam cant stop looking at their beautiful gf... Swayam possessive bhai side is always a treat. Love their dance and the gang spying on them was hilarious. I love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww...
such a sweet os...
loved it...
thanks 4 d pm😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res/Unres
Loved th Os
Loved the Reyam scene dekhne de na abe meri sis ko dekhna band kar 🤣
And all his rules 🤣
The dance sequence
The D3 spyies 🤣
Inshort it was a full intertaining package 😉
Edited by cuppypie121 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os really loved every bit of it very well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fantastic OS
just loved it
LOL swayams rule for date :p
it was too cute (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bechara Rey iss possessive bhai ka kya karega?! 🤣

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