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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

res

unres

yipeee

me first

party!!! 🥳🤪

lets dance!!!

sorry main yha pm ke pehle hi aa gayi...

but why didnt you pm me 😕😕

wow

amazing os

loved it

really well written 👏👏

loved reading it

my god the letter was so beautiful

haii!!

😳

please do write ore and do pm me 😃😃

Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely OS.. Very well written. 😊

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Vishaka

@-Vishaka-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

Thats somthing made me cry...

I being emotional person still gathered streagth to read this OS further and further...

Ahhh...description each painfull moment u have penned down very nicely with bit of emotion...

I really like beautiful concept of this OS...

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

touchinggg😊 awsome work 😊😊😊

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 12 years ago

ive read this one before bro... comment nahi kiya tha but i loved it... it was something that made me cry... how pure one's love can be.. you showed it via this os.. how truly one can love it was there... there journey together... his support to her for getting her out of her turmoil and vulnerable situations.. their childhood their love .. aww i loved it.. it was hell touchy...

you made your partner cry dude...

but it was awesome...

Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 12 years ago

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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

res

unres😉

beautiful...👏

such a lovely os👏

this was awesome..👏

the way you explained it...they chilhood memories ❤️

the problems the marriage..

everything was beautiful👍🏼

a very touching story indeed🤗

plz do keep writing...

Edited by arsha_vrushan - 12 years ago

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

I remmebr this OS!!!

i had tears in my eyes the first ime I read it!!!

and that happened again when I read it!!!

its a really heart touching piece of writing!!!

a very lovely and beautifully written OS!!!

Great Job!!!!

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Rae

@sweetbutbroken

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

oh wow 😲

what a beautiful os

the letter was brilliant i was actually crying by then end

thanks so much for the pm 😊

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kshitija

@--Kshitz--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

Res
unres
the best os bhai...
Loved it a lot se bhi jyada...no words in front of such a wonderfully piece...
U made me cry literally...
Firstly Sharons pain n love for her dad...swayams care n love for her was well written...the way u showed both of them was superb...
The flashback of mulberry tree,school bench,ashi was supercool ha...was awesome
the accident i thought sharons no more...bt no...happy...
Moving to Delhi, new life, kids they became big...then sharons cancer did not expect that...sach me...bt the pain both faced...m speechless...the end they will meet again...
Loved the way u wrote in letter...
This is the best os...n i think ye apka sad vala tha...
Bhai aisa aur bhi likho...i just loved it...!!!!

Edited by KS_SWARON - 12 years ago