TR&SS OS Balam Pichkari-Love Filled Watergun(Dare)

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"I hope I'm
looking fine … Mere baal kuch zyada ajeeb nahi lag rahe hai … Taani ko mere bouquet
pasand toh aayega … Agar usse voh flowers pasand nahi toh … "


Rey was excited and tensed … His first Holi with his dear
girlfriend, Taani. But let's just say they weren't on good terms and He's been
trying to set things right … There was Holi Party held by the college and he
knew this was chance to get things back to normal …


"I know she
loves to see to see me in white … This shirt is her favourite, I'm surely gonna
wear this … Ab dekhna main kaise tumhe manuga Miss Shekhwat "


He left for college in the excitement to meet his Taani ….


But not everything was well at Taani's house … Taani was
ready for the Holi party … She had worn the a white salwar kameez because she knew that Rey loved it when she would
wear indian … He would always say that she would extremely beautiful whenever
she would wear indian and bearing in mind that it was Holi, and everyone would
be smeared in colours, she decided to wear white. But she was upset with him,
She wanted to spend some quality time with him so they decided to go for lunch,
But Rey didn't reach … She waited 15 mins, 30 mins , 1 hour till it reached 1
and a half hours … She called him up in frustration and anger and found out
that he had gone out with his friends, forgetting about their date …


"I won't
give any attention to him today … Main bhi dekhu kya voh mujhe mana paayega yaa
phir bhul jaayega ki main unse naraz hun …"


Taani was actually waiting for her Bhai, Swayam who was
inside talking to his girlfriend, Sharon, unknown to the fact that his sister
was waiting for him


"Tum hi batao
ki main pehnu … you're the best at clothes selection after all your Sharon Rai
Prakash! Whatever you choose will surely be the best …"


"Okay Baba
… Wear a white tee with your blue and red checked jacket … you look really cute
in that…Abhi mujhe jaana hai, Cultural Secretary hun … Bahut kaam hai, Bye!"
Sharon rushed and kept the phone


"Sharon,
Tum mujhe humesha aise kaise feel karwa sakti ho …I'm so glad hum ek saath hai
… And that too officially …"


Swayam and Sharon had finally become SwaRon … How? Well let's
just say that Sharon had put her heart in front of Swayam and how could he say
no! He actually blank out for atleast 10 minutes trying to process what Sharon
had said to him … Yup those three magical words … And finally after getting
Sharon worried he said I Love You Too! And the Gang were standing right outside
the rehearsal hall, where they confessed, and relieved … Come on, wasn't their
chemistry obvious … Anyways coming back … Swayam was lost in Sharon's thoughts
till it was broken by his angry young sister …


"Kaha ho
aap Bhai! Hum late ho jaayenge … Aap toh Sharon Bhabhi se zyaada time laga rahe
honge … Please jaldi kijiye …"
Taani yelled frustrated, not just
by her brother also her boyfriend who hasn't called since she has woken up … It
was Rey's daily routine to call Taani at around 8a.m. to wake her but because
she was upset, she hasn't picked up the call but today he didn't even call …

"Ha Taani chalo …"
Swayam said and they left …


The Party was held at St.Louis College at places like the
basketball court, garden and entrance of the school.


Sharon had just entered the college to find it filled with
people … Other colleges such as Welhams and KR College were also invited since
St.Louis had a big campus … and this would only make the college more reputable
so why not? The whole placed was filled with colours and people smearing colours
on each other's faces …


Sharon was welcomed in a similar way by her gang


"Happy Holi
Sharon!"
Simmi said while putting red colour on her cheek


"Happy Holi
Sharon!"
The rest of the Gang shouted


"Sharon,
Swayam kaha hai?"
Vicky asked as Sharon blushed … Now Sharon was the
only one who knew about Swayam's whereabouts' because most of the time they
would be together …


"Mujhe nahi
pata … Swayam Taani ke saath aata hoga"
Sharon replied as the Gang started
teasing her …


Soon enough Rey came in only in search of his dear beloved
Taani … He had seen where the Gang were and was in hope that Taani would also
be with them …


"Taani kaha
hai?"
Rey asked as soon as
he reached the gang


The gang bursted out in laughter … "Abhi abhi aaye ho kuch hi, hello nahi bas girlfriend ki chinta hai …
Lo Rey toh humare gang ka dusra majnu ban gaya …"
Nil commented making the
gang laugh even more and Rey blush …


Now the attention was diverted from Sharon to Rey … But they
both were lost in their own thoughts …


"Swayam ko
aane mein itna time kyun lag raha hai? … Main toh kab ki aa chuki hun aur voh
ab taka aye nahi … hmm ab dekhna Mr. Swayam Shekhawat … Tum mujhe itna tardpa
rahe ho, Main bhi aapko tardpati hun"
Sharon thought as a plan formed in
her mind …


"Lo aa gaye
… Mr. and Miss Shekhawat"
Vicky said bringing Sharon and Rey out of their
thought and towards Swayam and Taani


Rey was lost in his Taani … She was looking so beautiful, He
was so happy to see her … And she was wearing the same colour as him! Well
couples match …


And Sharon almost forgot her plan and went up to Swayam …
Swayam made sure no one was looking and he winked! A shade of crimson crept up
her cheeks and suddenly she recalled her plan to make sure she makes him want
her even more so she went away making Swayam confused …


Taani was trying to ignore Rey as much as possible but her
heart wanted to see him, just take a small glance at him. So she decided to
take a small look … Just to see how he was … And as soon as she took a glance
at him, she found him staring at her shamelessly and then she got lost in his
hazel-brown eyes … Oh how much she missed the warmth in his eyes … and Rey was
also lost in her innocent sparkling chocolate brown eyes … He just wanted to go
and hug her but he knew that she was upset and was not going to upset her more
… Taani then realised that she was upset with him so she immediately looked
away …


"Ahem ahem" The Gang
"coughed" bringing Rey out of Taani Dreamland …


"Okay guys
mujhe aur Sharon ko jaana, kyunki hum GS aur CS hai toh baaki colleges ke
students ko welcome karna hai"
Taani said as she dragged Sharon
with her leaving Swayam and Rey sad to see their respective lady-love leave.


Taani and Sharon had reached a corner where they could
actually hear themselves and be away from Rey and Swayam as much as possible.


"Okay toh
ab kya karna hai Bhabhi?"


"Taani!
Maine kitni baar kaha hai ki …"


"Haa haa
aapko Bhabhi mat bulao … Okay Sharon, Aapke plan ka kya kare?"


"Hume bakra
dundhna hoga!"


"Bakra?"


"Haa plan
ke liye kiskiko bakra banana padega varna kaise chalega"


Taani was already informed about Sharon's plan because Sharon
very well knew that they were fighting so she decided that to make her best
friend another love-sick majnu. So
while waiting for Taani and Swayam to come, Sharon had messaged Taani the plan
and she immediately agreed … Why wouldn't she, she too wanted to see how
jealous Reyaansh Singhania can be …

While deciding who to make the bakra, Taani had spotted a familiar face … and everything went into
place … She had found the perfect bakra
He was no other then Shivam urf Shirritating


"Bhabhi voh
dekho!"
Taani exclaimed in excitement


"Taani
tumse kitni baar kehna padega"
Sharon said frustrated with Taani
constantly calling her Bhabhi


"Acha sorry
par dekho toh sahi"
… She pointed towards Shivam … "Shivam!"


"OMG!
Shivam yaha? Oh right voh toh KR College mein padta hai … Toh kya hua agar
Shivam aaya ?"


"Aare
Sharon … Shivam humare plan ka bakra ban sakta hai … Voh aapka ex-boyfriend tha
aur mera bhi … Bhai aur Rey zarur Shivam se jealous ho jaayenge"


"Wow Taani
… amazing thought … and since we know him, we can ask him to pretend with us …
and I'm pretty sure voh mana nahi karega"


"Chalo
Sharon, Hum abhi Shivam se puchte hai"


"Ha ha
chalo"


Taani and Sharon went off to meet Shivam …


Now, the two majnu's were
missing their laila's … So they
decided to look for them despite the huge crowd


"Yeh Taani bhi naa … Sharon ko lekar kyun gayi
… Mujhe uske saath time spend karna tha … Ab tum kaha ho Sharon!"


Not so far away from Swayam, Rey was also lost in Taani's
thoughts


"Taani kya
tum mujhse itni naaraz ho ki mujhse teek se dekh bhi nahi sakti … Kaha ho tum
meri star!"


Due to being lost in their dear girlfriends thoughts, Rey and
Swayam did not realise where they were walking towards and suddenly


"THUD!"


They both banged into each other and fell on the ground


"Ouch!" both Swayam
and Rey groaned in pain while rubbing the back of their heads


"Saale, tu
dekh ke nahi chal sakta kya"
Rey complained to Swayam


"Haa aur tu
kounsa bahut dhyaan laga ke walk kar raha tha"


"Accha
Sorry … But yeh bata ki tu inta khoya huya kyun tha?"


"Voh
actually main Sharon ko dhund raha tha … aur tu?"


"Voh main
Taani ko dhund raha tha …"


"Tum Kyun
meri behen ko dhund raha tha?"
Swayam questioned Rey with a
doubtful look


"Abbe yaar
pakka mat … Main teri behen ko nahi apni girlfriend ko dhund raha hun … Samjhe
sale saab!"
Rey replied with a firm tone


"Toh kya
hua voh phir bhi meri behen hai"


"Meri
Girlfriend"


"Meri
Behen"


And like this, they had continued their argument regarding
Taani … Swayam being the possessive Bhai
and Rey being the possessive boyfriend … But while arguing, something had
caught Rey's attention which had somewhat made him speechless … He immediately
stop fighting which did not go unnoticed by Swayam …


"Kya hua
Rey tu chup kyun ho gaya?"
Swayam asked a bit worried


Rey, due to being specchless, just pointed somewhere behind
Swayam


And as Swayam turned around he looked no less shocked as Rey
and why he … His girlfriend wouldn't and his sister was talking to their ex-boyfriend!


Taani and Sharon had told Shivam about their plan to make the
boys jealous and he agreed, though it took some persuasion and they had to
promise that Rey and Swayam will not beat him up … which they were also unsure
of knowing their nature especially their possessiveness towards Taani and
Sharon.


Rey and Swayam were boiling up, Anger was evident on their
face … How could they be with HIM! After all he has done … Why?


"Yeh Taani
uss Shirritating ke saath kya kar rahi hai? … Aaj toh main Shivam ko chodunga
nahi … Samajhta kya hai voh apne aap ko? … Meri Taani kea ass–pass bhi aaya
toh sat-sat ke marunga usko"


"Sharon
Shivam ke saath kya kar rahi hai … I thought she hated him … Par yeh kya …
Taani bhi vaha hai"


Rey and Swayam were looking at the trio were fuming
expressions … This triggered Shivam a bit but Taani and Sharon assured him
nothing would happen


"Heyy guys
… What's up?"
Vicky said while coming towards Rey and Swayam


He was welcomed with angry glares from both Rey and Swayam
and sensed something was wrong …


"Kuch hua
kya guys … Itne angry kyun lag rahe ho?


"Kuch nahi"
Both of them answered in the same angry tone


"Okay yeh
lo Thandai"
Vicky offered them


Due to their attention being somewhere else … They had taken
the wrong drink … They had accidently taken the Bhang


"Guys yeh
nahi … yeh toh"
Vicky exclaimed but they were in no mood to listen …
Instead they had taken more drinks and had become fully drunk on Bhang


While this was happening, Taani and Sharon were looking for
some sweets … It was Holi so some cheating was allowed … Fortunately they had
found some ladoo's on a table and ate
them … But it was unknown to them that those ladoo's were made with Bhang
so now they were also under the Bhang effect.


"Hi Bhabhi!"


"Hi Nanadji!"


And both Sharon and Taani bursted out laughing … Shivam soon
found them and came towards them … He was shocked to see them in such a state
but it did not take him long to realise it was due to the Bhang ladoo's they had in their hands …


"Ehh …
Shirritating … tum yaha kya kar rahe ho … tumse kitni baar kehna padega ke tum
mere boyfriend nahi ho"
Taani said making a cute angry expression


"Aur mera
bhi …"
Sharon added with the same expression


They continued their conversation, well Taani and Sharon
blabbering nonsense and Shivam trying to stop them …


Well this did not go unnoticed by the two lover-boy's … They immediately
went up to Shivam and jerked him away from the two girls


<font color="#3300FF">Music

</font>

<font color="#FF0000">Rey and Swayam held
their respective girlfriends wrist making sure they would not leave but Taani
and Sharon get off their grip
</font>

<font color="#3300FF">Itna maza, kyun aa raha hai

Tune hawa mein bhaang milaya</font>

<font color="#FF0000">Taani sings as she twirls around Rey</font>


<font color="#3300FF">Itna maza, kyun aa raha hai

Tune hawa mein bhaang milaya

</font>

<font color="#FF0000">Sharon sings roaming
around the place while Swayam follows her</font>


<font color="#3300FF">Dugna nasha, kyun ho raha hai

Aankhon se meetha tune khilaya</font>


<font color="#FF0000">Taani and Sharon both Sing and Dance
while pointing at Swayam and Rey</font>


<font color="#3300FF">Ho teri malmal ki kurti gulabi ho gayi

Manchali chaal kaise nawaabi ho gayi, toh?</font>


<font color="#FF0000">Rey and Swayam start singing and
start coming closer to Taani and Sharon</font>


<font color="#3300FF">Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari

Toh seedhi saadi chhori sharaabi ho gayi

Haa Jeans pahen ke jo tune maara thumka

Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi (x2)</font>


<font color="#FF0000">Then all four of them start dancing
together and doing masti together</font>


<font color="#3300FF">Teri kalaai hai, haathon mein aayi hai

Maine maroda toh lagti malaai hai</font>


<font color="#FF0000">Rey holds Taani wrist and pulls her
towards him </font>


<font color="#3300FF">Mehenga padega ye chaska malaai ka

Upvaas karne mein teri bhalaai hai</font>


<font color="#FF0000">Swayam is about to eat a sweet but
Sharon steals it and eats it</font>


<font color="#3300FF">Ho bindiya teri mehtaabi ho gayi</font>


<font color="#FF0000">Swayam puts a bindiya on Sharon's
forhead

</font>

<font color="#3300FF">Dil ke armaanon mein behisaabi ho gayi</font>


<font color="#FF0000">Rey makes an attempt to kiss Taani
but fails as She runs away</font>


<font color="#0000FF">Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari

Toh seedhi saadi chhori sharaabi ho gayi

Haa Jeans pahen ke jo tune maara thumka

Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi (x2)</font>


<font color="#FF0000">They all start spraying water at each
other through the water guns

Swayam goes closer to Sharon and Rey
tries the same with Taani

</font>

<font color="#3300FF">Kyun 'no-vacancy' ki, hothon pe gaali hai

Jabki tere dil ka kamra toh khaali hai

(kamra toh khaali hai...)</font>


<font color="#FF0000">Swayam keeps going after Sharon as
she keeps blushing away from him</font>


<font color="#3300FF">Mujhko pata hai re

Kya chahata hai tu

Boli bhajan teri

Neeyat Qawwali hai</font>


<font color="#FF0000">Rey keeps coming in Taani's way and
she keeps pushing him away</font>


<font color="#3300FF">Zulmi ye haazir-jawaabi ho gayi

Tu toh har taale ki aaj chaabi ho gayi, toh?</font>


<font color="#FF0000">Rey and Swayam bow down infront of
Taani and Sharon asking for forgiveness</font>


<font color="#3300FF">Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari

Toh seedhi saadi chhori sharaabi ho gayi

Haa, Jeans pahen ke jo tune maara thumka

Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi (x2)</font>


<font color="#FF0000">Both Taani and Sharon forgive their
boyfriends' and they all start dancing with the crowd</font>


<font color="#3300FF">Haan, bole re zamana kharabi ho gayi

Haan, bole re zamana kharabi ho gayi...

</font>

Rey and Swayam take
their girlfriends to somewhere they can be alone


Swayam brings Sharon to the rehearsal hall and Rey takes
Taani to the fire exit


The Bhang effect
was still on them but they were lost in each other's eyes …


"Meri galti
kya thi?"
Swayam asked with a cute pout


"Galti
kaisi galti?"
Sharon asked confused


"Jab main
aaya toh tumne mujhse teek se baat nahi ki aur uss Shivam ke saath thi …"


"Oh voh!" … Sharon
understood what he was talking about … "Actually
aaj tumne itna time lagaya aane mein … Main tumhe miss kar rahi thi"
Sharon
answered with a cute pout


"Oh toh tum
mujhse upset thi kyunki main itna time lagaya …"


"Haa …"


"Okay ab se
jab bhi tum chaho, whenever, wherever I am … You just call me … Dekhna agle 10
minutes mein pahunch jaaunga"
Swayam said and cupped her face


"Sacchi?"


"Agar
Traffic hua toh thoda aur time lagega"
Swayam answered


Sharon started hitting his chest, punishing him for ruining such
a romantic mood


"I love you
Swayam"
Sharon spoke when she stopped hitting him


"I love you
too and I will always love you"
Swayam replied


They again got lost in each other's eyes which was only
filled with love


In the Fire Exit, Taani was resting her head on Rey's
shoulder while Rey had his arm wrapped around her waist … Their silence was
speaking for them


Suddenly Rey broke the silence, "Taani"


"Hmm …" She
sweetly moaned


"I'm sorry" Rey made a
sorrowful expression


"Sorry
kyun?"
Taani said as she jerked up looking in Rey's eyes trying to
find out what's wrong


"Voh aaj
kal main tumhe time nahi de paa raha hun …"


But Taani interrupted him "Rey
please … Main samjhti hun ki aapke paas bahut kaam hai isliye aap mujhe time
nahi de paa rahe hai … But please promise me agar humne plan banaya aur achanak
se kaam aaya toh please mujhe pehle se inform karna … aapko pata hai uss din
voh waiter mere paas atleast 5 baar aaya aur main kuch nahi keh paayi"


"Uske liye
bhi sorry"
Rey said as he held his one ear indicating sorry


"It's okay
but aage humari date mat bhulna Okay!"


"Yes Madam" Rey put
his hand up in salute …


Taani smiled at his small gesture and he got lost in her
smile … He didn't realise when he started moving closer to her … She saw him leaning
in and her heart beat increased rapidly … Their lips met into a soft, gentle
kiss but still sharing their emotions with them … Soon later they broke the
kiss


Taani was blushing profusely and Rey could not help but just
stare at her …


"I love you
Rey"
Taani said softly breaking the silence


"I love you
too Taani"
Rey replied and pulled her into a hug …


They were lost in their hug filled with love …


Okay … I'm finally done … Wow this turned out longer than
expected … I know bahut bura hai ... I can't really write romantic scenes so I'm Ready for all the rotten tomatoes which are on their way ... So this Dare was given by Toshi Dii ... And Yaa Ninja Monkeys All The Way !!😛


Edited by TaaReyD3_Neha - 12 years ago

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-CussTheWorldUp thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
After reading this OS I can say that Monkeys truly rock! B-)

Neha, girl, this was so so so amazing. Even I am not good with romantic scenes and stuff but this was amazing. Seriously. The song. The start, the whole description.. Evrything was simply wow! I loved it! Muah! <3

Ninja Monkeys all the way!
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#3
nice os...
full of fun...
loved it
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#4
awwwieee...it was soo cute and jus so perfect...
loved it alott ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Taarey in Holi party with bhang all around is so much fun lol. Love Shani plan to make their boyfriends jealous lol... Lovely OS Taarey romance was awsome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awsm i luv it
spl song haaye so much fun
i wish palki use in D3 awsm i luv it
thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Awesome OS!! I really loved it! Amazing work girl!
Tht truely a really cute and sweet os! And awweee!! The ending swaron and taarey being so cute their talks were just so adorable!!

Really loved this OS!
Awesome work!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Amazing OS
It was just awesome
Really enjoyed reading it :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Awww, it was adorableee!!!!! I loved it, n yayyy monkeys rule!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
ahhh loved it...
truely awesum
njyed to de core

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